1、U4写作课课件Period SixWritingAn email about a journeyLearning Aims(学习目标)1.Learn how to write an email about a journey.2.Practice writing one.(重点难点重点难点)本单元的写作目标是写一篇关于旅行的邮件，也就是对一次本单元的写作目标是写一篇关于旅行的邮件，也就是对一次出行、游览、参观等的记录。这类文章一般分为三部分：第一部出行、游览、参观等的记录。这类文章一般分为三部分：第一部分介绍自己游览或参观的地点。第二部分写自己的游览经历，也分介绍自己游览或参观的地点。第二部分
2、写自己的游览经历，也是文章的重点。第三部分往往以向朋友发出邀请来结束全文。在是文章的重点。第三部分往往以向朋友发出邀请来结束全文。在介绍游览经历时，一般按游览的先后顺序写，由先而后依次记述介绍游览经历时，一般按游览的先后顺序写，由先而后依次记述游览过程中所见到的景物。另外要选取自己印象最深刻的或最有游览过程中所见到的景物。另外要选取自己印象最深刻的或最有特色的景物，作较为详细的描写。最后可以加上自己的感受，做特色的景物，作较为详细的描写。最后可以加上自己的感受，做到既有所见所闻，又有所思所感，深化写作主题。到既有所见所闻，又有所思所感，深化写作主题。常用表达常用表达1.Id like to s
3、hare one of the most fascinating experiences with you.2.Im glad to share a truly unforgettable travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you.3.Last week/month/year，I paid a visit to.，which is famous for.4.It lies/is located/situated in.5.The scenery is so beautiful that it take
4、s the tourists breath away.6.Wherever you go6.Wherever you go，there are plenty of activities to there are plenty of activities to choose from.choose from.7.It has become one of the most popular tourist 7.It has become one of the most popular tourist attractions in the world.attractions in the world.
5、8.We were all exhausted8.We were all exhausted，but our trip to.was really but our trip to.was really unforgettable.unforgettable.01写作实践写作实践假设你是李华，你的英国笔友假设你是李华，你的英国笔友TomTom写信询问你的一次难忘的旅写信询问你的一次难忘的旅游经历。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，要点包括：游经历。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，要点包括：1.1.旅游过程；旅游过程；2.2.你的感受。你的感受。注意：注意：1.1.词数词数100100左右左右；2.2.开头和结
6、尾已给出，但不计入总词数。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：大佛参考词汇：大佛the Giant Stone Buddhathe Giant Stone Buddha第一步审题谋篇 审题审题 写作时应注意以下几点：写作时应注意以下几点：1.1.确定文体：这是一篇电子邮件，向朋友介绍一次难忘的旅游确定文体：这是一篇电子邮件，向朋友介绍一次难忘的旅游经历。经历。2.2.主体时态：以一般过去时为主。景物描写用一般现在时。主体时态：以一般过去时为主。景物描写用一般现在时。3.3.主体人称：人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。主体人称：人称应该以第一人称和第三人称为主。谋篇谋篇 第一段：开门见山
7、，介绍本次旅行的时间、地点、人员及交通第一段：开门见山，介绍本次旅行的时间、地点、人员及交通方式等。方式等。第二段：自己的游览经历，注意详略得当。第二段：自己的游览经历，注意详略得当。第三段：总结全文，发出邀请第三段：总结全文，发出邀请。第二步遣词造句 核心词汇核心词汇 1.1.使十分惊讶使十分惊讶_2.2.字面上；真正地字面上；真正地_3.3.巨大的；非常严重的巨大的；非常严重的_4.4.顶峰；山峰顶峰；山峰_5.5.令人惊叹的；可怕的；很好的令人惊叹的；可怕的；很好的_6.6.景色景色_7.7.让人惊叹让人惊叹_8.8.在黄昏在黄昏_astonishliterallymassivepeak
8、awesomescenerytake sb.s breath awayat dusk9.9.令人愉快的；友好的令人愉快的；友好的_10.10.一定会一定会_pleasantpleasantbe bound tobe bound to连词成句1.七月七日，我和父母乘车去了四川乐山，一个以大佛闻名的地方。On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province.Leshan .2.我们吃惊地发现大佛真的很大。the Buddha is literally massive.3.当我抬头看到巨大的佛头，低头看到巨大的佛脚时，我感到
9、自己是多么渺小。and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small.is famous for the Giant Stone BuddhaWe were astonished to find thatWhen I looked up at the large head4.第二天，我们登上了峨眉山山顶，山上的美景让我们惊叹。The next day，we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei.The awesome and spectacular scenery on the mountain .5.在黄昏时刻，我们返
10、程。_6.我们都非常累，但是我们去乐山的旅程真的既难忘又使人愉快。_took our breath awayAt dusk，we made our way back.We were all tired，but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasant.7.如果再给我一次机会，我一定会再来游览乐山。如果再给我一次机会，我一定会再来游览乐山。_If I am given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again.第三步句式升级第三步句式升级1.1.用非限制
11、性定语从句改写句用非限制性定语从句改写句1 1_2.2.用现在分词短语作状语改写句用现在分词短语作状语改写句3 3_On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha.Looking up at the large head and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small.3.3.把句把句4 4改成以关系副词引导的定语从句改成以关系副词引导的定语从句_4.4.用用donedone作状
12、语改写句作状语改写句7 7_The next day，we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei，where the awesome and spectacular scenery took our breath away.Given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again.第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一组成一篇篇100100词词左右的英语短文。左右的英语短文。参考范文参考范文Dear Tom，Im
13、 glad to share a truly fascinating travel experience that I had during my last summer holiday with you._On July 7，my parents and I took a bus to Leshan，Sichuan Province，which is famous for the Giant Stone Buddha.We were astonished to find the Buddha is literally massive.Looking up at the large head
14、and down at the large feet，I felt I was so small._Im looking forward to going to Leshan with you next time.Yours，Li HuaThe next day，we climbed to the peak of Mount Emei，where the awesome and spectacular scenery took our breath away.At dusk，we made our way back.We were all tired，but our trip to Leshan was really unforgettable and pleasant.Given another chance，I am bound to pay a visit to Leshan again.Thank you!
