1、2017-9-15刘 晓折衷式折衷式(Semi-Block Style)Dear Sir or Madam,(Para1)(Para2)(Para3)Yours(sincerely),Lihua 信件写作流程信件写作流程1、仔细审题，明确写作要求、仔细审题，明确写作要求一审一审文体文体：二审二审时态、人称时态、人称：三审三审要点要点：2、列出提纲，构建框架结构、列出提纲，构建框架结构-框架框架 -要点分布要点分布 -逻辑关系逻辑关系 -语言（词汇、语法）语言（词汇、语法）（动词、连接成分、可用句型）（动词、连接成分、可用句型）格式格式正确，正确，语言得体；语言得体；时态前后照应人称时态前后照应
2、人称上下一致上下一致；要点齐全，要点齐全，逻辑逻辑清晰清晰2017-9-15刘 晓3、依据依据提纲，提纲，扩展成文扩展成文紧扣提示紧扣提示，适度发挥，适度发挥，扩展成句，扩展成句，连句成文。连句成文。尽量使用较丰富的词汇和语法结构尽量使用较丰富的词汇和语法结构。4、核查文章，适度修改。、核查文章，适度修改。格式正确格式正确要点齐全要点齐全语言语言准确准确衔接自然衔接自然2017-9-15刘 晓 求助信求助信内容要点内容要点：-写信目的写信目的 -说明困难说明困难 -请求帮助请求帮助 -感谢并感谢并期待期待答复答复2017-9-15刘 晓 求助信求助信起首句（起首句（the opening se
3、ntence）Im writing to ask you a fovor.Would you do me a favor?结束语结束语 (the closing sentence)I sincerely hope you can I am looking forward to your early reply.Hope for an early reply I would be grateful if you could I would appreciate it if you could 求助信求助信表示求助的常用句式表示求助的常用句式 Would you be so kind as to?
4、Is it possible that?I sincerely hope that you can 2017-9-15刘 晓 假如你是李华，暑假参加了某假如你是李华，暑假参加了某微信公众号（微信公众号（Wechat official account）举行的英语原版书阅）举行的英语原版书阅读活动，并写了一篇书评（读活动，并写了一篇书评（a book review）。现你用英语给）。现你用英语给外教外教Sam写一封信，希望他能帮你当面写一封信，希望他能帮你当面批改书评，内容包括：批改书评，内容包括：简要介绍活动简要介绍活动提出请求提出请求提议见面时间提议见面时间注意：注意：词数词数80次左右次左右
5、1.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯可适当增加细节，使行文连贯文体文体人称人称(3)(3)时态时态(4)(4)要点要点求助信求助信第一人称第一人称一般现在时一般现在时一般将来时一般将来时写信目的写信目的求助内容求助内容结束语结束语1、仔细审题，明确写作要求、仔细审题，明确写作要求original English booksEnglish originals 2017-9-15Dear,(Para1)(Para2)Yours(sincerely),Li Hua 2、列出提纲，构建框架结构、列出提纲，构建框架结构请求帮助请求帮助 提出请求提出请求&约定时间约定时间感谢并期待答复感谢并期待答复说明困难说明
6、困难写信目的写信目的根据交流对象根据交流对象选用选用称呼称呼和和结尾礼语结尾礼语Dear Sam,Yours respectfully,Yours truly,Yours sincerely,介绍活动介绍活动 要点罗列要点罗列 ask you a favor sign up for a reading activity and write a book review help me correct it/make some corrections meet after class on Friday/spare me some time thanks and expectations3、依据依
7、据提纲，提纲，扩展成文扩展成文 ask you a favor I am writing to ask you a favor.I am Li Hua,a student from our school.I am writing to ask you a favor.highly related loosely related 3、依据依据提纲，提纲，扩展成文扩展成文 sign up for a reading activity and write a book review As a keen lover of English books,I signed up for an English
8、 origial reading activity during the summer vocation.I wrote a book review on my favorite book Jane Eyre.As a keen lover of English books,I signed up for a reading activity during the summer vocation,where I read some English originals and wrote a book review.Supporting+Keynon-restrictive clause3、依据
9、依据提纲，提纲，扩展成文扩展成文 help me correct it/make some corrections I am not sure whether I have got my idea across,so I sincerely hope you can help me to correct it and give me some advice on writing.Being poor in writing,I am worried there might be some mistakes.Would you be so kind as to help me make some
10、corrections?Supporting+KeyUsing a question to be polite3、依据依据提纲，提纲，扩展成文扩展成文 meet after class on Friday/spare me some timession If possible,can I meet you after class On Friday?If you are avialable after class on Friday,please tell me and I will meet you in your office.Can you spare me some time and
11、tell me when so that I can go to meet you?ConcessionConcessionResult3、依据依据提纲，提纲，扩展成文扩展成文 thanks and expectation Id be grateful if you could give me a hand.Looking forward to your kind reply.2017-9-15刘 晓Dear Sam,(I am Li Hua,a student from our school.)I am writing to ask a favor of you.As a keen love
12、r of English books,I signed up for a reading activity during the summer vocation,where I read some English originals and wrote a book review on my favorite book Jane Eyre.But I am not sure whether I have got my idea across,so I sincerely hope you can help me to make some corrections and give me some
13、 advice on writing.Can you spare me some time and tell me when so that I can go to meet you?Id be grateful if you could give me a hand.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua格式、要点、语言格式、要点、语言4、核查文章，适度修改、核查文章，适度修改cohesive and logical2017-9-15刘 晓Dear Sam,(I am Li Hua,a student from our school.)I am writing to ask a favor of you.范文（来不及打了）范文（来不及打了）Id be grateful if you could give me a hand.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua4、核查文章，适度修改、核查文章，适度修改2017-9-15刘 晓
