1、必修一 Unit 3 Family matters(5)高一年级 英语Writing about a family memoryWritingLearning objectivesAt the end of the class,you will be able to:1.get the main idea and specific information of the journal entry;2.find out the elements and structure of a family memory;3.write a short story about the family memo
2、ry;4.revise their own and others writings.Warm-upWhat family memories have you had?Talk about it in brief.Warm-upLets watch an old photo.ReadingRead the journal entry and answer the questions.1.What brought back the authors lovely memory?2.What happened in the authors memory?3.Why is it a lovely mem
3、ory?1.What brought back the authors lovely memory?Reading An old photo.Reading2.What happened in the authors memory?The author wanted to surprise her mother with home-made scrambled eggs on her mothers birthday.Unluckily,the eggs were burnt,but they ended up laughing about it and eating them all any
4、way.Reading3.Why is it a lovely memory?Because it shows the love between the author and her mother.ReadingI was tidying my room yesterday and found an old photo in a notebook.As I was looking at it,the lovely memory of that day came back to me.ReadingIt was my mothers birthday ten years ago,and I de
5、cided to surprise her with home-made scrambled eggs.I woke up really early and tiptoed to the kitchen.I had never cooked anything before,so I tried to copy how she did it.But somehow they ended up burnt.ReadingI was about to throw everything away when my mother came in.I showed her the eggs and sadl
6、y explained what happened.To my surprise,she tasted them and said they werent bad!I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient.In fact,we ended up laughing and ate them all.ReadingIt was my mothers birthday ten years ago,and I decided to surprise her with home-made scrambled eggs.I woke up really ear
7、ly and tiptoed to the kitchen.I had never cooked anything before,so I tried to copy how she did it.But somehow they ended up burnt.ReadingI was about to throw everything away when my mother came in.I showed her the eggs and sadly explained what happened.To my surprise,she tasted them and said they w
8、erent bad!I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient.In fact,we ended up laughing and ate them all.ReadingThis weekend is her 45th birthday.Ill make her scrambled eggs again,and this time they wont be burnt!ReadingPara Main pointDetailed description1find a photo,the memory comes backyesterday,in a
9、note book,old photo,lovely memory2-3make eggsten years ago,birthday,surprise her,home-made scrambled eggs4make eggs againthis weekend,this timeElements of a family memoryWho was in the memory?When did the family memory take place?Where did the family memory take place?What happened?(What did you see
10、 and do?)Why is it special or memorable?Your family memoryWho was in the memory?When did it happen?Where did it take place?What happened?Why is it special or memorable?my father and Ia Sunday morningin the gardenMy father taught me to ride a bicycle.Love has a great power.Structure of a family memor
11、yBeginning:Brief information about when,where,who,what.Main body:Specific description of what you saw and what you did,how you felt.Ending:Conclusion of what happened at last and your feeling.Useful expressionsLast summer,/In 2015,/Many years ago,I was atIt made me feel soI remember this becauseI le
12、arnt thatAssessmentassignment fulfillmentorganization and developmentsentence stylegrammar,spelling and punctuation assignment fulfillmentfully respond to the task organization and developmentpresent a unified structure;have coherent logic;build transitions sentence styledemonstrate good sentence sk
13、ills,clarity and varietygrammar,spelling and punctuationfree of or have few errors,if any,in grammar,punctuation,word choices,spellingWritingNow write a short story about this memory.Use the expressions in the box to help you.assignment fulfillmentorganization and developmentRevisionRevisiongrammar,
14、spelling and punctuationun-forget-table word formation There is a yellow shirt in my closet.This is not an ordinary shirt.Every time I see it,I cant help thinking of that unforgottable thing in my life.Revision When I was nine years old,one night,I suddenly caught a high fever,and my father was out
15、on a business trip.In a hurry,my mother took me to see the doctor.Revisiongrammar,spelling and punctuationtreatmentAfter the treat,it was more than 2 oclock in the morning the next day.When I got home,the elevator stopped and my mother decided to carry me upstairs.At first,my mother walked easily bu
16、t later,she was tired and the white silk shirt was wet with sweat.Revisionsentence style;grammar,spelling and punctuationandIt was my fathers new gift for my mother,which she liked very much.It was my fathers new gift for my mother,my mother liked the white shirt very much.But at this time,she forgo
17、t her own shirt.It made me feel so moved.I lied on her back and cried.layRevisiongrammar,spelling and punctuationopen A few days later,my mother didnt wear the shirt.After asking,I realized that my zipper tore the shirt.Since then,my mother never worn the shirt but I often see my mother opens the cl
18、oset to touch it.RevisionLearn to use the sentences from the textbook.sentence style Four years later,we moved twice,but the shirt still hangs in my closet.Every time I see it,the warm memory of that day came back to me.I remember this because love is indeed a magical power.Reflection1.How do we wri
19、te about a family memory?2.What should we pay attention to after writing?3.How do we assess the primary draft?Summary1.Get the main idea and details of the family memory.2.Figure out the elements and structure of the family memory.3.Write a journal entry of the family memory.4.Assess the primary draft.5.Learn more from the sample writing.Homework1.Make more improvement on your first draft.2.Collect information of other family memories and write a new journal entry.Thank You!
