1、Parts of Sentence&Writing句子成分与写作句子成分与写作 Do you buy things online?What do you think of shopping online?convenientcheap all kinds of thingscant see the real thingscant try them ondishonestwait for a long time.Writing 网络购物这一消费模式近几年在中国迅猛发展,受到人们的喜爱,但网络购物让人欢喜让人忧。它究竟有何利弊呢?请以Shopping Online为题用表格中的信息写一篇80100
2、个词的短文,谈谈你的观点.（开头已给出，不计入词数）Advantages 1.Convenient 2.Be open for almost 24 hours a day 3.Disadvantages 1.Cant see the real things 2.Cant try them on 3.These years,shopping online develops very fast.But people never stop talking about its advantages and disadvantages.第一步第一步:审题审题 Examine the topic审题审题体
3、裁体裁 Style 人称人称 person时态时态 tense要点要点 information要求要求 request认真审题，在题干中划出相应内容审题审题 网络购物这一消费模式近几年在中国迅猛发展,受到们的喜爱。但网络购物让人欢喜让人忧。它究竟有何利弊呢?请以Shopping Online为题用表格中的信息写一篇不80100个词的短文谈谈你的观点。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）Advantages1.Convenient 2.Be open for almost 24 hours a day 3.Disadvantages 1.Cant see the real things 2.Cant t
4、ry them on 3.人称第一人称时态一般现在时态体裁话题作文议论文话题要点词数要求 These years,shopping online develops very fast.But people never stop talking about its advantages and disadvantages.Introduction(开篇点题）开篇点题）Main body（文章主体）（文章主体）Conclusion（总结）（总结）Disadvantages Your opinionsAdvantages1.Convenient2.Be open for almost 24 hour
5、s a day 3.1.cant see the real things2.Cant try them on 3.第二步：列出提纲（第二步：列出提纲（Outline）不要遗不要遗漏要点！漏要点！How can we write correct sentences?第三步：根据提纲写句子第三步：根据提纲写句子（我们该怎样写出正确的句子呢？）（我们该怎样写出正确的句子呢？）怎样能我们写正确的句子英语和汉语的语序是不同的。英语和汉语的语序是不同的。I read books goodwith my friendwhen we are free.英文句子都是由简单句的六大基本句型扩充得来。英文句子都是由
6、简单句的六大基本句型扩充得来。1.I dance.2.I love you.3.I am a student.4.She teaches us English.5.He made us laugh.6.There is a book on the desk.1.主语+谓语动词2.主语+谓语动词+宾语3.主语+系动词+表语4.主语+谓语动词+间接宾语+直接宾语 5.主语+谓语动词+宾语+宾语补足语6.There be+主语+其他简单句的六种基本句形简单句的六种基本句形划分句子成分，归纳基本句型。划分句子成分，归纳基本句型。Lets write sentences with the informa
7、tion given.1.Convenient 2.Be open for almost 24 hours a day3.Cant see the real things4.Cant try them on使用基本句型确保成分完整 Shopping online is very convenient.It is very convenient for us to go shopping on the Internet.To buy things on the Internet is very convenient.Sentences we may write主语+系动词+表语（S+V+P）优点
8、1.Convenient用基本句型写英文句子 We can shop online anytime we like.主语+谓语动词（S+V）The shops on the Internet are open for almost 24 hours a day.主语+系动词+表语（S+V+P）优点2.Be open for almost 24 hours a day 用基本句型写英文句子主语+谓语动词+宾语（S+V+O）缺点1.cant see the real things主语+系动词+表语（S+V+P）Its a problem that we cant see the real thin
9、gs.用基本句型写英文句子We cant see the real things while we are shopping online.主语+系动词+表语（S+V+P）We cant try them on before we get them.缺点2.Cant try them on 主语+谓语动词+宾语（S+V+O）用基本句型写英文句子Its impossible for us to try them on before we get them.Introduction(开篇点题）开篇点题）Main body（介绍观点）（介绍观点）Conclusion（总结）（总结）Disadvant
10、ages Your opinionsAdvantages1.Convenient2.Be open for almost 24 hours a day 3.1.cant see the real things2.Cant try them on 3.Write sentences with the information we dont know.用基本句型写英文句子第四步：添加关联词和过渡句完成作文第四步：添加关联词和过渡句完成作文注意添加关联词，过注意添加关联词，过渡句！书面要整洁！渡句！书面要整洁！表并列表并列 and,also,as well as,both and,Whats mor
11、e(而且),.表对比表对比 but,however,yet,although,while,.表条件表条件 if,unless 表原因表原因 because,because of,for,since ,as表结果表结果 so,therefore,as a result,sothat,suchthat表说明表说明 like,such as,for example.表顺序表顺序 first(ly),second(ly),first of all,then,next,finally.表总结表总结 in a word,in my opinion(以我之见)表目的表目的 in order to,so th
12、at Check your compositionsstyle、person、tense 、spelling 体裁体裁 人称人称 时态时态 拼写拼写 grammar、capital、punctuation 语法语法 大小写大小写 标点标点 information we know and dont know已知和未知要点已知和未知要点第五步：检查改错第五步：检查改错are openadvantages，they may be sometimesmakes,在时间允许的情况下可以先打草稿再抄写在时间允许的情况下可以先打草稿再抄写！第六步：书写规范第六步：书写规范,卷面整洁卷面整洁高分首先高分首先看
13、卷面！看卷面！Sample passage 参考范文Shopping OnlineThese years,shopping online develops very fast.But people never stop talking about its advantages and disadvantages.I like shopping online very much.I think its very convenient for us to go shopping on the Internet.The shops on the Internet are open for almos
14、t 24 hours a day,so we can buy something we want at any time if we like.Whats more,things on line is always cheaper,which saves lots of money.Of course,everything has its disadvantages.We cant see the real things while we are shopping online.So we are not sure whether they are good or not.Because we
15、 cant try them on,we dont know if they fit us well.Also,the owners of the shops online may be dishonest.But I believe there will be more rules to make them more honest.In a word,Im sure we can enjoy shopping online in the future.OK.Id like the mutton noodles,please.2022人教版英语中考复习书面表达专题课件How was/were+sth?n.宇航员宇航员6.5.4.3.2.1.书面表达SummaryThank you for listening!
