1、Unit 10If you go to the party,youll have a great time!Writinghave too many tests and exams have too much homework have too many after-school classesParents fight a lot argue with parents Parents are too busy to have time for their children.have no close friends cant get enough exerciseImagine you ha
2、ve one of the problems.Try to describe it in details.For example,what problems may it cause if you have too much homework every day?My biggest problem is that I have too much homework to do every day.In order to finish my homework,I usually have to stay up late so I dont get enough sleep.And I cant
3、find any time to do what I like.I feel so tired and sleepy that I cant follow the teachers in class.Para.1 _Para.2 _Para.3 _self-introduction and the problemdetails about the problemasking for adviceu文章中可借鉴使用的短语:文章中可借鉴使用的短语:_ be crazy about feel stressed and angryfrom time to time spend on when to s
4、top what to do how to solve itu 文章中可借鉴使用的语句文章中可借鉴使用的语句 复合句:复合句:it 作形式主语:作形式主语:表达烦恼的语句:表达烦恼的语句:_征询建议的语句:征询建议的语句:_I really dont know why they are so strict.I believe it is important for us to spend some time on our hobbies.I wish I could have my parents support.a)_b)_c)_a)_b)_It is important for us to
5、 spend some time on our hobbies.Is it bad to stay out late to play football?I really dont know what to do.Can you offer me some suggestions?八年级的中学生八年级的中学生,Millie,兴趣广泛,目前最酷,兴趣广泛,目前最酷好画画,但因为功课繁多,学习任务重找不到时间。好画画,但因为功课繁多,学习任务重找不到时间。而且她父母认为画画浪费时间,她应该努力学习,而且她父母认为画画浪费时间,她应该努力学习,上好的高中,好的大学。假如你是上好的高中,好的大学。假如你
6、是Millie,写一封,写一封信给你的笔友信给你的笔友Alice,倾诉你的烦恼并征求她的建议。,倾诉你的烦恼并征求她的建议。要求:要求:1.内容完整,语句连贯,语法准确;内容完整,语句连贯,语法准确;2.词数词数70个左右。个左右。1.Is there a topic sentence?2.Did you use the right tense?3.Are there any spelling or grammatical mistakes?4.Is your handwriting good?Check and correct your writing according to the fo
7、rm below.(自评评价量表)项目标准评价结构(3分)段落合理(2分)衔接自然(1分)内容(8分)要点全面(6分)拓展合理(2分)语言(3分)词汇丰富(1分)句法正确,语言优美(2分)卷面(1分)书写工整(1分)你的习作你的习作1.要点是否齐全?要点是否齐全?2.是否注意了人称、时态、体裁?是否注意了人称、时态、体裁?3.是否用到了连接词?是否用到了连接词?4.是否用到好词、好句?是否用到好词、好句?5.书写是否规范、漂亮?书写是否规范、漂亮?Homework 1.Rewrite a better composition.2.Exchange and enjoy your group members compositions.