1、抄改连扩列审书面表达如何组织作文如何组织作文书面表达六步法书面表达六步法审：认真审题，审：认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心及要求找出文章要表达的中心及要求,确定人称和时态。确定人称和时态。范文：节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。Li Ming 是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，假设你是他,请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇80-120词的短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。要点：(1)每天步行上学;(2)离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；（3）不用水时,记得关水龙头，循环使用水；（4）充分使用纸张（5）不使用塑料袋。参考词：on foot,turn off,tap(水龙头
2、),reuse,make full use of,plastic bag 写作要求：（1）内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；（2）不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息。审审如何列提纲如何列提纲：Para1:Para2:Para3:My name is Li Ming.I am a middle school student.I like having a low-carbon life.Its important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.（综述）开门见山，表明观点。（综述）开门见山，表
3、明观点。根据提示，概述事件。根据提示，概述事件。给出评论，发表己见给出评论，发表己见。e.g.I go to school on foot every day.When I am not using water,I always turn off the tap.I often reuse water.for example,when I finish washing the clothes,I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers.扩就是把提示信息扩写成句子，在适当的地扩就是把提示信息扩写成句子，在适当的地方添加事例方添加事例,
4、使文章内容完整，要点全面，是写使文章内容完整，要点全面，是写作的关键步骤。作的关键步骤。不用水时,记得关水龙头，循环使用水；合理恰当地运用合理恰当地运用关联词关联词和和过渡句过渡句是英语是英语写作的制胜法宝。它们不仅使你的文章结写作的制胜法宝。它们不仅使你的文章结构紧凑，衔接自然，而且可以有效地提升构紧凑，衔接自然，而且可以有效地提升作文档次。作文档次。1.When I am not using water,I always turn off the tap.I often reuse water.for example,when I finish washing the clothes,I
5、use the water to clean the floor and water flowers.2.I think saving paper is necessary,so I make full use of paper.格式格式是否有错是否有错 拼写拼写有无错误有无错误 语言语言是否用错是否用错 时态、语态时态、语态错误错误 标点标点错误错误 人称人称是否用错是否用错短文改错my name is Li Ming.I am a middle school student.I like have a low-carbon life.I go to school by foot every
6、 day.I always remember turning off the lights,the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom.When I was not using water,I always turn off the tap.I often reuse water,for example,when I finish washing the clothes,I use the water to clean the floor and water flower.I never use plastic bags.I think sav
7、e paper is necessary,so I often make full use of papers.Its important to us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.my-My have-having by-on turning-to turn was-is save-saving papers-paper to-forMy name is Li Ming.I am a middle school student.I like having a low-carbon life.I go to schoo
8、l on foot every day.I always remember to turn off the lights,the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom.When I am not using water,I always turn off the tap.I often reuse water,for example,when I finish washing the clothes,I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers.I never use plastic b
9、ags.I think saving paper is necessary,so I often make full use of paper.Its important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.a nice head(总总)a nicebody（分）（分）a nice ending（总）（总）将检查后的作文整洁地抄写在横线上 How to write a goodcomposition开头开头:开门见山开门见山中间中间结尾结尾:抓要点抓要点,列短语列短语短语扩句短语扩句找连接词找连接词连句成段连句
10、成段与主题相呼应，与主题相呼应，紧扣主题紧扣主题1、turn down 调低调低 （音量）（音量）2、too much rubbish and waste太多垃圾和废物太多垃圾和废物3、turn off the light 关灯关灯4、a lot of black smoke 大量的浓烟大量的浓烟 5、stop doing sth停止做某事停止做某事6、loud music嘈杂的音乐嘈杂的音乐7、throw away 扔掉扔掉8、recycling paper循环使用纸张循环使用纸张 9、save the earth 挽救地球挽救地球10 not riding in cars 不开车不开车11
11、 take part in 参加参加12 remember to throw rubbish in the bins 记住把垃圾扔进垃圾箱记住把垃圾扔进垃圾箱13 keep public places clean and beautiful 保持公共场所的干净美丽保持公共场所的干净美丽 14 bring a bag to go shopping 带口袋去购物带口袋去购物15 cut down 砍倒砍倒 16 in public Palace 在公共场所在公共场所17 call on呼吁呼吁 18 reuse 再利用再利用19 protect the environment 保护环境保护环境20
12、 stop pouring waste water into rivers and lakes 禁止往河里、禁止往河里、湖里排放废水湖里排放废水21 cut down the trees 砍树砍树22 use both sides of paper 用纸的两面用纸的两面23 reduce再循环再循环 24 clean up 打扫（或清除）干净打扫（或清除）干净1.If we try our best to protect the environment,the world will become more and more beautiful.2.Dont waste water.3.Take
13、 out the rubbish and throw it into dustbins.4.Its our duty to protect the environment.5.We should plant more trees and flowers around us.6.In a word,if everyone pays more attention to our environment,there will be less pollution and our life will be better.7.We should not cut down trees.8.I think on
14、e problem is that the air is badly polluted.9.We should take the bus or subway instead of driving.10.I think its my duty to live a low-carbon life.11.Today,the quality of our environment has become an important problem.怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面历你一定积累了许多
15、经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议谈谈你的建议.以以“How to learn English well”为题用为题用英语写一篇短文谈谈你的建议。英语写一篇短文谈谈你的建议。要点提示要点提示:1.听录音听录音英语歌曲，看英语电影英语歌曲，看英语电影;2.课堂上多讲英语，加入英语俱乐部课堂上多讲英语，加入英语俱乐部;3.读英语报纸和杂志读英语报纸和杂志;4.背诵英语美文背诵英语美文每天写日记每天写日记;参考词参考词 recite,keep diaries;要求要求1.词数：词数：80100词词(开头已给出，不计入总词数开头已给出，不计入总词数)2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。Homework:用书面表达六步法写这篇短文。用书面表达六步法写这篇短文。
