1、Reading for writingMY AMAZING NAADAM EXPERIENCEPeriod6Learning objectives01Learn something about the Naadam Festival in Chinas Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region.0203Study the organization and Language features.Master how to write about your festival experience.Do you know what festivals are held by e
2、thnic minorities?what do the ethnic people do in their local festivals?The Torch FestivalWater-Splashing FestivalSanyuesan Festival Daogan Festival Activity 1:talking about festivals held by ethnic minoritiesLead-inQuestions:1.What is the vedio about?2.Who are they and what are they doing?Lets read
3、the passage to get more informatin about it.Lead-in Read the passage quickly and finish the tasksTask 1：What festival did the author experience?Where,When and How long?Task 2:find out the topic sentence of each paragraphActivity 2Fast readingFast readingTask 1：What festival did the author experience
4、?Where,When and How long?Falls on the 4th day of the six month of the lunar calendarIn Chinas Inner Mongolia Autonomous RegionWhere?When?How longwhat?Naadam Festival Lasts 3 daysFast readingFast readingTopicsentencepara1para2para3para4para5On the first day,I set off to the games early with my friend
5、 Burin.Task 2：find out the topic sentence of each paragraph I experienced the Naadam Festival in Chinas Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region for the first time this year.After the opening ceremony and some amazing performances the wrestling competition began.I absolutely enjoyed the archery,too,but the
6、horse races were my favourite part.Im finally back home now,feeling very tired but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it.Fast readingFast reading1.What does Naadam mean?Which events does it include?2.What Naadam Festival customs did you learn about?3.What in your opinion is the most
7、 impressive thing about the festival?4.What else would you like to know about the festival and the writers experience?Activity3 Read the diary again and answer questionscareful readingcareful reading1.What does“Naadam”mean?Which does it includes?Naadam meansgamesin Mongolian,It includeshorse racing,
8、wrestling,and archery.Check answers careful readingcareful reading2.What Naadam Festival customs did you learn about?People wear fancy Mongolian robes(蒙古袍蒙古袍).Mongolians travel from near and far to attend the festival.There are an opening ceremony and some amazing performances.Then the wrestling com
9、petition,archery competition and horse race begin.Check answers careful readingcareful reading3.What in your opinion is the most impressive thing about the festival?In my opinion,Mongolian horse racing is the most impressive thingCheck answers In my opinion,Mongolian wrestling is the most impressive
10、 thing.It isIn my opinion,Mongolian archery is the most impressive thing.It iscareful readingcareful reading4.What else would you like to know the festival and writers experience?The writer did not talk about food or music,but surely they should have been interesting parts of the festival.Check answ
11、ers careful readingcareful readingStudy the organization and language features.Think about how to describe the festival experience.Activity 4On the first day.After the opening ceremony and performances.Im finally back home now In what order did the author write the diary?And how do you know that?Tim
12、e orderTip:To make our article more organized,we can follow the time order when writing.Structure Analysis1.How many parts the diary can be divided into？2.What should be included in each part?3.What kind of interesting details did the writer describe?Try to have a better understanding about the stru
13、cture of a diary.learn how to build the structure of writing a festival experienceStructure AnalysisOpening Paragraph Body ParagraphClosing ParagraphState the topic where,when,main feelingSummary of the experienceThe1st body:describethestartofthefestivalandthesurroundings The2ndbody:describeindetail
14、thefestivalactivityThe 3rdbody:describeindetailthefestivalStructure AnalysisWhere?When?what?State the topicFeeling?What should be included in the opening paragraph?Opening ParagraphStructure AnalysisWhat should be included in the body paragraph?Describe the festival activities about the horse races
15、in detailDescribe the festival activities about wrestling in detail(rules;feeling)The prepare for the festivalBody ParagraphStructure AnalysisWhat should be included in the closing paragraph?A summary of my festival experience feeling?tired but happy and satisfied;eagerClosing ParagraphStructure Ana
16、lysis The passage is a diary,and it is written mainly in the first person person and tense 1.which person is this article written in?2.what tense is used in this article?This article used the simple past tense and the present tenselanguage features Read the sentence patterns below and use them to re
17、write the opening sentence of the article.1.This was my first time spendingand it was an enjoyable and exciting experience.2.Ill never forgetbecause3.Ill alwaysbecause.language features Rewriting:1.This was my first time spending my holiday in Chinas Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region to celebrate the
