1、书面表达（三）书面表达（三）-A letter of giving advice 写作要点：写作要点：1.建议信：建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3.基本框架：基本框架：开头（开头（beginning）-开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(state your idea)主体主体(body)-对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)结尾结尾(ending)-呼应开头，重申观点(resta
2、te your opinion.)4.注意事项：注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。3）符合英文信件的基本格式常用套语常用套语A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1After I read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorry to know that 2I am very glad to
3、hear that you want to3I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter4.I am writing to you for the purpose of-5.I am writing to share some advice with you.6.You have asked me for my advice with regard to.and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions.7.You have asked me for my advice about Engl
4、ish learning.8.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to 9.I am writing to express my views concerning.10.Im writing to persuade you to.11.It is my pleasure to offer you some advice on12.B.表达建议（表达建议（body）1.first，firstly，secondlythen，after that，in the endfinallyMeanwhile,whats mor
5、e2.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 3.I would like to suggest/recommend that4.If I were you,I would5.You may consider doing6.It would seem to me that you could7.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following actions.8.I wonder if you have considered the following.9.When it come
6、 to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you can10.First of all.I think it would be better if.我想如果你能-可能会更好11.Here Id like to give my advice on12.Here I would like to suggest that.C.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式 1.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。2.I hope you
7、will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。4.I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.5.I feel that it would be beneficial if you
8、 stick to it.6.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.7.Please take my advice into consideration and make a final decision.Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help写作模板写作模板模板一：模板一：Dear _,You have asked me for my advice about_(问题问题)，and I will try to make some co
9、nductive suggestions here.In my opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions:_(建议内容建议内容).I hope youll find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details.Good luck with your _(祝愿祝愿).Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模板二：模板二：Dear _(对象对象)，I am writin
10、g to express my views concerning _(问题问题).First and for the most _(建议一建议一);in addition_(建议二建议二);whats more _(建议三建议三).I hope youll find these proposals useful.Yours sincerely,Li MingDear_,You have asked me for my advice with regard to _,and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my humble
11、 opinion(依我拙见依我拙见),you would be wise to take the following actions:_.I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Good luck with you.Yours,XXX Dear_,Im writing to persuade you to _.First of all,I think it would be better if _.Second
12、ly,_.Furthermore,_ Last but not least,_ I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,_Dear_,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on _.Imglad to write the letter to you on _.Here are a few suggestions gor your ref
13、erence.First,it is important to _.As youll _.Then,it also helps ifyou _.Besides,it should be a good idea to _.Because_.you can also _.Im sure that_.Please let me know without hesitation if you need any help next Time.in the future.Sincerely yours,Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my
14、 advice on how to (引出主题引出主题).Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to ,Then,it also helps to .Besides,it should be a good idea to .You can also .(此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建议的句式提出建议)As to ,I suggest (有时根据需要有时根据需要具体到某一反面具体到某一反面).In addition,(其他建议其他建议).Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心以行动的信心和决心
15、).Im looking forward to (表达愿望表达愿望).Sincerely yours,Li Hua 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter来信向你咨询来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：要点：参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班；看中文书刊、电视；看中文书刊、电视；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。给出。Dear Peter,Dear Peter,Im glad to rec
16、eive your letter asking Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ well._ _ _Best wishes,Best wishes,Li HuaLi HuaDear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few su
17、ggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers,and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese s
18、ongs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try and write to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes,Li Hua假如你是李明，学校领导和老师担心同学们浏览不健康的网站，关闭了教室内电脑的网络浏览功能，你们感到难过
19、，请你给校长写一封信，劝说校长开通教室内的网络。注意：1。信中要包括下表中的所有内容；2。词数：120左右 3。信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。事由教室内的电脑不能上网，建议学校开通网络原因1、有利于查找资料；2、浏览新闻，了解信息；3、作为高中生，我们正在形成自己的判断力Dear Headmaster,Im writing to persuade you to let us surf the Internet in the classroom.We know you are afraid that we maybe exposed to unhealthy websites.Actu
20、ally,every coin has two sides,we still think that surfing the Internetcan bring us more advantages.First of all,I think it would be better if we could surf the Internetbecause there is a wide range of learning resources on the Internet.Weshould make good use of it.Furthermore,we can broaden our hori
21、zonsby reading various news online.Last but not least,as high school students,we are building up our sense of judgement.Given chances,weare sure that we will learn how to stay away from unhealthy websites.I do hope you can take my advice into consideration and make a final decision三个步骤Step 1 List th
22、e key pointsStep 2 Make sentences Step3.Form a passage and polish为了迎接即将到来的期末考试，你校要取消所有的体育课。请你以学生王丽的身份给校长写一封信，建议不要取消体育课。注意：1.词数：120左右；2.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearHeadmaster,Imwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerningourschoolsdecisionthatallphysicaleducationshouldbecancelled.注意衔接词使用注意衔接词使用:表先后次序：表先后次序：First,second
23、,third.Finally Firstly,secondly，eventually to begin with/to start with,at last 递进关系：递进关系：furthermore；moreover；not only.but also.；not.but.；,besides；in other words；on the one hand.，on the other hand.；meanwhile；at the same time；如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分整体三部分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending 小结；呼应主题
