1、 I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.321闯关图CONTENT 回顾病句类型 把握病句标志 实战演练真题 DESTINYFREEDOM 01 DESTINYFREEDOM例1：他的无畏 精神 时刻 浮现 在我的
2、 眼前。主语 谓语 宾语“精神”与“浮现”不搭配 例2：例：对方的 态度 比任何时候都更加 威严而坚强。主语中心语 谓语中心语 主语中心语是“态度”与 谓语中心语是“威严而坚强”不搭配 计时演练One（1）自从妈妈给小明买了手机后，小明的学习明显下降了。（2）提高早餐质量十分重要，早餐营养应提供占人体每天所需总量三分之二的维生素和矿物质，因而我们对待早餐一定不要马虎。（3）自媒体坚持在法制轨道上实施，是健康生长、阳光发展、为网络经济文化的繁荣贡献力量的前提。“实施”应该为“运行”DESTINYFREEDOMI love you more than Ive ever loved any woma
3、n.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.动宾搭配不当例1：在西安演出时,我们 都 观看 了她那精彩的 表演 和美妙的 歌声。主语 谓语 宾语修改意见：谓语“观看”,只能与“精彩的表演”搭配,不能与“美妙的歌声”搭配。例2：由于运用了科学的复习方法,他的 学习效率 有 了很大 改进。主语中心语 谓语 修改
4、意见：主语中心语“学习效率”,不能与“改进”搭配。宾语宾语 计时演练Two（1）为了创建文明城区，建设宜居滨海，各社区召开了多次“万人环境大清整”活动。（2）医院给临终病人提供的服务，不再是为了治疗疾病或延长生命，而是尽可能降低患者痛苦及其他的身体不适症状，以改善患者生活质量。（3）陈更四年磨砺，终于获得第四届中国诗词大会冠军，这缘于她痴迷古典诗词，多年坚持不懈日积月累的结果。修改意见：“召开”改为“举办”修改意见：“降低”改为“减轻”；“改善”改为“提高”修改意见：“缘于”改为“是”DESTINYFREEDOMI love you more than Ive ever loved any w
5、oman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.主宾搭配不当例1：政治稳定、团结的局面，是 我国社会主义市场经济体制建立健全的先决条件。主语 谓语 修改意见：主语“局面”,不能与“先决条件”搭配。例2：规规矩短的两条 平行线 始终 是 两条可望而不可及的 端点。主语 谓语 修改意见：主语“平行线”,不能与
6、“端点”搭配。宾语宾语 计时演练Three（1）秋天的香山是个美丽的季节。（2）这所九年制寄宿学校的150多名学生是地震中伤亡最少、震后复课最早的学校.（3）丰富心灵的方式需要到大自然中去感受，到有文化积淀的地方去游历，包括欣赏艺术作品等方面的体验。修改意见：“季节”,改为“地方”修改意见：删去“的150多名学生”修改意见：“方式”与“需要”不搭，去掉“的方式”DESTINYFREEDOMI love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woma
7、n.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.定语、状语、补语与中心语搭配不当例：做报告前,他连夜把借来的资料详细地浏览了一遍。修改意见：“详细地浏览”中的状语与中心语相互矛盾,把“浏览”改为“阅读”。阅读阅读 计时演练Four（1）父母不在家,小华一到晚上就吓得胆小如鼠,不敢开门。（2）这些特警队员,都是经过严峻考验审查的优秀警员。定语“严峻”不能修饰“审查”，应该在“审查”前加“严格的”“胆小如鼠”经常做谓语，如：“他胆小
8、如鼠”也可做定语，如：“胆小如鼠的人”，一般不做补语，应该为“胆小如鼠的小华”综合练习（1）下列句子中没有语病的一项是（）A投资环境的好坏，服务质量的优劣，市民文明素质的高低，都是铜仁经济能否健康发展的重要保证。B文艺界的同志对这一节目表示了极大的关心和浓厚的兴趣。C威海海防纪念馆分序厅、抗倭、抗英、抗法、抗日、尾厅等六部分组成，充分显示了中华儿女自强不息的民族精神。D通过社会实践活动，让我们接触了社会，开阔了视野。A“表示”与“兴趣”搭配不当，改为“表示了极大的关心，产生了浓厚的兴趣”。“分”与“组成”杂糅，删去“组成”或将“分”改为“由”。缺乏主语，删去“通过”或删去“让”。综合练习（2）
9、下列句子没有语病的一项是（）A我市文明办开展与策划的“经典诵读”活动，有利于更多的人了解、研究国学经典。B有数据显示，随着生态持续优化，空气质量不断改进，十堰的蓝天成了常态。C当参加“国际青少年网球巡回赛”的体育明星来到我市，受到了球迷的热烈欢迎。D为积极响应我市“外修生态，内修人文”方略，市五创办、市环保局联合举行了以“践行文明之约，共享生态之美”为主题的大型公益活动。D语序不当，应该是“策划与开展”。搭配不当，“空气质量”不能“不断改进”，应该是不断优化。成分残缺，缺少主语，应该把“当”去掉。02Click here to add your titleI love you more tha
