1、描写描写节日节日时时,主要写出主要写出节日名称、节日的重节日名称、节日的重要性、节日日期以及活动等。要性、节日日期以及活动等。描写描写庆祝节日经历时庆祝节日经历时,主要描写活动和心情主要描写活动和心情。Share your experiences on a festival.有关节日经历的记叙文主题写作写作任务假定你是李华，你的留学生同学Elvis想要了解中国的传统节日。请你写封电子邮件向他介绍中国的元宵节（the Lantern Festival).内容包括：1.1.节日简介；节日简介；2.2.风俗习惯；风俗习惯；3.3.邀请他一起过节。邀请他一起过节。注意：1.词数100左右；有关节日的写
2、作2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Elvis,Yours,Li HuaII写作思路（一审、二定、三明确、四分段）（1)一审：一审：确定写作体裁和主题体裁：应用文电子邮应用文电子邮件件 主题：节日介绍主题：节日介绍（2)二定二定（确定时态和人称确定时态和人称）（与体裁和主题息息相关）时态：以一般现在时一般现在时为主（介绍节日的情况），一般将一般将来时为辅来时为辅（邀请一起过节）人称：以第一人称第一人称为主，第二人称为辅第二人称为辅（3)三明：确明确写作要点三明：确明确写作要点：了解对方要求介绍元宵节情况邀请对方共度节日（4)四分段：黄金分段法则四分段：
3、黄金分段法则：结合文章要点采用三段式采用三段式。III（1)关键词语the Lantern Festival,typical,traditional,lunar,represent,set off,firework,riddle,except for,folkperformance,look forward to（2)完成句子知道你对元宵节感兴趣，我非常高兴写信告诉你关于元宵节的情况。（现在分词短语作状语）Knowing that you are interested in the Knowing that you are interested in the LanternLanternFes
4、tival,I am really glad to write to tell Festival,I am really glad to write to tell you about it.you about it.作为一个典型的传统节日，元宵节是在农历正月十五。（as)As a typical traditional festival,the Lantern As a typical traditional festival,the Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first Festival falls on the
5、fifteenth day of the first lunar month.lunar month.在那一天，我们吃元宵，元宵代表着团聚，燃放烟花，欣赏灯笼和猜灯谜。（定语从句）On that day,we eat yuanxiao which represents On that day,we eat yuanxiao which represents the reunion,setting off fireworks,enjoying the reunion,setting off fireworks,enjoying lanterns and guessing lantern ridd
6、les.lanterns and guessing lantern riddles.此外，还有舞龙和其他民间表演。（there be句型）Apart from those,there is Dragon Apart from those,there is Dragon Dance and otherfolk performances.Dance and otherfolk performances.我想邀请你和我们一起过元宵节。（join)Id like to invite you to join Id like to invite you to join us for the Lantern
7、 Festival.us for the Lantern Festival.IV连句成篇Dear Elvis,Knowing that you are interested in the Lantern Festival,I am really glad to write to tell you about it.As a typical traditional festival,the Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month.On that day,we eat yuanxiao which r
8、epresents the reunion,setting off fireworks,enjoying lanternsand guessing lantern riddles.Apart from those,there is Dragon Danceand other folk performances.Id like to invite you to join us for the Lanterm Festival.Looking forward to your coming.Yours,Li Huawords and phrases_ n.娱乐_ n.庆祝；庆祝会_ n.典礼；仪式，
9、礼节 _ n.冠军_ v.&n.欢呼，喝彩 _ vi.比赛，竞赛_ n.竞争；竞赛 _ n.音乐会；演奏会amusementcelebrationceremonychampioncheercompetecompetitionconcert_ n.事件；大事 _ n.盛宴，宴会_ n.节日；庆祝活动 _ n.烟火(pl.)烟火表演_ vt.使相配 n.比赛，竞赛_ vi.参加，参与eventfeastfestivalfireworkmatchparticipate_在度假 _穿上盛装；乔装打扮_(节日等)是在(某天)_期望，期待，盼望_在特殊场合 _燃放鞭炮be on holiday/leave
10、/vacationdress upfall on(some day)look forward toon special occasionsset off fireworksWords&phrases_ adj.高兴的；满意的_ vt.邀请_ adj.愉快的；快乐的 _探索外国文化_一个特殊的场合 pleasedinviteenjoyableexplore a foreign culturea special occasion_聚会；联欢_传统食品 _参加_独特的文化和迷人的风景_ adj.(经历)难以忘怀的；不会被遗忘的get togethertraditional foodsparticip
11、ate inunique culture and attractive sceneryunforgettable典例示范典例示范假如你是May，在刚刚过去的春节里，你应邀前往中国与笔友一起欢度中国年。请你用英语写一篇100词左右的短文来记录这一段难得的异国经历和感受。内容包括：1.春节期间你们参加了什么活动；2.谈谈你的感受。写作技巧在写作时要注意以下几点：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息。该写作要明确以下要点：春节期间你们参加了什么活动；谈谈你的感受春节期间你们参加了什么活动；谈谈你的感受。2.提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照
12、一定的逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。本文主要使用过去时使用过去时。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，增加文章的亮点。List the outline of the passage.Paragraph 1：_Paragraph 2：_Paragraph 3：_I was invited to enjoy the Spring Festival.Describe the experience in detail.Brief summary and the feelings.【话题词汇】【话题词汇】1.on the New Years Eve
13、在除夕在除夕2.have a get-together聚会聚会3.drink to ones health祝某人身体健康祝某人身体健康4.pay a visit to sb.拜访某人拜访某人5.say“Happy New Year”to sb.对某人说对某人说“新年快乐新年快乐”6.make paper cuts做剪纸做剪纸7.have a good time玩得开心玩得开心8.decorate vt.装饰装饰9.do some cleaning大扫除大扫除10.be busy shopping忙于购物忙于购物【话题句式】1.表达节日氛围(1)Before the festival,peopl
