1、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so an
2、gry that she said to Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snowcapp
3、ed mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop for th
4、e night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To he
5、r great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that
6、 for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.But no more helicopters came and it was dark._ It
7、 was daybreak when Jane woke up._2016年10月浙江高考读后续写ReadThinkWrite1)5W1H2)organization3)language关键词关键词开头语开头语Predict the plot properly1)Actions动作动作2)Feelings情感情感3)Surroundings环境环境Get the main ideaRead for 5W1Hcontent who when where what Why main idea?On weekend in July,Jane was lost in the forest becaus
8、e she had quarreled with Tom.One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“Im g
9、oing to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly r
10、ealized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dar
11、k,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some
12、berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the tree
13、s made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.But no more helicopters came and it was dark._ It was daybreak when Jane woke u
14、p._In what order is the material developed?One weekend in July,As night was beginning to fall,Jane rose at the break of the day,But and it was getting dark again.It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Time Read for the organization阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One weekend in
15、July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”an
16、d walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“H
17、elp!”No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and h
18、er family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickly she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries
19、.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her f
20、rom above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.But no more helicopters came and it was dark._ It was daybreak when Jane woke up._With no path to follow,Jane,she turned ar
21、ound,hoping to Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that Jane rose,hungry and thirsty.If only she had not left her mobile phone Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Read for language细读两段续写的开头语，理顺续写段落的逻辑关系；围绕划定的10个关键词，合理创新故事情节。Para.1:But no more helicopters came and it was dark.How di
22、d Jane feel then?What did Jane do then?How did Jane struggle through the night?Para.2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up.Was Jane rescued?Who rescued Jane?How was she rescued?How did she feel then?Think浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20The underlined words where020304 yellow blousewalkedTomhelicopterJane
23、lakestreamclimbedat a distanceto her great joyClassify 10 key words into different groups.浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20Classify 10 key words into different groups._:Jane,Tom_:helicopter,yellow blouse_:walked,climbed_:lake,stream,at a distance_:to her great joycharactersactionsobjectssurroundingsfee
24、lings浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20A:actions A:actions 动作的丰富性动作的丰富性F:feelings F:feelings 情感表达的多样性情感表达的多样性S:surroundings S:surroundings 恰当运用环境描写恰当运用环境描写Write浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20He was so surprised that he stood there with his mouth open.Maybe ashamed of what he had done,he was about to turn
25、 away when I seized his arm quickly.I stared at him for several seconds and broke the silence,saying“Roy,trust me.I am willing to help you.”Having regretted what he had done,he couldnt hold back his tears,bent down and burst out crying with his head buried in his hands.Tears welling up in my eyes,I
26、picked him up and hugged him tightly.He put his head against my should,sobbing and saying“If I could turn the clock back,I wouldnt have stolen the money”.A:A:动作的丰富性动作的丰富性浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20F:F:情感表达的多样性情感表达的多样性 Janes feelingsIs that for me?“Tom!”“Help!”confused,hungry and thirsty.walked aw
27、ay,turned around,criedactionswordsthoughtslooks浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20 But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark again.Amid the dreadful darkness,strange sounds of wild beasts were heard.“If it werent for that stupid quarrel,I wouldnt be trapped here,”she thought to herself,regretfu
28、l tears clouding her eyes.Surrounded by the fear and tiredness,Jane felt exhausted and finally slid into sleep.“Tom,is that you?”she murmured.“Tom,help!”In her dream,she saw a man extending his arms towards her at a distance.It was day break when Jane woke up.After a washing,Jane continued to force
29、her way ahead.In the boundless search,she found it impossible to find a way out,which threw her into desperation.Fortunately,a helicopter flew overhead just at that moment.In no time did Jane rush to the rock and climb onto it.She waved her yellow blouse madly to the passing helicopter.To her great
30、joy,this time,the helicopter spotted her.The moment Jane was reunited with her husband,her tears clouded her vision.They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.thoughtssurroundingslookswords浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 201.Stepping out of the office,we felt a sense of relief w
31、ith the sun shining down over us.(Roy 续写)2.They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun.(范文)3.A ray of sunlight shines through the dark clouds,bringing warmth and hope to the world.4.Seeing the moon shining in the dark sky,he couldnt help thinking of the days that she spent wi
32、th Tom and her family.(王晨嵛)5.The cold wind blew violately in the gloomy air.(胡缨红)6.With the cold wind blowing,Jane had to.(姜玉萌)7.The sound of the stream sounded relaxing,which relieved Janes anxiety.(马莹昕)S:S:恰当运用环境描写恰当运用环境描写浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20 But no more helicopter came and it was gettin
33、g dark again.Exhausted and hopeless,Jane sat beside a tree,stretching her acing arms.“Had I not qualrrelled with Tom,I wouldnt have been here.”She was so regretful that tears welled up in her eyes.Since Jane already worn out,she quickly fall asleep beside the tree.It was day break when Jane woke up.