10、n Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.例1：一想到昨天发生的事情,就使我坐卧不安。第二分句没有主语第二分句没有主语,可把可把“使使”删去删去,让让“我我”作主语作主语中心语中心语,把把“就就”移到移到“我我”之后。之后。例2：由于他们都有明确的学习目标,他们这些才进入高校的同学学习都很刻苦。主语中心语多余,可删掉两个“他们”。（1）春节上演的国产科幻电影流浪地球，强烈地震撼着观众的心，纷纷为导演的前瞻意识点赞。（2）随着中国对洋垃圾实施进口禁令，使西方国家陷入
11、集体焦虑。（3）从上述有目共睹的事件中，证明他们的所作所为是无可指责的。去掉去掉“从从中中”，介词不正，介词不正确使用，架空主语。确使用，架空主语。介词不正确使用，架空主语，删去介词不正确使用，架空主语，删去“使使”。“纷纷纷纷”前加前加“观众观众”残缺或多余例1：尽管美国总是自诩为最尊重人权的国家，但是美国一再出现的严重违反人权的丑行却在国际社会上一致声讨。在“一致声讨”前加“遭到了”。例2：他就主动参与社会灾害性事故处理，化解风险，安定社会生活的责任。在“主动”后加“承担”。（1）只要我们沿着正确的前进方向,任何困难都是可以克服的。（2）这个村乱占耕地的问题,现在已经获得解决。前一分句缺少
12、谓语中心语，可前一分句缺少谓语中心语，可把把“方向方向”移至移至“前进前进”前面。前面。“获得获得”多余，删去。多余，删去。残缺或多余例1：有的人看够了城市的繁华，喜欢到一些人迹罕至的地方去游玩，但这是有风险的，近年来已经发生了多次背包客被困野山。句子成分残缺，在句末加上“的事故”例2：我国高铁建设已取得丰硕成果，但因市场规模巨大，还不能完全满足载客、物流货运。句子成分残缺，缺少宾语中心语，在句末加上“的要求”（1）各级纪检监察机关要广开言路，深入调查，发挥好监管。（3）4月30日，德州市庆祝“五一”国际劳动节暨表彰大会隆重举行，大会授予王金红等30名同志“德州工匠”。在末尾加在末尾加“作用作
13、用”二字二字在末尾加在末尾加“称号称号”二字二字 （1）“宝剑锋从磨砺出,梅花香自苦寒来。”小李总是自勉。（2）管理给企业带来的变化,突出地表现在全厂严把质量关,上下争创名牌产品。“自勉自勉”前面加前面加“以此以此”做状语做状语补语由介词短语充当，介词补语由介词短语充当，介词“在在”后应有后应有“上上”呼应。呼应。的残缺或多余 03Click here to add your titleI love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman
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16、y woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.例：2019年世乒赛女单决赛中，刘诗雯4比2战胜队友陈梦，第一次夺得首个世乒赛的冠军。删掉“首个”例：从2000年起开始，野口健开始了在珠穆朗玛峰捡垃圾的工作，应改为“从2000年起，野口健开始了在珠穆朗玛峰捡垃圾的工作”I love you more
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18、an.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.（1）包头作为宜居城市，少了其他一些大城市的喧嚣和拥挤合理的城市规划，给市民以舒适和便利，让人们内心感到由衷的喜悦和惬意。（2）为精简字数，我们不得不把这篇文章略加删改一些。（3）在毕业年级学生中进行的体育测试，有超过20左右的学生，由于平日缺乏锻炼，导致体育成绩很不理想。“由衷由衷”就是发自内心的意思。就是发自内心的意思。“一些一些”与前面的与前面的“略加略加”重复。可删掉一个
19、。重复。可删掉一个。“超过超过”和和“左右左右”重复。可删掉一个。重复。可删掉一个。综合练习（3）下列句子中没有语病的一项是（）A、一些地方出现山洪暴发、泥石流等自然灾害，造成的原因是人们无节制地乱砍滥伐而引起的。B、老张的衣服比老李的衣服做得好。C、在新的千年里，黔东南人民一定会齐心协力，创造出令人惊异的奇迹来。D、谁能否定学习传统文化对提高人们的思想素质和文化素质是没有用的呢？C句式杂糅，“原因是引起的”杂糅，删去“而引起的”表意不明，是“衣服好”还是“做工好”不清楚，可改为“老张的衣服质量比老李的好”；不合逻辑，否定失当，将“没有用”改为“有用”综合练习（4）对病句的修改不正确的一项是（
20、）A、我们在修改作文时要改正并找出文章中的错别字。（将将“改正并改正并找出找出”改为改为“找出并改正找出并改正”。）。）B、地铁5号线的正式运营，极大地缓解了市内交通拥堵。（在在“交通交通拥堵拥堵”后加上后加上“状况状况”。）。）C、我们必须提高认真阅读的习惯。（将将“提高提高”改为改为“加强加强”。）。）D、我国人工栽培牡丹的历史大约有三百年左右。（删去删去“大约大约”或或“左右左右”。）。）C属于不合逻辑。病句修改正确。属于成分残缺。病句修改正确。属于搭配不当，应该把“提高”改为“养成”。属于重复多余。病句修改正确。04Click here to add your titleI love
