1、Write a SpeechUnit 5 Music Reading for WritingWhen you believeThere can be miracles when you believe.只要你相信奇迹就会发生.Though hope is frail.尽管希望渺茫.Its hard to kill.却难以抹杀.Who knows what miracles you can achieve谁能预料到你会达成什么奇迹.When you believe,somehow you will只要你相信，奇迹自然会发生!You will when you believe!只要你相信它，它就会
2、发生1.Afer listening the song,how do you feel?2.What can we learn from this song?Energetic/pewerful“There can be miracles when you believe.”Dear studetns:The School Concert is drawing to a close.We sincerely invite you to give a speech on the topic“How music can change our life.”at the closing ceremon
3、y.A.Greeting,self-introduciton and proposing the topicB.Personal experience with musicC.Personal feelings and how music impact her lifeD.Appeal the audienceE.Closing the speech Para.3Para.4Para.2Para.1 Para.51.What is the topic of Sarahs speech?2.What was her problem?How serious was her problem?3.Wh
4、at made her recover?4.How did music help her during her difficult time?5.What was her advice to others?Please scan the passage and answer the following questions.1.What is the topic of Sarahs speech?2.What was her problem?How serious was her problem?3.What made her recover?4.How did music help her d
5、uring her difficult time?5.What was her advice to others?1.Metaphor（明喻）（明喻）2.Simile（暗喻）（暗喻）4.Repetition（重复）（重复）3.Personificaiton（拟人）（拟人）5.Quote（引用）（引用）6.Rhetorical question（设问）（设问）A.Have you ever faced a time when things looked dark and you had no hope at all?A rhetorical question is a question aske
6、d in order to create a dramatic effect or to make a point rather than to get an answer.1.Metaphor（明喻）（明喻）2.Simile（暗喻）（暗喻）4.Repetition（重复）（重复）3.Personificaiton（拟人）（拟人）5.Quote（引用）（引用）6.Rhetorical question（设问）（设问）B.John A.Logan said,“Music is the medicine of the mind.”Quote is to speak or write a passa
7、ge from another usually with credit acknowledgment.1.Metaphor（明喻）（明喻）2.Simile（暗喻）（暗喻）4.Repetition（重复）（重复）3.Personificaiton（拟人）（拟人）5.Quote（引用）（引用）6.Rhetorical question（设问）（设问）C.Music gave me happiness,.;Music gave me strength.;Music gave me hope and.;Repetition refers to a recurring element in a piec
8、e of writing.1.Metaphor（明喻）（明喻）2.Simile（暗喻）（暗喻）4.Repetition（重复）（重复）3.Personificaiton（拟人）（拟人）5.Quote（引用）（引用）6.Rhetorical question（设问）（设问）D.It made my spirits fly like akite in the wind.E.It was the rock I leant on to become strong.Metaphor and simile are both to suggest a likeness or analogy between”
9、two things.Difference?1.Metaphor（明喻）（明喻）2.Simile（暗喻）（暗喻）4.Repetition（重复）（重复）3.Personificaiton（拟人）（拟人）5.Quote（引用）（引用）6.Rhetorical question（设问）（设问）F.It spoke words ofencouragement to the deepest part of my being.Personification refers to give human characteristics to non-human things.REVISEDIn my opin
10、ion,Music is the medicine of the mind.When I listened to music,I felt very passionate.It always encourages me.It made me strong to get through hard times.ORIGINALJohn A.Logan said,“Music is the medicine of the mind.”When I listened to music,it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.It spoke wor
11、ds of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.Read aloud the sentence in the chat and compare the original one and the revised one BeginningBodyEndingGreet the audienceIntroduce yourself and propose the topicPerson
12、al experience with musicPersonal feelings and how music impact her lifeAppeal the audience Close the speechBeginningA.Hello,everyone!Today I will give you speech here.B.Good evening!Im Tom.I feel extremely honored to be here and to deliver a speech on the subject“How music have an influence on my li
13、fe”.EndingA.Im really appreciated that music can keep company with me.I will continue to enjoy it and be optimistic about life!Thank you for your listening!B.Of course,I hope none of have to go through these rough patches.But if you are in the same plight,you can turn music for help.I sincerely wish
14、 that all of you can enjoy music and find your happiness.Thank you for your listening!Think of ways that people experience music,and how music can help people.Sing Listen to musicPlay instrumentsThink of ways that people experience music,and how music can help people.Make us relaxed Give us couragek
15、eep us companyOffer us comfortRelease our pressure.Music is the medicine of the mind.Music gave me happiness/strength/hope/satisfaction.Music made me feel.Music had a great impact on.Music can support/courage/comfort.us.Find the useful functional sentence pattern that can indicate the impact of musi
16、c in the passage.Try to use them to express your ideas in the formal part.Discuss in group about how to use rhetorical devices to revise the expressions in the formal part.1.Metaphor（明喻）（明喻）2.Simile（暗喻）（暗喻）4.Repetition（重复）（重复）3.Personificaiton（拟人）（拟人）5.Quote（引用）（引用）6.Rhetorical question（设问）（设问）我校一年一
17、度的校园音乐会进入尾声，音乐会主办方邀请作你为闭我校一年一度的校园音乐会进入尾声，音乐会主办方邀请作你为闭幕式的演讲嘉宾，就幕式的演讲嘉宾，就“音乐对生活的影响音乐对生活的影响”发表演讲。内容如下：发表演讲。内容如下：1.分享自己与音乐相关的经历；分享自己与音乐相关的经历；2.你在这次经历中的感受；你在这次经历中的感受；3.音乐对你的影响。音乐对你的影响。字数在字数在80词左右，至少使用三种修辞手法。词左右，至少使用三种修辞手法。Distinguished teachers and dear fellow students:Good evening!Im.I feel extremely ho
18、nored to be here and to deliver a speech on the subject“How music have an influence on my life”._ Of course,I hope none of have to go through these rough patches.But if you are in the same plight,you can turn music for help.I sincerely wish that all of you can enjoy music and find your happiness.Tha
19、nk you for your listening!ChecklistContentRelevanceDoes the speech cover the required main points?Persuasiveness Does the writer narrate realpersonal experience and inner feelings?Does the writer explainhow music change his/her life?Does the writer relatehis/her experience to the audience?CoherenceI
20、s the speech well-organized?LanguageExpressivenessDoes the writer use various rhetorical devicescorrectly?CorrectnessGrammarSpellingPunctuationCompulsoryRevise and Polish the speech according to self-evaluation and peer evaluation.OptionalRecord a video for your speech and upload it to the Group.THANK YOU!THANK YOU!