34、The sun shone through a break in the clouds.Jane walked along a stream,hoping to find the lake where Tom may camp at night.Suddenly,she heard a loud scream at a distance,“Jane,where are you?”To her great joy,it was Tom.They hugged tightly with each other,swearing that they will never leave each othe
35、r again.浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20Wind1.A gust of wind blew and parted the dropping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain.2.A cold breeze blew through the quiet park.3.A cold breeze wafted through my hair.S:S:恰当运用环境描写恰当运用环境描写win
36、d water sky一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳低垂的枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳低垂的枝条，就像卷起的窗帘。凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。凉爽的微风吹拂着寂静的公园。冷风吹拂过我的头发。冷风吹拂过我的头发。浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20Water1.The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered on its looking glass-clear surface.2.There was a brook not far away from here,rushing and sparkling between g
37、reen banks.3.At one point,the faint sound of water tumbling through the valley.水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。水是深蓝色的，阳光在透明的玻璃表面闪闪发光。离此不远，有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。离此不远，有一条小溪，在绿色的河岸间奔腾闪耀。在某处，潺潺的水声在山谷中奏响。在某处，潺潺的水声在山谷中奏响。浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20Sky1.They hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting
38、sun.2.By 3 oclock,the rain had stopped and the sky was a curdled gray burdened with lumps of clouds.3.Like a dim lamp,the moon shone above and the stars twinkled their eyes with curiosity.到三点的时候，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布。到三点的时候，雨停了，铅灰色的天空阴云密布。月亮像一盏昏暗的灯，从上面照下来，星星也好奇的眨着眼。月亮像一盏昏暗的灯，从上面照下来，星星也好奇的眨着眼。他们在落日的暖阳下紧紧拥抱在
39、一起。他们在落日的暖阳下紧紧拥抱在一起。浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 201.日本那些再现曲水宴的表演，有着不少日本那些再现曲水宴的表演，有着不少“中国元素中国元素”，但是由于现代年轻人对古代中国文化了解甚少，并不知道哪些元素来自中国。，但是由于现代年轻人对古代中国文化了解甚少，并不知道哪些元素来自中国。2.本着保证校车安全的原则，公安机关将会同教育行政等部门对校车驾驶人进行逐一审查，坚决清退不符合安全规定的校车驾驶人。本着保证校车安全的原则，公安机关将会同教育行政等部门对校车驾驶人进行逐一审查，坚决清退不符合安全规定的校车驾驶人。3.山寨文化是一种平民文化、草根文化
40、，自然有其存在的意义和价值，但山寨产品的泛滥则是中国知识产权意识不足的揭露与讽刺。山寨文化是一种平民文化、草根文化，自然有其存在的意义和价值，但山寨产品的泛滥则是中国知识产权意识不足的揭露与讽刺。4.神舟神舟7号宇宙飞船载着三位航天英雄胜利返回地球，这艘宇宙飞船是我们国家自行研制的，每一个中国人不能不为之骄傲。号宇宙飞船载着三位航天英雄胜利返回地球，这艘宇宙飞船是我们国家自行研制的，每一个中国人不能不为之骄傲。5.这家工厂虽然规模不大，但曾两次荣获省科学大会奖，三次被授予省优质产品称号，产品远销全国各地和东南亚地区。这家工厂虽然规模不大，但曾两次荣获省科学大会奖，三次被授予省优质产品称号，产品
41、远销全国各地和东南亚地区。6.杭州湾跨海大桥是一座由我国自行建造、自行设计、自行管理、自行投资的特大型交通基础设施，是我国跨海大桥建设史上的一个重要里程碑。杭州湾跨海大桥是一座由我国自行建造、自行设计、自行管理、自行投资的特大型交通基础设施，是我国跨海大桥建设史上的一个重要里程碑。7、为防止为防止东南亚地区东南亚地区发生的禽流感传入我国，国家质检总局和农业部今天联合发出通知，自即日暂行禁止进口来自疫区的禽类及其产品发生的禽流感传入我国，国家质检总局和农业部今天联合发出通知，自即日暂行禁止进口来自疫区的禽类及其产品。8.这家工厂虽然规模不大，但曾两次荣获省科学大会奖，三次被授予省优质产品称号，产品远销全国各地和东南亚地区。这家工厂虽然规模不大，但曾两次荣获省科学大会奖，三次被授予省优质产品称号，产品远销全国各地和东南亚地区。9.杭州湾跨海大桥是一座由我国自行建造、自行设计、自行管理、自行投资的特大型交通基础设施，是我国跨海大桥建设史上的一个重要里程碑杭州湾跨海大桥是一座由我国自行建造、自行设计、自行管理、自行投资的特大型交通基础设施，是我国跨海大桥建设史上的一个重要里程碑浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20浙江卷高考续写公开课课件 20
