1、Unit 5What an adventure!Writing about a diving experience【文体解读【文体解读】1.话题特点话题特点 故事性记叙文是以叙事为主要方式、以写人物的故事性记叙文是以叙事为主要方式、以写人物的经历和事物发展变化为主要内容的一种文体。在写作经历和事物发展变化为主要内容的一种文体。在写作时时,要把握好记叙文的六个要素要把握好记叙文的六个要素,即五个即五个W和一个和一个H,时间时间(when),地点地点(where),人物人物(who),事件事件(what),原原因因(why)和过程和过程(how)。结构结构:常见的故事性记叙文的结构常分为三段常见的
2、故事性记叙文的结构常分为三段:第一段第一段:交代事情发生的时间、地点、人物等要素。交代事情发生的时间、地点、人物等要素。第二段第二段:进一步叙述发生了什么事以及如何发生的进一步叙述发生了什么事以及如何发生的,在在必要时可加入冲突必要时可加入冲突,以达到故事高潮。以达到故事高潮。第三段第三段:结尾要尽量自然结尾要尽量自然,做到水到渠成做到水到渠成,可适当谈一可适当谈一下自己的感想下自己的感想,发表自己的看法发表自己的看法,以达到升华文章主题以达到升华文章主题的目的的目的,但不宜过多。但不宜过多。2.话题词汇话题词汇hear听到听到consider考虑考虑intend打算打算meet遇到遇到fin
3、d发现发现adventure冒险冒险experience经历经历start out/off出发出发without delay/hesitation毫不迟延毫不迟延/犹豫犹豫learn.by heart记住记住3.话题句式话题句式(试着替换黑体部分试着替换黑体部分,变成你需要变成你需要表达的意思表达的意思)Seeing this/Hearing this,I ran over to him as soon as possible.看见看见/听见这种情况听见这种情况,我尽快朝他跑了过去。我尽快朝他跑了过去。I was taking a walk by the lake when I saw a m
4、an fall off the bicycle.我正在湖边散步我正在湖边散步,这时我看见一个人从自行车上摔了这时我看见一个人从自行车上摔了下来。下来。Without hesitation/Without a word,I decided to help him.二话没说二话没说,我决定去帮助他。我决定去帮助他。What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was that the sky was so clear.最使我们吃惊的最使我们吃惊的(吸引我们的吸引我们的/使我们高兴的使我们高兴的)是那里的是那里的天空这么晴朗。天空这么晴朗。Tired as w
5、e were,we learned what we couldnt learn in school.尽管很累尽管很累,但我们学到了在学校学不到的东西。但我们学到了在学校学不到的东西。Ill never forget the day which/that we spent on the farm.我永远都不会忘记在农场度过的这天。我永远都不会忘记在农场度过的这天。【布局】【布局】如何写好故事性记叙文如何写好故事性记叙文【范例点评【范例点评】My Experience in the Morning Fog Fog is a natural phenomenon.It usually appears
6、 in the morning,which makes people cant see clearly.It is Tuesday today.I got up very early to do some jogging as usual.When I got out of the building,I found that I was surrounded by the fog.I didnt know whether I was in a dream or not,because everything was not clear.The street lights seemed far a
7、way,like stars in the sky.I couldnt see anything oranybody three meters away.I could only hear some sounds.Suddenly I heard the sound of a car,but when the driver saw me,the car almost knocked me down.Its too dangerous,but I was safe.Just my hair was wet.The morning fog was gradually disappearing wh
8、en the sun rose in the east.All the things were clear again.However,I can never forget this day.【迁移训练】【迁移训练】某英文杂志栏目向读者征集有关消费者受广告欺某英文杂志栏目向读者征集有关消费者受广告欺骗而购物的文章骗而购物的文章,请你参照以下四幅图片请你参照以下四幅图片,给该英文杂给该英文杂志栏目写一篇关于你购买照相机的经历。志栏目写一篇关于你购买照相机的经历。注意注意:1.词数词数80左右左右;2.可适当发挥可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。以使行文连贯。参考词汇参考词汇:冲洗冲洗develop;胶卷
9、胶卷film【遣词【遣词】1.承诺承诺_2.在在前面前面_ 3.出售出售_4.情不自禁做某事情不自禁做某事_5.两卷两卷_ promisein front ofon sale cant help doing sth.two rolls of6.迫不及待去做某事迫不及待去做某事_ 7.照相照相_ 8.吃惊吃惊_ 9.出版出版;(照片照片)冲洗冲洗_10.对对要明智要明智_ cant wait to do sth.take photosbe surprised tocome out be smart about【造句【造句】1.完成句子完成句子(1)人们离不开广告。人们离不开广告。People _
