1、大作文结构讲解A类小作文 主要考察数字 要学会筛选 要学会排序，分析数据 不仅仅要描述数据，还要适当比较 对一些规律进行归纳总结A类大作文 主要针对题目的要求，要分析题目，要对原因段进行必要的扩展 注重把握段落结构1 内容无法把握2 文章结构提问方式决定了文体，文体决定了这篇文章的段落结构和写作方式，段落结构和写作方式是写作四项评分标准中CC项（连贯与衔接）的体现例题：Others often influence young people in their behaviors and situations in the same age。This is called“peer group pr
2、essure”。Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages？例题（剑8T4）In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?It has been constantly rep
3、orted by mass media that（据大众传媒的持续报道）more and more people are getting overweight and their level of health is going from bad to worse（每况愈下）.In this essay,I will analyze the reasons for this problem and propose some feasible solutions.（提出一些切实可行的解决办法）It is obvious that reasons for the problem are many
4、and various（多种多样的）.In the first place,unhealthy eating habits（不健康的饮食习惯）will lead to malnutrition or obesity（营养不良或肥胖）.Some people prefer to eat fast foods high in calories and fat.In the long run（长此以往）,without enough physical exercise,the fat accumulated inside body cannot be consumed.In the second p
5、lace,stressful workload（令人鸭梨山大的工作量）also contributes to this problem.Mental stress will result in sleep deprivation（导致失眠）.Inadequate sleep hours sap ones attention and cause headache.Therefore,the level of fitness goes from bad to worse.Accordingly,we are supposed to take a wide range of measures to
6、deal with this problem.At first,humans should cultivate a wholesome eating habit（健康的饮食习惯）with more fruits and vegetables.Scientists suggest that the supplement of vitamins and water helps to release work stress.Secondly,individuals should learn how to achieve a balance between work and rest（劳逸结合）.Li
7、stening to sooth music and watching a movie are absolutely effective ways.Of course,taking physical exercise,such as jogging,is also of great help.Overall,causes of this problem are complicated.It cannot be solved in a short time,and because of this,we are supposed to take various actions to cope wi
8、th the problem.对于问题的各方面进行正反的各个方面的讨论，然后比较，最终阐明自己的立场和观点。A绝对好 B绝对好 A大于B A小于B A等于B A不等于B A不能与B比较明显的倾向，能自圆其说，让别人信服，得分相对高。All education，primary,secondary and further education,should be free to all people and paid for by the government,Do you agree or disagree？Some people think museums should be enjoyable
9、 places to attract young people.Others think the purpose of museums is to educate,not to entertain.Discuss both views and give your opinionNowadays,the principal function of a museum has sparked a heated discussion（激发一场热烈讨论）.Some people believe the museums should be more entertaining,but some people
10、 think otherwise（其他人不这么认为）.In this essay,I will discuss both views regarding this issue and propose my own suggestion.Personally,these two features are not mutually exclusive（并不相互排斥）.For one thing,teenagers indeed tend to be attracted by entertaining places.For another,museums actually extend the co
11、ntents in a regular school course.So,the key point is to reconcile the charm of a museum with（协调A与B的关系）its educational function.Some people think lawbreakers should be sent to prison,while other people think there are some alternatives(for example,doing work which is beneficial for local community).
12、Discuss both views and give your own opinionPersonally,the imprisonment and community work are mutually complementary（相辅相成的）.For those who commit serious crimes,long-term imprisonment is of necessity so as to uphold an ordered society,while for the minors or those who commit anti-social behaviors,un
13、paid community service is an effective solution.Only by doing so can we prevent a further increase in social crime rate.Some people say that examinations have negative effects on students,while some others think exams have positive influences on education.Discuss both views and give your opinionPers
14、onally,after weighing the pros and cons of the examination（衡量考试的利弊）,it is safe to say that for one thing,standardized tests are the most effective means of assessment for both students and teachers.For another,the comprehensive quality of one person can hardly be tested only by exams.So,the examinat
15、ion is a double-edged sword（一把双刃剑）.Scientists believe computers will become more intelligent than human beings.Some people think the development has a positive impact;others think it is negative.Discuss both these views and give your own opinionPersonally,the artificial intelligence will surely impr
16、ove the productivity and help people finish the task beyond humans capability.On the other hand,it also poses a threat to the humankind in many aspects.Overall,we should analyze the artificial intelligence on a case-by-case basis.（具体问题具体分析）The government should not put money in building theaters and
17、 sports stadium.Instead,it should spend money on health care and education.Do you agree or disagree?Thanks to the social development,there are growing number of theaters and sports stadium which are built over the past decades.Some people are of the opinion that the authority should invest public fu
18、nds in health care as well as education rather than building those entertaining facilities.However,as for me,I am quite skeptical about this point of view.It is manifest that we can benefit a lot from visiting theaters.Firstly,theater like the Chinese Theater in Hollywood is not just tourists stand,
19、but carries much more educative meaning for people,especially for the young generation.The fantastic architecture represents the glorious past of its nation,which is regarded as an encouragement for the innovation for the upcoming generation.Secondly,people in common would get great chances to commu
20、nicate with each other on the platform created by public museums.There is no denying that investment in sports stadiums is an active measure to improve peoples health.To begin with,if their health is improved,we need not spend too much money on medical care,which saves the limited public funds at la
21、rge.In addition,some important sports events are held in the stadiums like the Olympic Games,which can not only enrich individuals spiritual need,but also improve the tastes for competitive sports.Admittedly,education is the very foundation of the whole nation in the future.The government is the sup
22、ervisor for the social stability,who has an inevitable obligation to prevent the public from suffering illness.If so,it will definitely lead to the social chaos and many unpredictable disasters.However,the investment of them cannot block the spending on daily basis.In conclusion,it is safe to say that the government should make all efforts to gain more profits and then spend the money both effectively and efficiently.Therefore,I am still convinced that the investment of theatres and museums and sports stadiums is much more advisable.
