1、作文作文Writing010102020303命题作文半命题作文开放性作文假如你应邀参加一个国际读书会,并将分享自己读过的一本好书。请根据下列表格中的要点,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你要分享的书。注意：（1）可选择使用所给的书名及内容,也可另选书籍；（2）短文内容可适当增加；（3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（4）词数：80100；（5）短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。短文首句：The book Id like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea.Key points（要点）（要点）Words and expressions for re
2、ference（参考词汇）（参考词汇）What the name isThe Old Man and the SeaWho wrote itErnest Hemingway,AmericaWhat it is aboutFisherman,Fight against fish and natureWhy I like itMeaningful,never give up,Well-known sentence:“Man is not made for defeat（失败）.”,Interesting,helpful,Well-known sentence:你喜欢旅游吗？我们的祖国地大物博,有着
3、很多让人流连忘返的美丽景观。你去过的那些地方中,你最喜欢哪里？请你用英语写一篇短文,介绍一处给你留下深刻印象的自然景观或旅游圣地。题目自拟,短文不得少于80个单词。假如你是李华,就读于Wenzhou Tanghe Middle School。你想去美国的Washington International School(WIS)读高中。现在你需要给对方学校写一封简明扼要、有说服力的自荐信,争取让学校录取你。参考要点：个人信息 学习成绩 爱好、能力 要求：(1)不能出现真实的个人身份信息,(2)词数：110词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam,SchoolOutsid
4、e the classroomIn the classroomschool busgardentress&flowersschool buildingsschool tripswindowblackboardclassmates&friendschairs&desks HomeOutside homeInside hometravel/tripsweep the floorclimb mountains,Fly kites,have a picnic,have a visit toclean the gardenwalk the dogwash the carwash disheshelp t
5、o cookfold clothesdo the laundrytake care of baby brother/sis.SocietyhospitallibraryOld peoples homeThe animal hospitalplacesdoctors&nursesactors&actresspolicemen&policewomenteacher&studentsjobsnamecolor(s)personalities(shy,outgoing)feelings(sad,happy)likes&dislikeseveryday activities(watch TV,runni
6、ng)nameIts aboutI like it or notwhy I buy/readwhere I buy/readhow often I readThe problemhow happenshow do you feelwhat are you going to dothe resultthe feeling after this problemthe problem/thingwhy learnhow to learnwhat to learnwho you learn withwho teaches youWhen and where to learn主谓宾（形容词/句）主（副词
7、）谓（形容词/句）宾从句主谓宾从句主谓宾从句形容词/句）主（副词）谓（形容词/句）宾春节快到了,我要告诉你一些关于春节的事。（）Iwant to tell yousomethingabout Spring Festival.Spring Festival is coming.would like toWhen Spring Festival is coming,As/While Spring Festival is coming,As Spring Festival is coming,I would like to tell you something about it.春节,即中国人的新年
8、,它是从农历的第一天开始算起的,是中国最重要的节日。Spring Festivalholidayis（）the most importantin Chinathe Chinese New Yearitstartsfrom the first day in lunar calendar Spring Festival,the Chinese New Year,which starts from the first day in lunar calendar,is the most important holiday in China.1.和其他地方不同,我们的家乡没有很多高楼大厦以及汽车。our
9、 hometown doesnt have many tall buildings and cars.Different from other places,2.去年,我和父母一起去了花果山,那是中国有名的地方。My parents and I went to Huaguo Mountain together,I went to Huaguo Mountain together with my parents,I,with my parents,went to Huaguo Mountain,Last year,（）which is a famous place in China.and it
10、 is a famous place in China.3.河水特别的清澈,所以我们都在里面游泳。The river is clean,so we swim in it.The river is so clean that all of us swim inside.4.我们拍了很多照片,有花有树有草,风景真的很棒。We took lots of photoswith flowers,trees and grasssuch as flowers,trees and grassThe view is so great/wonderful.in such a beautiful/wonderful
