1、热点5 校园欺凌 校园欺凌无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了负面影响。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：校园欺凌。【预测题目】（一）近日，“校园欺凌”（bullying in school）已经成为社会热点话题，阅读完上面的帖子后你有何感想？请你根据下面的写作要求，写一篇演讲稿谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1.“校园欺凌”对我们有什么危害？ 2.碰到此类事件，我们应该怎样做？ 请提出两点建议。3.人人有责保持校园安全，并呼吁同学们抵制“校园欺凌”。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计
2、入总词数，不必抄写在答题卡上。Good afternoon, everyone .Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school._ _Thats all. Thank you 【参考范文】Good afternoon, everyone .Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school. In my opinion, bullying can make us feel unsafe and unhappy. It makes us hard to l
3、earn at school and get on well with others. No one has the right to hurt us. If someone bullies us or we see bullying happening, we shouldnt be afraid to stop it .First, we should trust ourselves and tell them its not right to do like that. Second, we can ask teachers and parents for help. Its every
4、ones duty to make schools safe. I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to bullying. Thats all. Thank you.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇演讲稿谈谈你对“校园欺凌”的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Today I am going to，It makes us hard to，If someone bullies us，I
5、ts everyones duty to，I hope等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我演讲稿的目的是谈论“校园欺凌”，接下来介绍“校园欺凌”的危害以及如何面对这个问题，最后呼吁同学们抵制“校园欺凌”。此处talk about, in ones opinion, make sb do sth, get on well with sb, be afraid to do sth, ask sb for help, be friendly to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。（二）请结合下面两幅图片
6、所示内容，以How do you behave at school?为题写一篇短文。要点：1）请简要描述两幅图片；2）如果你受到欺负时，你该如何应对(至少 2 点）；3) 针对这些校园欺凌现象，谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少 2 点）。 注意：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）文中不得出现考生真实的姓名和学校名称；3）100 词左右，已给出的部分不计入总词数。（1） （2） 参考词汇：beat, kick, respect, harmonious(和谐的), stop bullying (欺凌)How do you behave at school?There is something
7、unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One,_【参考范文】How do you behave at school?There is something unpleasant happening at school. In Picture One, we can see a group of students holding sticks. They are beating and kicking other students. In Picture Two, an elder and stronger student is asking for
8、 money from others. This is called school bullying.If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to protect myself. In this way, I can keep myself safe. Safety is always the first. Then, I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that
9、 they can help me. I wont keep it to myself because maybe the bad guys will go to you next time.As a student, I think we should respect each other. If we have different ideas, wed better discuss instead of fighting. Besides, we should help those classmates who are in trouble. Lets stop bullying and
10、build a harmonious school.【解析】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作，请结合下面两幅图片所示内容，以How do you behave at school?为题写一篇短文。要点：1）请简要描述两幅图片；2）如果你受到欺负时，你该如何应对(至少 2 点）；3) 针对这些校园欺凌现象，谈谈自己在学校应该如何做(至少 2 点）。2.例文点评：例文采用第一人称，时态采用一般将来时为主；本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意
11、语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。3.高分亮点：短语： a group of students；asking for；protect myself；keep myself safe；so tha；instead of fighting；instead of fighting。句型：宾语从句If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey their orders and give them my pocket money to protect myself. I think we should respect each ot
12、her.目的状语此句Then, I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that they can help me.原因状语从句I wont keep it to myself because maybe the bad guys will go to you next time.（一）近年来，我国校园欺凌事件屡有发生，而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑，不 敢去学校，甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果。 请以 “My opinions about school bullying” 为题， 写一篇英语短文，谈
13、谈你的看法。提示：1. What do you think of school bullying?2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?要求：1. 所给提示信息应全部包括，可适当发挥，以 使行文连贯；2. 80词以上。参考词汇：心理问题mental health problems . My opinions about school bullying_【参考范文】My opinions about school bullyingSchool bullying is a big
14、problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?If I see somebody being bullied or I
15、 am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.【解析】本文属于话题作文，谈谈你对校园欺凌的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental h
16、ealth problem, at once, on ones own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主语以及“比较级and比较级”。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突
17、出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。（二）请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以“How can we protect ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。提示：1. 谨
18、慎交友。2. 不参与打架斗殴。3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。参考词汇：1. self-protection（自我保护） 2. bully (n./v.欺凌）3. personal safety（人身安全） 4. have violent behaviors (打架斗殴）How can we protect ourselves at School?_【参考范文】How can we protect ourselves at School?School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have b
