1、高考英语开放式作文高考英语开放式作文用自己的语言对画面进行简明、清楚叙述 紧承叙述，引出观点（话题）（力求自然、准确）联系实际，摆事实，讲道理（力求深度、力度）综合上文，再申主旨（力求完整、有力）开放作文的四个步骤：开放作文的四个步骤：起起承承转转合合描图描图-解图解图-议图议图-圆图圆图In your spoken English class,your teacher shows you the following picture.You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.Some peop
2、le look confident,but what they actually have in their head is far from enough.一篇好的开放性作文什么样的？一篇好的开放性作文什么样的？As is shown in the picture,a half-empty bottle is going to stick a label of“full”on its body,feeling proud and confident.The picture seems to be reflecting a kind of social phenomenon.We might
3、often meet some people who look confident,trying to impress others with their“rich”knowledge.However,just like the bottle in the picture,what they really know is just a little.What they actually have in their head is far from enough.As an old saying goes,empty bottles make the loudest noise.Therefor
4、e,its wise to enrich ourselves with knowledge and try to make our head full.起起承承转转合合描图描图（结合图）议论（结合图）议论 如何如何“起起”？1.As is shown in the picture,.2.As we can see from the picture,.4.In the picture we can see that.5.From the picture we can see that.3.As can be seen from the picture,.6.As the picture indi
5、cates,there is/are sb.doing.描图描图如何描图？如何描图？如何如何“承承”？1.The picture seems to.2.The picture tries to.3.The picture conveys a message that.4.It is a common phenomenon in our daily life.5.It is quite a common scene in the society.6.Such a situation seems common in our society.图中含义图中含义如何表达？如何表达？如何如何“转转”？1.
6、However,just like the in the picture,.2.If,.注意注意:“转转”的方式非常灵活，难以有固定的方式非常灵活，难以有固定的的 模式，关键与前文逻辑一致。模式，关键与前文逻辑一致。1、然而，真实的情况是、然而，真实的情况是.2、如果不这样、如果不这样,会有啥结果会有啥结果高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）如何如何“合合”？1.Therefore，.结论结论 2.Thus，.3.So.4.In conclusion，.5.Only in this way can.高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张P
7、PT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）漫画理解作文审图立意三步骤漫画理解作文审图立意三步骤 一审细节（抓要点）一审细节（抓要点）二审角度（找可能性）二审角度（找可能性）三审优选立意（拓展主题句）三审优选立意（拓展主题句）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）漫画的漫画的画面画面 细节细节漫画的漫画的夸张夸张 寓意寓意 (与现实的矛盾之处）与现实的矛盾之处）细节细节夸张夸张寓意寓意Dont copy others way of solving the problem.Do everything in the right way.
8、读图与立意读图与立意细节细节高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）类型：现象型类型：现象型特点：有人有物特点：有人有物要素：人，门，要素：人，门，“拉拉”细节细节2：汗水代表什么？汗水代表什么？门呢？门呢？“拉拉”呢？呢？细节细节1：脸朝外没看标示脸朝外没看标示审 图高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）抓细节 揭寓意要素：人，门，要素：人，门，“拉拉”门门-目标、理想、工作、学习、困难，具体的某目标、理想、工作、学习、困难，具体的某一件事等一件事等标示标示“拉拉”-方法、建议、指令、措
9、施、策略、方法、建议、指令、措施、策略、规则等规则等例：例：In my opinion,the door refers to a problem needed to be tackled,while the sign“Pull”is just like the suggestions we can get in our daily life.人细节：汗人细节：汗-努力、能力、经验、态度等努力、能力、经验、态度等 没看见标示没看见标示-问题所在：问题所在：“睁眼瞎睁眼瞎”、“盲盲目行事目行事”、“固执蛮干固执蛮干”、“急于成事急于成事”等现等现象象高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高
10、考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）评分标准：评分标准：文章是否扣题文章是否扣题-描述与主题一致，自圆其说描述与主题一致，自圆其说结构是否完整结构是否完整-三部分三部分内容是否健康内容是否健康-乐观向上乐观向上逻辑是否清晰逻辑是否清晰-议论要有逻辑性议论要有逻辑性语言是否准确语言是否准确-用词恰当，无语法错误用词恰当，无语法错误交际是否得体交际是否得体-情境，身份等情境，身份等高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）正确的立意正确的立意：1、方法决定成功和失败。、方法决定成功和失败。Sometimes,it is the method
11、 you apply that determines your success or failure.In my opinion,this conveys the message that one should always make clear of the right way to reach ones goal before devoting oneself to it,otherwise,you might go in the completely wrong direction and will not succeed no matter how hard you try just
12、as the man does.To my understanding,what holds the most significant key to success is the way we do things,rather than how hard we throw ourselves in.From what the picture illustrates,we could realize that even if we try hard for our goal,we may still fail if we neglect the way to work on it.And it
13、is from the picture that we know doing something with the wrong method can never lead us to success we desire,even if we work hard.高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）正确的立意正确的立意：2、有能力没方法无法成功。Although we possess great abilities,if we always stick to the wrong methods,not only will it restri
14、ct our thinking but it will prevent our further development.The picture has a profound significance in our daily life,which indicates the fact that we succeed not because of our ability but our ways to solve the problems we encounter.高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）正确的立意正确的立意：3、具体问题具体分
15、析。、具体问题具体分析。People sometimes do things without any further thinking.4、做事应目标明确方法正确、做事应目标明确方法正确。The picture indicates that we should use an appropriate way to realize our aim and goals.The message conveyed is that we should always find the correct approach to things.From my point of view,what the pict
16、ure conveys to us is that before going for something or pursuing your goals,it is very important to make sure that where your dream lies or if you are on the right way that leads to your goals.高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）正确的立意正确的立意：5、遇事要学会变通，方法要应时改变。、遇事要学会变通，方法要应时改变。In my opinion,t
17、hey should not always follow their past experience;they should observe the situation each time and make proper reaction.6、不要急于求成，而应冷静反思。、不要急于求成，而应冷静反思。In reality,we also need to think over before we deal with a problem in order to find the best solution.7、劲要使在刀刃上。、劲要使在刀刃上。With persistent endeavor/ha
18、rd work in the right direction,we are bound to make a success.高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）正确的立意正确的立意：8、不要盲目自大，要善于听取建议。、不要盲目自大，要善于听取建议。We,teenagers,shouldnt make light of the suggestions given by others on the way to success.What the picture tends to get across to us is that we shou
19、ld follow someone elses suggestions.9、认清形势找到正确的方法。、认清形势找到正确的方法。The picture vividly conveys the message that whenever we do something,we are supposed to be sensible of the situation first and then select the right way to finish it.高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）One possible version:As
20、is shown in the picture,there is a man who is trying to open a door by pushing it very hard.Without doubt,he will fail because the door is supposed to be pulled open.He is getting into a wrong way.Just like the case in the picture,sometimes when we face some difficulties or meet some challenges,it i
21、s in such a hurry that we get down to solving them without thinking twice about the right means.As a result,we cant get them done at all.Therefore,once a problem comes,it is more important for us to analyze it first and find out how to solve it.Only in this way can we reach our target.After all,attitude is not everything.高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）高考英语漫画类开放作文写作指导（19张PPT）
