1、1.分析提示信息。分析提示信息。2.连词组句。连词组句。3.同意异词。同意异词。4.避免简单堆积词汇。避免简单堆积词汇。5.多运用过渡词，连句成文，使全篇结构紧凑。多运用过渡词，连句成文，使全篇结构紧凑。6.确保语言精练。确保语言精练。7.复查纠错。复查纠错。如何写出好的作文？如何写出好的作文？1.每个点都要写全，并要有适当发挥每个点都要写全，并要有适当发挥,并按要点来分段，注意并按要点来分段，注意段落的结构，段落不可乱分，要有过渡。段落的结构，段落不可乱分，要有过渡。2.写好第一个句子。写好第一个句子。3.文章的每一个句子的主语尽量多样化，文章的每一个句子的主语尽量多样化，也就是说句子类型要
2、也就是说句子类型要 多样化，但文章的多样化，但文章的 人称、时态应人称、时态应基本基本保持一致。保持一致。4.注意书写，卷面做到无任何一处涂改。注意书写，卷面做到无任何一处涂改。要求：打好草稿，并在草稿上改正。要求：打好草稿，并在草稿上改正。附：卷子的卷面很重要，要求有时间，附：卷子的卷面很重要，要求有时间，都要草稿，特别是看图写句子。都要草稿，特别是看图写句子。如何写出好的作文？如何写出好的作文？初中常用时态：初中常用时态：1.一般现在时：一般现在时：主主+谓谓+表、宾语表、宾语+其他其他2.一般过去时：主一般过去时：主+谓（过去时）谓（过去时）3.正在进行时：正在进行时：be+Ving4.
3、一般将来时：一般将来时：will+do(动词原型）动词原型）5.过去进行时：过去进行时：was/were+Ving6.现在完成时：现在完成时：has/have+done(动词过去分词）动词过去分词）常用连词。常用连词。表示并列的连词：表示并列的连词：and,besides,whats more,bothand.neither nor表示转折关系：表示转折关系：but,while,only,or,however,though表示因果关系：表示因果关系：for,because,then,so表示观点：表示观点：think,in ones opinion,列举：列举：for example,such
4、 as,like罗列层次：罗列层次：First,then,next,second,thirdon the other hand(另一方面）另一方面）8个话题作文个话题作文1.关于关于学习学习英语英语的话题的话题:“How to learn English well?”2.卫生健康饮食卫生健康饮食:3.“初三初三学生学生要不要参加体育锻炼要不要参加体育锻炼”。4.环境问题环境问题 5.关于关于“人口问题人口问题 POPULATION”6.关于中关于中学生学生使用手机的优缺点使用手机的优缺点,谈谈你的看法谈谈你的看法7.介绍自己的兴趣业余爱好。介绍自己的兴趣业余爱好。8.春节习俗与春节习俗与计划计
5、划,如何过如何过2009年的春节。年的春节。一.环保 1.Its our duty to protect our environment。2.It is very important to take care of our environment 3.We should not throw litter onto the ground 4.We should not spit in a public place/cut down the trees 5.We should plant more flowers and trees。6.We must pick up some rubbish a
6、nd throw it into a dustbin 7.If everyone makes contributions to protecting the environment,the world will become much more beautiful。二、旅游 1.Last Sunday(Saturday,),it was sunny(rainy,windy,foggy,)2.I got up very early(late).After breakfast I went to with my friends by bike,bus，3.We enjoyed ourselves.
7、4.We forgot the time.We didnt come back until 5 oclock。5.We all felt very tired,but we were happy.6.I thought I would never forget this trip.7.Last summer,my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays。8.We visited a lot of places of interest.9.We had a good time there.10.We bought a lot of thing
8、s.The clothes here are good and cheap.三、比赛 1.Last Sunday,Class One had a football match with Class Two.2.All of us went to watch it.3.The match was very exciting.4.In fact,I have never seen such an exciting match before。5.The score was 5-3.Our team scored three goals in the last fifteen minutes.6.Cl
9、ass One won this match.Class Two lost.7.Class One played well.They deserved to win。8.Their PE teacher was very pleased with their performance.四、健康 1.It is very important to keep healthy.2.How can we keep healthy?3.We cant go to sleep too late.We cant get up too late。4.We should eat the food healthil
10、y.5.We should do more exercise.6.Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。7.I didnt feel like eating anything.8.I decided to see the doctor.9.In the doctors office,the doctor looks over me carefully.10.He said:Nothing serious.And he told me to take a rest and drink more water.11.A nurse g
11、ave me an injection.It was a little painful.12.The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day.13.A few days later,I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world.五、学科 1.My favorite subject is English。2.More than three quarters of the inf
12、ormation on the Internet is in English.3.It is used by travelers and business people all over the world.4.China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China.English becomes more and more useful.5.So English is very important and I like English very much。6.We have a lot of fun in th
13、e English class.7.Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class.8.I hope I can go abroad one day,and then I can speak to foreigners in English。9.I like English and try my best to learn it.六、六、节日节日 1.In China the most important holiday is the Spring Festival.2.It comes in January or F
14、ebruary.3.On the Spring Festival Eve people have a big dinner.They have a lot of nice food to eat.4.During the Spring Festival people have a lot of interesting things to do.5.People visit their relatives and friends.。6.They greet each other with a hug and say,Happy New Year“.7.As China is a big coun
15、try,people in different places celebrate this holiday in different ways.七、七、写人写人 1.His name is Jack.2.He was born in London in 1982.3.He is 1.68 meters tall and weighs 52 kilos.4.He is 20 years old.5.He comes from England.6.He is a good ping-pong player.7.He is medium build.8.He has short hair.9.He
16、is outgoing.Every one likes to talk with him.He gets on well with us.10.He teaches English very well.11.He works very hard.He works in No.5 Middle School.12.He loves watching football games after work.13.He often helps me with my English.14.At the age of six,he began to play table tennis.八、八、生活生活 1.