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22、 any woman.语序不当（关联词）more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you tha
23、n Ive waited for any woman.DESTINY FREEDOMI love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.DESTINY FREEDOMI love you more than Ive ever l
24、oved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.例1：他家离铁路不远，火车每当鸣着汽笛从他身边飞驰而过时，他就很兴奋。语序颠倒，语序颠倒，“火车火车”与与“每当每当”对调对调一下一下例2：在学习中，我们应该注意培养自己观察问题、解决问题和分析问题的能力。语序颠倒，应为语序颠倒，应为“观
25、察问题、分观察问题、分析问题和解决问题的能力析问题和解决问题的能力”。I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive
26、 waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.（1）据中科院动物研究所初步鉴定，这头金色牦牛是世界上新发现的一种野生动物，并命名为“金丝牦牛”。（2）近年来，在秀丽的东平大地上，拔地而起的中心医院、明湖中学、实验中学、清河小学厦等建筑群，令人流连忘返，构思奇特，巧夺天工。（3）国产智能手机不仅在国际上成功树立起了良好形象，而且
27、获得了国内运营商和消费者的一致好评。语序不当，改为语序不当，改为“发现的一种新的发现的一种新的”“构思巧妙，巧夺天工构思巧妙，巧夺天工”和和“令人流连令人流连忘返忘返”位置颠倒。位置颠倒。语序不当，递进关系的句子中，内容前后颠倒。应为语序不当，递进关系的句子中，内容前后颠倒。应为“国国产智能手机不仅获得了国内运营商和消费者的一致好评，产智能手机不仅获得了国内运营商和消费者的一致好评，而且在国际上成功树立起了良好形象。而且在国际上成功树立起了良好形象。”综合练习（5）下列句子中没有语病的一项是（）A、千百年来的先贤哲人们给我们留下了灿烂辉煌的许多精神财富。B、据介绍，这次公车改革将涉及近5000
28、多辆中央国家机关本级公车。C、亚航QZ8501客机失事，再次引发了人们对马航MH370失联航班的追忆。D、一些家长没有意识到“手机综合症”是一种病，而是采用简单粗暴的方式防止孩子不玩手机。C语序不当，应该是“许多灿烂辉煌的精神财富”前后矛盾，“近”的“多”相矛盾，应该把“近”或“多”去掉否定不当，“防止”本身就是否定词，再加上“不”就表示肯定了，和句意不符，所以应该把“不玩”的“不”去掉。综合练习（6）下列句子没有语病的一项是（）A、2015年7月31日，北京携手张家口获得2022年冬奥会举办权，北京成为首个集夏奥、冬奥举办地于一身的城市。B、有没有坚定的意志，是一个人取得成功的关键。C、我冒
29、了严寒，回到相隔二千余里左右，别了二十余年的故乡去。D、老师耐心地纠正并指出我在此次演讲中的不足。A两面对一面，“有没有”对“是”不恰当，应该在“一个人”后加上“是否”前后矛盾，“余”和“左右”矛盾，去掉其中一个语序不当，应该“指出并纠正”I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for yo
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33、an.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.例1：设立“中国旅游日”，旨在以强化旅游宣传，提升国民生活质量为目的。例2：导致青少年营养不良的原因主要是偏食挑食、吃零食过多、为追求身材过度节食造成的。句式杂糅，去掉“旨在”句式杂糅，去掉“造成的”I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever l
34、oved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.DESTINY FREEDOMI love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woma
35、n.DESTINY FREEDOMI love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.几种常见的杂糅句式1、本着为原则【本着原则，以为原则】2、是出于决定的【是出于，是由决定的】3、有组成【有，由组成】4、靠的是取得的【靠的是，
36、是取得的】5、关键在于是十分重要的【关键在于，是十分重要的】6、是为了为目的的【以为目的，是为了】7、对于问题上【对于问题，在问题上】8、由于下【由于，在下】9、经过下【经过，在下】10、是出于决定的【是出于，是由决定的】11、借口为名【借口，以为名】笔记区笔记区 I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited
37、longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.（1）我们期待“五四的火炬”再次激励新时代广大青年，紧紧围绕以社会主义核心价值观为核心
38、，在中华民族伟大复兴的征程中谱写新的青春乐章。（2）水果营养丰富，但是它的表面常常粘附着对人体有害的细菌和农药，所以食用水果前应该洗净削皮较为安全。（3）毕业生的优异成绩，取决于平时刻苦勤奋的学习才能获得，取决于科学的学习方法和正确的学习态度才能获得。“紧紧围绕”和“以为核心”杂糅，二者选一。“应该”和“较为安全”的同时使用，导致句式杂糅。“取决于”和“才能获得”的同时使用，导致句式杂糅，去掉“才能获得”Click here to add your titleI love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer
39、for you than Ive waited for any woman.Click here to add your titleI love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.06I love you more than
40、 Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.否定不当 more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love y
41、ou more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.Click here to add your title例1：一些家长没有意识到“手机综合症”是一种病，而是简单粗暴地禁止孩子不玩手机。否定词误用，去掉“不”。例2：春运期间，为防止类似的交通
42、事故不再发生，有关部门加大了监管与督查力度。“防止事故不再发生”，与本意相反，应删去“不”字。I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any w
43、oman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.（1）他对工作认真负责，虽然身在病中，但他无时无刻不忘学校交给他的任务。（2）考试有三忌：一忌考前不能过度紧张；二忌考中不能心浮气躁；三忌考后不可置之不理。（3）能否切实减轻学生课业负担，让他们快乐成长，是我国中小学教学工作的当务之急。否定适当，“无时无刻不
44、”表示肯定意思。把“无时无刻”改为“时时刻刻”否定适当，“忌”就是不要的意思，后面的不能，让句子变成肯定的意思，去掉“忌”或者“不能”典型的两面对一面，去掉“能否”Click here to add your titleI love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.Click here to add your titleI love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive wa
45、ited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.07I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.句义歧义 more than Ive ever loved any wo
46、man.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.DESTINY FREEDOMI love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.DESTINY F
47、REEDOMI love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than I
48、ve waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.Click here to add your title 例1：过度依赖电子产品对人体健康的影响不容小觑，李阳告诉徐磊，睡前看电
49、视或玩手机时间太长，都会导致他难以入眠。“导致他难以入眠”他指的是李阳还是徐磊，有歧义。例2：性格情弱的李娟的母亲，面对突如其来的家庭变故，表现出了异常的坚韧。可以有两种理解：“李娟性格情弱”、“李娟的母亲性格情弱”。I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive
50、waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.I love you more than Ive ever loved any woman.And Ive waited longer for you than Ive waited for any woman.（1）最近，为某边远山区林业站王站长诊治的医生惊奇地发现，他患了多年的心脏病竟奇迹般好了。（2）这次来给我们作报告的是两个街道办事处的