10、 _ _ _ advertisements.(2)广告承诺便宜的商品和免费的礼品。广告承诺便宜的商品和免费的礼品。Advertisements _ _ _ and free gifts.cannot get away frompromise cheap goods(3)我买照相机的经历很糟糕。我买照相机的经历很糟糕。I _ _ _ _ _ _ buying a camera.(4)我走在街上我走在街上,在一家商店前看到一则广告。在一家商店前看到一则广告。I _ _ in the street and _ _ _ in front of a shop.had a very bad experie
11、nce ofwas walkingsaw an advertisement(5)这则广告说这种照相机只卖这则广告说这种照相机只卖20元。元。The advertisement _ _ the cameras were on sale for only 20 yuan each.says that(6)我看到了诱人的价格我看到了诱人的价格,忍不住走进商店买了一部相忍不住走进商店买了一部相机和两卷胶卷。机和两卷胶卷。I saw the _ _,and _ _ _ the shop to buy one camera and two rolls of films.attractive pricesc
12、ouldnt helpentering(7)我很兴奋我很兴奋,迫不及待地邀请我的朋友去附近的公园迫不及待地邀请我的朋友去附近的公园拍照。拍照。I was so excited that I _ _ _ invite my friends to take photos in the nearby park.(8)我们玩得很开心我们玩得很开心,在附近的公园里拍了很多照片。在附近的公园里拍了很多照片。We _ _ _ _ and took lots of photos in the nearby park.couldnt wait tohad a good time(9)我被告知了事实我被告知了事实
13、,我的照片一张也没有洗出来。我的照片一张也没有洗出来。I _ _ the fact that none of my photos _ _.was toldcame out2.句式升级句式升级(10)用定语从句合并用定语从句合并(1)(2)句句People cannot get away from advertisements _ _ cheap goods and free gifts.whichpromise(11)用时间状语从句改写用时间状语从句改写(4)并用现在分词合并并用现在分词合并(4)(5)句句_ _ _ _ _ the street,I saw an advertisement
14、in front of a shop saying that the cameras were on sale for only 20 yuan each.When I was walking in(12)用现在分词形式改写用现在分词形式改写(6)句句_ _ _ _,I couldnt help entering the shop to buy one camera and two rolls of films.Seeing the attractive prices(13)用定语从句合并用定语从句合并(7)(8)句句I was so excited that I couldnt wait t
15、o invite my friends to take photos in the nearby park,_ _ _ _ _ _ and took lots of photos.where wehad a good time【成篇【成篇】People cannot get away from advertisements which promise cheap goods and free gifts.I had a very bad experience of buying a camera.Last Wednesday,when I was walking in the street,I
16、 saw an advertisement in front of a shop saying that the cameras were on sale for only 20 yuan each.Seeing the attractive prices,I couldnt help entering the shop to buy one camera and two rolls of films.I was so excited that I couldnt wait to invite my friends to take photos in the nearby park,where
17、 we had a good time and took lots of photos.After that,I sent the films to a shop to be developed.Unfortunately,when I went to collect my photos this morning,I was surprised to be told that none of my photos came out.At that time,I regretted getting a bargain for 20 yuan and I thought I should be smart about advertisements in future and not be tricked by them.