17、Jim got up very early.2.Jim cleaned the room and do the housework.3.Jim went to shop and did some shopping.4.Jim did some cooking.5.Jim fed the cat.6.Jim sweeps the floor.7.He washes the dishes.8.He has lunch at school.9.It is a busy day.He is very tired.But he feels happy.初中作文指导选材与剪裁考考你 以春节为例，有这样三个
18、文题，大家思考以春节为例，有这样三个文题，大家思考一下，应该怎样选材？有怎样的侧重点？一下，应该怎样选材？有怎样的侧重点？作文题目：作文题目：1、快乐的一天、快乐的一天 2、家乡的春节、家乡的春节 3、我最喜爱的传统文化、我最喜爱的传统文化 选材，是指选材，是指写作写作时材料的选择；剪裁，是一时材料的选择；剪裁，是一种比喻的说法，指种比喻的说法，指写作写作中材料的取舍。中材料的取舍。经过审题、立意，明确了经过审题、立意，明确了“任务任务”、确立了、确立了“主旨主旨”和和“方向方向”。下一步应当考虑的就。下一步应当考虑的就是是“行动路线行动路线”文章结构的问题了：写文章结构的问题了：写什么、不写
19、什么；先写什么、后写什么；多什么、不写什么；先写什么、后写什么；多写什么、少写什么；怎样开头、怎样结写什么、少写什么；怎样开头、怎样结尾尾方法：一、写有用的，不写没用的一、写有用的，不写没用的 二、写典型的，不写一般的二、写典型的，不写一般的 三、写新颖生动的，不写陈腐呆板的三、写新颖生动的，不写陈腐呆板的 四、写具体的，不写空洞的四、写具体的，不写空洞的 新手段向难度挑战 一、反弹琵琶，新颖脱俗一、反弹琵琶，新颖脱俗 二、铺排巧妙，引人入胜二、铺排巧妙，引人入胜 三、主题高雅，言之有物三、主题高雅，言之有物 从中你看到什么？据载，在宋代，宋徽宗赵佶喜爱绘画，于是就把考绘画列据载，在宋代，宋徽
20、宗赵佶喜爱绘画，于是就把考绘画列为科举制度的一部分。一次，主考官出的题目是为科举制度的一部分。一次，主考官出的题目是“深山藏深山藏古寺古寺”。怎样表现这个主题呢？怎样把这个古寺。怎样表现这个主题呢？怎样把这个古寺“藏藏”得得更好更妙呢？有的人在崇山峻岭间画上一座古庙，有的人更好更妙呢？有的人在崇山峻岭间画上一座古庙，有的人在茂密丛林中伸出庙的一个角，或露出一段残垣断壁，但在茂密丛林中伸出庙的一个角，或露出一段残垣断壁，但主考大人都不甚满意。另有一位考生则独辟蹊径：画面上主考大人都不甚满意。另有一位考生则独辟蹊径：画面上画有崇山、清泉，还有一个老和尚正一瓢一瓢地将泉水舀画有崇山、清泉，还有一个老
21、和尚正一瓢一瓢地将泉水舀进桶里。画和尚而不画庙，有和尚则必有庙，这就把这座进桶里。画和尚而不画庙，有和尚则必有庙，这就把这座古寺深深地古寺深深地“藏藏”起来了，真是别出心裁，令主考官拍案起来了，真是别出心裁，令主考官拍案称绝。这位考生巧妙地选择了另一个角度来表现这个题目，称绝。这位考生巧妙地选择了另一个角度来表现这个题目，选材新颖，令人眼前一亮。选材新颖，令人眼前一亮。原则 1、紧扣中心思想，与中心思想关系不大但、紧扣中心思想，与中心思想关系不大但是有必要交待的内容尽量少写，材料不能是有必要交待的内容尽量少写，材料不能游离主题。游离主题。2、材料不能胡编滥造、材料不能胡编滥造 3、选鲜活新颖的材料。、选鲜活新颖的材料。4、选底蕴深厚的材料。、选底蕴深厚的材料。操练 题目我的爸爸 题材：1、_ 2、_ 3、_ 4、_作业 以以我的初中生活我的初中生活为题，写一篇为题，写一篇文章文章 要求：记叙文要求：记叙文 500字左右字左右
