1、A1Unit 1 建议信 2016.9.12 A2一、什么是建议信？建议信通常包括：1.说明写信目的。2 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告。3.表达希望采纳建议并期盼回复。A3二、建议信常用语料 1.与某人交朋友 make friends with sb.2.守信用 keep ones word/promise 3.相互信任 trust each other 4.与某人同甘共苦 share happiness and sorrows with sb.5.向某人求助 turn to sb.for help 6.帮助某人摆脱困境 help sb.out 7.建立真正的友谊 build up true
2、friendship A4常用句式 1.Im writing to draw your attention to the fact that 翻译：我写信让你注意这个事实.2.I noticed that recently you often went to 翻译：我注意到你最近经常去.3.To solve the problem,in my mind,For one thing for another,Lastly,it would also be a good idea if you 翻译：依我之见，为了解决这个问题，首先.其次.最后，如果你能.A5常用句式 4.I hope you wi
3、ll find these suggestions useful.翻译：我希望你会发现这些建议很有用。5.I hope that you can take my suggestions into consideration.翻译：我希望你能接受我的建议。A6三、建议信模板：（要求熟背：参考范文)为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEARTTOHEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1表示理解并给予安慰；2提出建议并说
4、明理由。A7注意：1词数120左右；2信中不能出现与本人相关的真实信息；3信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n.脾气，情绪Hi Worried，Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at themoment._ Yours，JamieA8审题本篇作文为写回信，为一篇应用文，但其格式已经给出，格式问题无需考虑。主要要求考生写出正文。审题时，需要解决好如下问题：一、写什么？这一信息包括在试题的背景介绍和内容要点两个部分之中。A9审题写信的背景：署名为Worried的同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气
5、，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。内容要点：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。A10如何写？二、包括两个层次的问题：首先，文章的布局谋篇，哪个先写，哪个后写。按照常理，应该先“表示理解并给予安慰”，然后再“提出建议并说明理由”。其次，解决好形式与内容的统一。“表示理解并给予安慰”主要是论述，为说理。“提出建议并说明理由”主要是说明，建议或指导别人如何做，通常使用祈使句等表示建议的句型。本篇作文兼有议论和说明。A11考虑什么因素？三、时态、人称、词数等。本文的基调为现在范畴的时态，人称以第二人称为主。注意在行文中使用一些高级句型，提高作文档次。词数要求为120左右。A12范文 Hi_
6、Worried，Im_sorry_to_know_that_you_are_having_such_a_bad_time_at_the_moment.Im writing to draw your attention to the fact that the truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong,so you dont have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control your temp
7、er so that you may not do or say anything youll regret.Here are three useful tips：A13 First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second,go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an
8、 effective(有效的)way to get rid of your anger.Lastly,it would also be a good idea if you keep optimistic(乐观的）about your future.Such a positive attitude（态度）towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.A14 I hope that you can take my suggestions into consideration and feel calmer soon.Yours，Jamie
9、A15超级仿写（Homework)假如你是李华，你的好友（李磊）最近经常和一些朋友去网吧、游戏厅玩，有时甚至旷课。请你根据下面要点写一封信，对他进行劝诫。要点包括：1.你写信的目的；2.你观察到他最近的情况；3.告诉他慎交朋友。A16 注意：1.参考词汇：网吧（Internet Bar）,游戏厅（Internet Center），旷课（be absent from school）2.词数100左右。3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4.开头和结束语已为你写好。Dear Li Lei，_ Yours,LihuaA17 Dear Li Lei,I am writing to draw your
10、attention to the fact that Friendship with a man is friendship with his virtue.I think I have something really serious to communicate with you.I noticed that recently you often went to the Internet Bar and the Game Center together with several friends.Sometimes,you are even absent from school in ord
11、er to play games with your friends.A18 Friends play an important part in our lives,so we have to make friends carefully.True friends will never ask us to do something wrong and I dont think the friends around you are your true friends.Its very important for you to think about the problem I talked about.I hope that you can take my suggestions into consderation and make a wise decision.Yours,Li Hua