18、 Naadam Festival,and it was an enjoyable and exciting experience for me.Original:Rewriting:2.Ill never forget my experience at the Naadam Festival because it was my first time to watch the exciting Mongolian games of horse racing,wrestling,and archery so closely.Rewriting:3.Ill always remember my fi
19、rst cxperience at the Naadam Festival in Chinas Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region because it was so amazing to spend three days witnessing a grand Mongolian ceremony.language features【仿写】【仿写】这是我第一次和我的同学过春节，真是难以忘怀这是我第一次和我的同学过春节，真是难以忘怀 Tip:When writing the opening sentences of each paragraph,we can use
20、 topic sentences like above to impress the readers and make the paragraph more organized.This was my first time spending the Spring Festival with my classmate,and it was an enjoyable and exciting experience for me/which was an unforgettable experience for me.language featuresHow does the writer expr
21、ess the date of the festival?【仿写】【仿写】1.春节在每年的农历初一，通常持续春节在每年的农历初一，通常持续15天。天。2.中秋在每年的农历八月十五，是中国的传统节日。中秋在每年的农历八月十五，是中国的传统节日。Spring festival falls on the first day of the first month of the lunar calendar,usually lasting for 15 days.Mid-Autumn Day falls on the 15th of the 8th month of our Chinese lunar
22、calendar,which is a traditional festival in China.language featuresFind out how to describe a person,a place or a scene to us in this paragraphDescribe a vivid scene for us.language featuresHow to express the feelings and emotions?Underline the sentences that describe the writers feelings and emotio
23、ns.excited;amazed;moved;surprised;worried;tired;satisfied;happy.Tip:To hold readers attention,we can add sensory details and our feelings to our articlelanguage featuresFollow certain passage structureUse topic sentence to start each paragraphFollow the time order Describe some interesting activitie
24、s in detail23When writing a narrative essay about a festival or celebration experience,we should:Add your feelings or sensory(感觉的感觉的)detail145writingTipsWriting tips不同的节日具有不同的风俗及特点，介不同的节日具有不同的风俗及特点，介绍绍节日时一般应包括以下内容：节日时一般应包括以下内容：1节日的名称和日期节日的名称和日期2节日的起源节日的起源3节日的习俗，一般包括节日饮食、人们的活动等节日的习俗，一般包括节日饮食、人们的活动等4节
25、日的意义，可包括节日的传统地节日的意义，可包括节日的传统地 位及其现实意义等。位及其现实意义等。Use what you have learnt to write about a festival or a celebration you have experienced recently.Activity 5WritingOutlineThe name of the festivals/celebation:.1 The topic and my finisheeling2How I prepared for the festival3The festival activities4A su
26、mmary of my festival experience Make notes of your ideas in the table.Main idea of each para DetailsWritingWriting1.Exchange drafts with your partner.Use the checklists to give feedback on each others draft.Is the writing well-organised?Is there an opening sentence in the first paragraph?Does each p
27、aragraph include the necessary details?Does the writer describe his/her feelings and emotions?Does the writer use the-ing form correctly in the writing?Are there any grammar,spelling,or punctuation errors?2.Get your draft back and revise it.3.Polish your draft and share it with your partners.Activit
28、y 6 evaluating and polishing the draftWritingLets recommend and share excellent compositionsActivity 7WritingOutlineThe name of the festivals/celebation:.1 The topic and my feeling2How I prepared for the festival3The festival activities4A summary of my festival experienceThe Spring FestivalClean the
29、 room,decorate the house,prepare food with parents,stick the coupletsHave a big meal,watch the Spring Gala,set off fireworks,stay up to welcomehappy,excited excited,delighted,eagerhappy,amused interestedtired,happy Main idea of each para Details FeelingsThe Spring Festivalhave fun with friends and r
30、elatives/enjoy ourselves,be proud of our customsWriting Make notes of your ideas in the table.WritingWriting The Spring Festival,falling on the first day of the first month of the lunar calendar,is the most important festival for all Chinese people.Although I have experienced it many times,it is sti
31、ll an enjoyable and exciting experience.My favorite Spring Festival Days before the Spring Festival,I helped my parents clean the room completely,decorated my house with papercuts,prepared delicious food,and stuck couplets,eagerly waiting for the coming of the New Years Eve.On the Eve of the festiva
32、l,my family members enjoyed getting together to have a big meal,including the tasty dumplings,fish and so on as we watched the Spring Gala,which was really a feast for the eyes.My parents gave me some lucky money in red paper and I was so excited that I stayed up to welcome the new year.Although fee
33、ling tired,I was extremely happy because the Festival provides a valuable chance for us to enjoy as well as be proud of our customs.Im looking forward to the coming of the next Spring Festival.1.Read the passage in this section to better understand the passage.2.What else would you like to know about the Naadam festival?Search more information about it on the Internet.3.Improve and upgrade the writings according to the checklist after class.HomeworkHomeworkTHANKS!
