1、Unit1 Science and scentists写作写作Period SixWritingAn opinion essay about the scientific spiritLearning Aims(学习目标)1.Learn how to express an opinion about the scientific spirit.2.Practice writing one.(重点难点重点难点)本单元的写作目标是“发表观点”。要求就有关科学家的精神进行分析并针对这些故事说出学生的看法。文章应有一定的人物描写，主要是介绍某科学家的基本信息及其事迹，针对科学家的生活、工作和学习发生的
2、故事，学生发表自己的观点。1.人物描写的写作步骤(1)总体介绍。(2)列举主要经历。(3)发表观点。2.语言特征(1)遵循真实性原则，进行客观描述。(2)简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。3.在写作过程中要注意人称的变化和时态的正确运用。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生地和出生日期、教育背景、经历、事迹等常用一般过去时。常用表达1.He/She was born in China on Nov.13,1968.2.He/She was an outstanding man/woman with the name of.3.He/She was born int
3、o a poor family.4.He/She studied at a local high school and graduated from Beijing University.5.He/She is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him/her.6.He/She devoted all his/her life to the work.7.He/She made great contributions to our country.8.He/She was highly thought
4、of by many people.9.He/She will live in the hearts of us forever.10.He/She devotes himself/herself to achieving his/her life goal.11.Some adjectives to describe the scientific spirit:knowledgeable，gifted，self-sacrificing，determined，brave，energetic，devoted，etc.写作练习写作练习01牛顿是世界著名的科学家，关于他的故事有很多，请你根据牛顿是世
5、界著名的科学家，关于他的故事有很多，请你根据他煮鸡蛋的故事，以他煮鸡蛋的故事，以“A Story of Newton”“A Story of Newton”写一篇文章，并据写一篇文章，并据此发表一下自己对科学精神的看法。此发表一下自己对科学精神的看法。词数词数100100左右左右。第一步审题谋篇 审题审题 写作要求是描述牛顿煮鸡蛋的故事。写作时应注意下面几点：写作要求是描述牛顿煮鸡蛋的故事。写作时应注意下面几点：1.1.确定文体：这是一篇夹叙夹议文，是学生熟悉的文体，写作中确定文体：这是一篇夹叙夹议文，是学生熟悉的文体，写作中应注意记叙文的六要素，以及学生的评论和观点。应注意记叙文的六要素，以
6、及学生的评论和观点。2.2.主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主，议论部分为一般现在时。主体时态：文章应以一般过去时为主，议论部分为一般现在时。3.3.主体人称：人称应该以第三人称为主，议论部分为第一人称。主体人称：人称应该以第三人称为主，议论部分为第一人称。谋篇谋篇 第一段：概括介绍。第一段：概括介绍。第二段：叙述故事。第二段：叙述故事。第三段：发表观点第三段：发表观点。第二步遣词造句 核心词汇核心词汇 1.1.最杰出最有天赋最杰出最有天赋的的_2.2.投入投入于于_3.3.煮鸡蛋煮鸡蛋 _4.4.不仅不仅而且而且_5.5.如此如此以至于以至于 _6.6.不是不是而是而是 _7.7.全神贯注全神
7、贯注于于_8.8.知识渊博知识渊博的的_the most outstanding and gifted the most outstanding and gifted be devoted tobe devoted tocook the eggscook the eggsnot only.but also.not only.but also.so.that.so.that.not.but.not.but.focus/concentrate onfocus/concentrate onknowledgeable knowledgeable 连词成句连词成句 1.1.牛顿是最杰出最有天赋的科学家之
8、一。牛顿是最杰出最有天赋的科学家之一。_2.2.牛顿是如此投入以至于他经常在日常生活中忘却小事。牛顿是如此投入以至于他经常在日常生活中忘却小事。(so.that.)(so.that.)_3 3.一个仆人为牛顿做饭。一个仆人为牛顿做饭。_Newton is one of the most outstanding and gifted scientists.Newton is one of the most outstanding and gifted scientists.Newton was so devoted that he often forgot the little Newton w
9、as so devoted that he often forgot the little things in his daily life.things in his daily life.A servant cooked for Newton.A servant cooked for Newton.4.4.他想要出去他想要出去。_5 5.他让牛顿自己煮鸡蛋。他让牛顿自己煮鸡蛋。_6 6.当仆人回来时，他发现正在锅里煮的不是鸡蛋而是他的怀表。当仆人回来时，他发现正在锅里煮的不是鸡蛋而是他的怀表。_He wanted to go out.He wanted to go out.He asked
10、 Newton to cook the eggs himself.He asked Newton to cook the eggs himself.When the servant came backWhen the servant came back，he found that not eggs he found that not eggs but his pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.but his pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.7.7.我们应该知识渊博。我们应该知识渊博。_8 8.我们
11、应该全神贯注于我们正在做的事情。我们应该全神贯注于我们正在做的事情。_We should be knowledgeable.We should be knowledgeable.We should focus on what we are doing.We should focus on what we are doing.第三步句式升级1.1.请用倒装句升级句请用倒装句升级句2 2_2 2.请用定语从句和现在分词短语作状语合并句请用定语从句和现在分词短语作状语合并句3 3、句、句4 4和句和句5 5_So devoted was Newton that he often forgot the
12、 So devoted was Newton that he often forgot the little things in his daily life.little things in his daily life.A servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go outA servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out，asking Newton to cook the eggs himself.asking Newton to cook the eggs himself.3.用用what引导的主语
13、从句和引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句改写句引导的表语从句改写句6_4.用用not only.but also.的倒装句合并句的倒装句合并句7和句和句8_When the servant came backWhen the servant came back，what he found was that what he found was that not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.pot.Not only
14、should we be knowledgeable but also we Not only should we be knowledgeable but also we should focus on what we are doing.should focus on what we are doing.第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一组成一篇篇100100词词左右的英语短文。左右的英语短文。参考范文A Story of NewtonNewton is one of the most outstan
15、ding and gifted scientists.So devoted was Newton that he often forgot the little things in his daily life.Once，a servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out，asking Newton to cook the eggs himself.However，when the servant came back，what he found was that not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.From the story we can learn that to be an outstanding scientist，not only should we be knowledgeable but also we should focus on what we are doing.Thank you!