14、e are busy shopping and cleaning their houses.在节日前,人们忙着购物和打扫他们的房子。(2)On the New Years Eve,every family has a delicious feast.在除夕,每家都享用美味的大餐。(3)When meeting,they send good wishes to each other by saying“Happy New Year!”.见面时,他们会说“新年快乐”,互相祝福。(4)And people like to decorate their windows and doors using
15、varieties of colorful paper cuts,which may be birds,animals or flowers.人们喜欢用各种各样的彩色的剪纸装饰他们的窗户和门,这些剪纸可以是鸟、动物或者花。2.表达经历和感受(1)I learned paper cutting from my grandmother bit by bit,and finished a work eventually,which made me full of a sense of accomplishment.我向祖母一点一点地学习剪纸,终于完成了一个作品,这使我充满了成就感。(2)Every
16、corner is filled with joy,so we feel happy.每个角落都充满了快乐,所以我们感到幸福。(3)As we watched TV,we made dumplings.我们一边看电视一边包饺子。(4)I will never forget this festival because so many fascinating moments have left a deep impression on me.我不会忘记这个节日,因为许多精彩的时刻给我留下了深刻印象。Sentences很高兴，我的一个中国笔友邀请我和她一起度过了上一个春节。_中国的春节是中国家庭团聚
17、的特殊日子，所以我们一起拜访了她的一些家人和亲戚。(so)_I was pleased that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival.The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together so we visited some of her families and relatives together.此外，我们试吃了一些传统食物，看了
18、舞龙舞狮，并参加了一些其他的庆祝活动，如庙会。(besides，such as)_在我看来，探索外国文化确实值得。(worthwhile)_Besides，we tried some traditional foods，watched Dragon and Lion dance and participated in some other celebration activities such as a temple fair.In my point of view，its indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.I was so plea
19、sed that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival.That was really an enjoyable and unforgettable experience for me.The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together so we visited some of her families and relatives t
20、ogether.Besides，we tried some traditional foods，watched Dragon and Lion dance and participated in some other celebration activities such as a temple fair.Greatly impressed by Chinese unique culture and attractive scenery，I have known further about China.In my point of view，its indeed worthwhile to e
21、xplore a foreign culture.参考范文参考范文【举一反三】假设你是红星中学高一学生李华,根据中国春节的传统,2022年虎年春节前要装饰房间,根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文。内容如下:1.你跟奶奶学做剪纸;2.装饰房间;3.表达你对民间剪纸文化的观点。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头已经给出,不计入总词数。4.提示词:剪纸paper cut精美的delicate On February 2nd,I went to visit my grandma._【谋篇】【遣词】1.拜访_ 2.忙于做某事_ 3.接近_ 4.迫不及待地做某事_ 5.在某人
22、的指导下_ visit/pay a visit tobe busy doing sth.approachcouldnt wait to do sth.with ones instruction6.张贴_ 7.充满_ 8.感到骄傲_ 9.把传承下去_put upbe filled with/be full offeel proudpass.on【造句】1.完成句子(1)当我进入房间时,随着新年的来临,我发现她正忙着做剪纸。When I entered the room,I _as the New Year Day was approaching.(2)被她的精美的作品所吸引,我迫不及待地想试一试
23、。_(3)在她的耐心指导下,我学会了做剪纸的基本步骤和技巧。With her patient instruction,I _of making paper cuts.(4)我把一些剪纸给了我们的邻居。_(5)收到它们他们很高兴。_ found her busy making paper cutsAttracted by her delicate works,I couldnt wait to have a try.learnt the basic steps and skillsI gave some of our paper cuts to our neighbors.They were v
24、ery happy to receive them.2.句式升级(6)用现在分词作状语和with的复合结构改写句(1)_Entering the room,I found her busy making paper cuts with the New Year Day approaching.(7)用定语从句合并句(4)(5)_I gave some of our paper cuts to our neighbors,who were very happy to receive them.【参考范文】On February 2nd,I went to visit my grandma.Ent
25、ering the room,I found her busy making paper cuts with the New Year Day approaching.Attracted by her delicate works,I couldnt wait to have a try.With her patient instruction,I learnt the basic steps and skills of making paper cuts.Soon my creations were“born”.Then eagerly,we put them up.With differe
26、nt designs on the windows,such as a tiger and the Chinese character“Fu”,our room was filled with a festival atmosphere.Besides,I gave some of our paper cuts to our neighbors,who were very happy to receive them.I felt proud when seeing their smiles.Paper cutting is precious treasure of China so it should be passed on.