11、 places.5.在夏天的时候,许多动物喜欢靠游泳来降温。In summer,lots of animals like to swim to cool themselves.to keep cool,to stay cool6.举个例子,随着城市的发展,动物的家园变得越来越少。For example,withwith the development of cities,animals homes become fewer and fewer.7.为了学好中文,Tom日复一日地在朗读和书写,这对他来说是受益匪浅的。In order to learn Chinese well,Tom reads
12、 and writeseveryday,day by day,it is good for him(to do so).andwhich is good for him(to do so).keeps reading and writingIn order to learn Chinese well,Tom keeps reading and writing Chinese day by day,which is good for him to do so.（23）8.我的问题是和家人相处不愉快,而且父母也经常吵架。My problem is that I cant get on with m
13、y family,my parents often argue with each other.and9.我该怎么做才能帮助他们解决困难呢？What should I do help them out?tohelp them solve problems?opinionexplanation+1.和其他地方不同,我们的家乡没有很多高楼大厦以及汽车。opinionexplanation:to compare2.去年,我和父母一起去了花果山,那是中国有名的地方。opinionexplanation:to judge3.河水特别的清澈,所以我们都在里面游泳。opinionexplanation:yo
14、ur action4.我们拍了很多照片,有花有树有草,风景真的很棒。opinionexplanation:its content6.举个例子,随着城市的发展,动物的家园变得越来越少。opinionexplanation:current situation7.为了学好中文,Tom日复一日地在朗读和书写,这对他来说是受益匪浅的。opinionexplanation 1:aimexplanation 2:influence*电子邮件英语是一种很多人都在用的新型书面表达。opinionexplanation:who*父母总是争吵,让我感到难过,也让我觉得必须做些什么。opinionexplanatio
15、n:feeling开头Let me tell you something about.Im glad to hear from you about/thatIt is so+adj.+for sb.to do/thatletters内容First,second,last/at last/finally/in the end/all in all/in a word/besides/whats moreFirstly,secondly,however,also,of courseOn the one handon the other handFor one thing for another,A
16、s for sb./sth.,结尾With best wishes.Im looking forward to your reply.others开头It is so+adj.+for sb.to do/thatThere beWith theof,To:Li PingFrom:ArminoHi Li Ping,How are you?I hope youre fine and not too busy!I cant wait to leave for China next week.But could you tell me something about Chinese table man
17、ners（餐桌礼仪）?What places of interest can I visit when I am in your city?See you soon!Armino假定你是李平,请你对意大利交换生 Armino 的邮件进行回复,词数80词左右。1.餐桌礼仪2.去哪里玩开头1-2句,10内容4句,40-50废话1-2句,10-15结尾1句,101.餐桌礼仪2.去哪里玩我们要一起吃饭。We should eat togetherwith our families when it is time for dinnerespecially on important dayssuch as
18、 festivals and birthdays你可以去国家公园玩。You can visit the National Parkwith me or classmatesbecause there are beautiful flowers and tall treesthat you can take lots of photos and relax yourself我们要让老人先吃。你可以去长城玩。To:Li PingFrom:ArminoHi Li Ping,How are you?I hope youre fine and not too busy!I cant wait to le
19、ave for China next week.But could you tell me something about Chinese table manners（餐桌礼仪）?What places of interest can I visit when I am in your city?See you soon!ArminoHi Armino,Glad to hear from you again.As you mentioned in your email,there are indeed some table manners in China.For example,we are
20、 not supposed to start eating first if there are older people at the table.And its impolite to point at anyone with chopsticks.As for places of interest,I suggest you go to the Hangzhou National Tea Museum,where you could watch tea art performances and drink tea.Im looking forward to seeing you!Li P
21、ing 请根据下列汉语提示写一篇日记,记录5月1日,周五,你和父母去参观科学博物馆。天气：晴朗；距离：5000米,乘公交车去；早晨8：00出发。10：30离开博物馆,看到很多照片实物、模型等。要求：运用日记格式,词数80词以上。提示：模型model书面表达（15分）请以“My hometown”为题,按以下内容要求写一篇80 词左右的短文。1.家乡的环境等基本情况；2.家乡的人们及其主要活动；3.对家乡的简要评价。CountrysideCityrelaxing,fresh air not easy to take public transportation exciting crowded,e
