1、01P a r t O n e假如你是李华,你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛,请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.比赛时间;2.演讲话题;3.报名方式。注意:1.词数80左右2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。试题回顾思路点拨文体文体 邀请信(邮件),要有完整的书信邀请信(邮件),要有完整的书信格式。格式。发出邀请说明比赛信息期待参加并预祝获奖内容 1.比赛时间、地点;2.比赛话题;3.报名方式语言 这是一封熟人(朋友)间的信件,语言不必太客套。应从读者视角出发,遵循交际原则,以真挚、达意、简洁(Keen,Faithful,Concise)为佳。谋篇布局之开头本题为熟人(朋
2、友)之间的信件,故无需做自我介绍点明身份。从简明的角度出发,建议开头段开门见山提出邀请。思考:思考:Im writing to invite you to participate in a Chinese Speech Competition in our school.Why do you invite George?Knowing that you are quite fluent and expert in Mandarin,Im writing to invite you to participate in a Chinese Speech Contest.Tip1:次要点George
3、的优势(邀请George的原因)可以用非谓语做原因状语用非谓语做原因状语的形式表现出来。谋篇布局之中段邀请信内容时 间(必备)报 名 方 式(必备)奖 项 设置到某处报名或填写报名表送到某处(邮箱或办公室),需写上截止时间。具体到某月某日或周几的早中晚的某一时刻。参 赛 优势地点(必备)评 委话 题(必备)学校里适合大型集会的场所,如报告厅、礼堂、剧场等。中文演讲赛,话题最好体现中国元素,如:我最喜爱的中国文化元素或我眼中的中国等。可适当举例说明话题的涵盖面。可从兴趣、性格、特长等角度出发,适当描述。可适当描述奖项、奖品设置为体现比赛的规格和权威性,可适当列举评委阵容。谋篇布局之中段主要点的表
4、达:1.时间、地点、话题The time for the contest is Janurary 17th and it will be held in the lecture hall.The theme for it“My First impression on China”.On the theme of“First impression on China”,the competition is scheduled to be launched in the school auditorium at 6 p.m.on January 17th.Tip2:以以competition为主线为
5、主线,将将时间、地点作为主要信息组主要信息组成主句成主句,将话题以介词短语的形式表现出来。这个并列句中主、谓语均不一致,缺乏一贯而终的主线,句子只是“貌合神离”。主-系-表结构的简单句给人以“回答问题”的感觉,缺乏情感。How to combine the information?谋篇布局之中段主要点的表达:2.报名方式If you are interested,please feel free to sign up for it by Email.Tip3:根据过往经历和生活经验,从读者视角读者视角出发,适当增加适当增加必要的细节。必要的细节。如果George害怕失败而不敢参赛,你将如何鼓励
6、他?Your abundant experience and outstanding presentation skills will allow you to win out in the contest.邮件的具体地址是什么?报名的截止时间是什么?表明George的参赛优势和获奖可能,增强他参赛的信心和勇气。So if youre interested,please sign up for it on the school website(file your application via Chinesecontest )before January 15th.谋篇布局之结尾本题属于朋友间
7、建议性质的邀请,故无需要求对方回复。为彰显诚意,可在结尾段表明期待参加,并可提前预祝对方取得好成绩。常用句式:常用句式:1.Your presence is highly anticipated.2.I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.这封信是否需要回复?朋友之间需要如此客套吗?Looking forward to your involvement.Wish you a great success!Tip4:遣词造句应从适切性适切性角度出发,根据与写
8、信对象的亲疏程度选择与之相适应的语言,切忌生搬硬套模板句切忌生搬硬套模板句。02P a r t Tw oDear George,Knowing that you are quite fluent and expert in Mandarin(普通话),Im writing to invite you to participate in a Chinese Speech Contest to be held.On the theme of“First impression on China”,the competition is scheduled to be launched in the s
9、chool auditorium on January 17th at 6 p.m.Undoubtedly,your abundant experience and outstanding presentation skills will allow you to win out in the contest.So if youre interested,please sign up for it on the school website before January 15th.Looking forward to your involvement.Wish you a great succ
10、ess!Yours,Li Hua(90words)KeenFaithfulConcise03P a r t T h r e e同体裁同话题备考资源Dear Jack,I am Li Hua.On behalf of Student Union,Im writing to invite you to be a judge of the English Speech Contest to be held next Friday in our auditorium/school hall.It will begin at 2:00 pm and last about two hours,during
11、 which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches on the given topic“Doing things right or doing right things”.With your attendance and precious comments,it is bound to be a great success.It couldnt be better if you could offer us some valuable advice on learning English at the end of the activity.Your attendance is greatly expected.Please inform your presence at your earliest convenience.Yours,Li HuaWish you a great success!