19、ullies and some students are hurt, so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school.We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making f
20、riends with others. Here are some of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and cant have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school ru
21、les is also a way to avoid school bullies.Im hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future ,do you think so?【解析】这是一篇话题作文，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。仔细阅读所给材料，认真审题，确定主题，确定要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容。字数80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章
22、具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：在学校我们如何保护自己？几乎每个学校都有欺负学校的行为。在我的学校里，我们有时会被欺负，一些学生会受到伤害，所以在学校欺负别人或被欺负对我们来说真的很不好。当我们遇到校园欺凌的麻烦时，我们应该阻止任何校园欺凌。例如，在发生欺凌行为之前，我们应该保持冷静。与他人交朋友时，我们应该总是友好和乐于助人。以下是我关于制止学校欺负的一些想法。首先，我们将学习如何自我保护，因为我们的人身安全是最重要的。第二，我们要时刻与他人和睦相处，不能有任何暴力行为。最后，遵守校规也是避
23、免学校欺负的一种方式。我希望将来学校里不会发生欺负学生的事，你这么认为吗？【点睛】书面表达题要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。写作六步法：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。（三）你觉得你的校园生活安全吗
24、？请你以“How to keep safe in School”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1. 描述一件发生在你身上或你看到的发生在校园里的意外事件（经过与结果）2. 提出解决这种校园意外事件的建议（至少两条）3. 希望每个学生要注意校园安全_【参考范文】Do you know our school life could be dangerous if we are not careful enough. For example, one day, two students ran after each other in the hallway. Suddenly, one of
25、 them fell down and hurt his leg because of the wet floor. Therefore, he had to stay in the hospital for two weeks. So I think students should always walk but not run in the hallways. And the teachers had better keep one eye on the students after class and stop them from running. At last, I hope all
26、 the students should pay attention to their safety in school.【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般过去式叙述一件发生在学校的意外事件。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【亮点说明】本文观点分明，论证了学校安全的必要性。本文用到了征求建议的语气I think students should always walk but not run
27、in the hallways.这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。提出了学生和老师在学校应怎么注意安全。（四）假如你是李华,校园英文报的编辑,近日收到读者John的来信，谈论到他被一些同学欺负的经历，请根据以下提示，用英文给John写一封回信。写作要点: 1. 安慰他不要害怕和差愧；2. 学校也正在采取相关措施:1月16日(周四) 晚上8点在学校会议室有一个关于如何应对校园欺凌的讲座。3. 你的建议: (至少两点)写作要求: 1. 80词左右，第一句已给出，不计入总词数。2.必须包含以上写作要点，可适当发挥。3.文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名。4.语句通畅，语法正确，书写工整。参考词汇:欺凌 n
28、. bullying 欺凌者 n. bullies 措施n. measuresDear John,I am sorry to learn what has happened to you._ _【参考范文】Dear John,I am sorry to learn what has happened to you. I think you should be brave to face it and dont be afraid or shamed because it is not your fault.Our school is taking action to solve school
29、bullying. Whats more, a lecture on how to deal with bullying will be held in the school conference room on Thursday, Jan.16th, at 8 p.m.In my opinion, you should tell your experience to your teachers and parents, they are adults and they will help you. Meanwhile, you can talk to them who bully you,
30、ask why they do it and put them in your shoes. Tell bullies nobody should be bullied and bullying itself is wrong. I am sure everything will be better. Yours,Li Hua【解析】题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。要求根据针对John的问题和提示的内容给John回信。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态选用一般现在时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，表达出自
31、己的观点态度。高分亮点：短语：happen to；take action；In my opinion；Meanwhile等。句型：Meanwhile, you can talk to them who bully you, ask why they do it and put them in your shoes. 使用了定语从句和宾语从句。I am sure everything will be better. 使用了宾语从句。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意
32、是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。1. Meanwhile, you can talk to them who bully you, ask why they do it and put them in your shoes. 2. I am sure everything will be better. 3. There is something unpleasant happening at school. 4. Lets play a role in building a harmonious school5. I think students shou
33、ld always walk but not run in the hallways.6. I hope all the students should pay attention to their safety in school.7. obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school bullies.8. it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own9. If I meet bullying at school, I will first obey
34、their orders and give them my pocket money to protect myself. I think we should respect each other.10. I will tell what happened to both my parents and my teachers so that they can help me.11. I wont keep it to myself because maybe the bad guys will go to you next time.12. Its everyones duty to make
35、 schools safe . 13. I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to bullying. 14. As a student, I think we should respect each other. 15. If we have different ideas, wed better discuss instead of fighting. 16. Besides, we should help those classmates who are in trouble. The topic of -（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of -（支持A的理由一）What is more, -理由二). Moreover, -(理由三).Wh
