1、谋篇布局(下)卷面 结构 遣词造句谋篇布局基本结构TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT 1.DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE2.DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD (EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE)3.DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEECCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC例题假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报刊周五之际征集读者意见，请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：1.
2、说明你是该报的忠实读者2.赞赏该报优点1）兼顾国内外新闻2)介绍名人成功故事3.提出建议刊登指导英语学习的文章注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Editor-in-Chief.Congratulations on the 5th aniversary of Global Mirror!谋篇布局基本结构TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTFirstly,DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD.EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.Secondly,DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD.EEEEEEEEEEEEE
3、EEEEEE.Thirdly,DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD.EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEIn conclusion.CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC.实战练习篇章结构和段落结构 T 主题句 Topic SentenceD 拓展句 Developing SentenceE 解释句 Explanation 解释句 ExampleC 总结句 Concluding Sentence实战练习写作步骤 Step 1 审题 审要求审文体审人称审时态实战练习写作步骤 Step 1-审题 1.审要求书面表达试题一般由“情景”和“要求”两部分构成。“情景”中包括所
4、写材料的目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等，一般在书面表达题的前半部分；而“要求”一般在书面表达的后半部分，以“注意”形式给出，实际上是对考生提出的要求。因而考生对于题目所提供的说明，应认真分析，抓住索要表达的信息点。实战练习写作步骤 Step 1-审题 2.审文体中考书面表达的体裁一般有三大类：记叙文，说明文和应用文。具体形式有便条，日记，通知，书信，人物、事情、情景故事的描写，看图说话，缩写，扩写，改写等。审题时要审清文体，注意格式上的不同，避免出错。实战练习写作步骤 Step 1-审题 3.审人称审查书面表达题干中隐含的读者对象，即搞清楚此篇文章是“由谁写给谁”的。而读者对象有时没有明示，要
5、考生自己去进行判断。实战练习写作步骤 Step 1-审题 4.审时态根据情景判断短文需要的主体时态，既搞清楚要写的是什么时候的事，过去的就用过去时。比如日记，是叙述过去发生的事情，自然用过去时；通知多用将来时。实战练习写作步骤 Step 2 抓中心，列要点，列提纲 分析提示或图画、图标的观察和分析，按一定的逻辑顺序排列起来，找出最密切相关的要点，列出写作提纲抓住中心，紧扣要点不要任意发挥，画蛇添足也不要丢三落四，要点不全实战练习写作步骤 Step 3 选词组句(铅笔草稿)选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型将要点逐条表达出来避开生僻的词汇克服母语干扰例题假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global M
6、irror周报刊周五之际征集读者意见，请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：1.说明你是该报的忠实读者2.赞赏该报优点1）兼顾国内外新闻2)介绍名人成功故事3.提出建议刊登指导英语学习的文章注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Editor-in-Chief.Congratulations on the 5th aniversary of Global Mirror!写作步骤我是贵报的忠实读者=我非常喜欢你们的报纸=I am undoubtedly crazy about your newspaper.=I like your news
7、paper very much.=I am crazy about your newspaper.=I am undoubtedly crazy about your newspaper,and I keep the habit of reading your newspaper every day.=I am a big fan of your newspaper,and I keep the habit of reading your newspaper every day.写作步骤赞赏该报优点1 兼顾国内外新闻=(你们报纸上)有国内外新闻=Different kinds of news
8、about China and other countries can be read in your newspaper.=There is news about both(not only)China and(but also)other countries in your newspaper.=There is different kinds of news about both China and other countries in your newspaper.写作步骤赞赏该报优点2 介绍名人成功故事=名人成功故事被介绍在你们报纸上。=那些故事(关于名人成功经历的)被介绍到你们报纸
9、上。=Stories about famous peoples success experience are introduced in your newspaper.写作步骤提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章=I suggest that Global Mirror give us more articles about English learning.=I suggest that Global Mirror give us more articles to help us with our English learning.=I suggest that Global Mirror gi
10、ve us more articles to guide us in our English learning.=As a young student,I suggest that Global Mirror give us more articles to guide us in our English learning.写作步骤Step 4 连句成篇根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。在一过程中要注意选择恰当的表示并列、递进、因果或转折意义的过渡词，把所有要点、句子连接起来，使句与句意思连贯，结构衔接，力求准确生动、条理清楚。TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
11、TT.1.DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD.(EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE)2.DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD.(EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE)3.DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD.(EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE)CCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCC.实战练习Dear Editor-in-Chief,Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of G
12、lobal Mirror!I am a big fan of your newspaper,and I kept the habit of reading your newspaper everyday.Different kinds of news about both China and other countries can be read in your newspaper.Stories about famous peoples success experience are introduced in your newspaper.As a young student,I sugge
13、st that Global Mirror give us more articles to guide us in our English learning.I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular.Yours Li Hua写作步骤Step 5 检查纠错1.要点是否齐全2.格式是否正确3.词数是否合乎要求4.语法是否正确(包括句子结构、时态、语态、主谓一致等)5.单词是否误写，少写6.习语搭配是否得当7.字母大小写、标点符号是否正确例题假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报刊周五之际征集读者意见，请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：1.说明你是该报的忠实读者2.赞赏该报优点1）兼顾国内外新闻2)介绍名人成功故事3.提出建议刊登指导英语学习的文章注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Editor-in-Chief.Congratulations on the 5th aniversary of Global Mirror!