22、xpensive 在英语课上,老师组织了“A trip to the countryside or to the city”的话题讨论。请根据小组讨论结果,写一篇英语短文,介绍两者的不同特点,并写出你的选择与理由。注意：1）短文必须包含记录表中的信息,并作适当发挥；2）文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息；3）词数80100,所给的文章开头供选择,不计入词数。In the English class,we had a discussion on the topic of having a trip to the countryside or to the city._ ENJOYENJOYGOO
23、D WRITINGSDear Andrew,Im Li Hua.It is my pleasure to introduce myself to you.I am a girl who is outgoing and easy-going.Since I have been learning English at the age of 6,I could communicate with foreigners fluently without any problems.As for an activity about Chinese culture,I would like to tell y
24、ou something about the traditional music festival,for there will be plenty of traditional things not only the instruments but also the pieces of music.All in all,I would be much thankful if I was chosen to be a volunteer.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua76.某英文网站正举办主题为“Independence”的征文活动。假如你是张华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。短文
25、必须结合你的亲身经历,描述与独立独立这一优秀品质相关的一件事情一件事情,并谈谈它给你带来的影响及感受。注意：词数：80100；短文开头仅供选择使用,不计入总词数；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。短文开头：I still remember【参考答案】Nowadays,most children,who are the only child in the family,are given too much love by their parents It is because that they are protected from hardship and difficulties.Th
26、en they become less independent Last year my parents went on business and I was the only one at homeI had to try to cook my own meals,do the dishes and do the housework I realized that I was often taken care of by my parents and lacked independence During the days without my parents,I learned to tak
27、e care of myself and the importance of independence We should know the fact that no parents can keep a good company with their children for the whole life Thus,parents should encourage their children to do whatever they can,so as to develop their abilities of independence假定你是李平,最近收到意大利朋友 Linda 的电子邮件
28、。以下是邮件的一部分,请你阅读后回复,词数 80 左右。Subject:From:Linda To:Li PingIm really looking forward to meeting your brother when he comes to Rome in the summer.I can show him around the city!Please tell me something about him!How old is he?What does he look like?What kind of person is he and whats he interested in?H
29、ope to hear from you soon.Love,LindaDear Linda,Thank you so much for agreeing to show my brother around Rome.Now let me tell you something about my brother.He is thirteen years old,easy-going and humorous-we get along really well.He loves different cultures.He is interested in museums and likes tryi
30、ng local food.My brother is also cute.Hes of medium height with short straight black hair.He is good at Chinese kung fu,and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.Thanks again for your help!Yours,Li Ping中考书面表达评分标准中考书面表达评分标准(一)评分原则：内容和语言共计 l5 分。在评分时要以作文的整体谋篇和语言水平(看其是否地道)来评判。先确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，微调得分。最后，看其
31、词数和卷面整洁程度，词数太少(不到 40 个词)或书写欠整洁的应酌情再扣 l2 分，但不倒扣分。(二)内容要点：1、文章应包括所提供的要点内容。2、个人提出的理由，表达要清楚。(三)各档次的给分范围和要求：第六档：(13l 5 分)包含内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚。第五档：(1012 分)基本包含要点，遗漏少量次要点；语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第四档：(79 分)包含部分要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。第三档：(46 分)要点不明确；语言错误多，影响意思表达。第二档：(1-3 分)只抄写了提示词；错误百出，不知所云。第一档：(0 分)白卷或文不对题。(四)第六档有 3 分的差距，旨在鼓励写出优秀的作文。请根据考生佳作把握分寸。Thank you
