1、-本页仅作为文档封面，使用时请直接删除即可-内页可以根据需求调整合适字体及大小-bec-商务报告例题3(总6页)例题3Your company requires a taxi firm that it could use on a regular basis for staff and clients. Your secretary has selected two advertisements from the local newspaper.Look at the advertisements below, on which you have already made some handw
2、ritten notes.Then, using all your notes, write a proposal for your line manager, saying which firm you think your company should use.Write 120-140 words on a separate sheet.good references- give details TELECARS50 years experience in the transport businessWe offerWe need this- explain whyl Special d
3、eals on long-distance travell 24-hour servicel Internet booking facilitiesVisit our website at phone 0782 429516STREETLIGHT CABSnew company - no referencesimportant for us say whySpecialists in airport and hotel transfersNo distance is too farReductions for regular customersTel/Fax 01369 383038no in
4、ternet bookingSample 1From: The General ManagerTo: The line manager THE PROPOSALIn order to have a taxi firm that it could use on a regular bases for our staff and clients, we should choose the better one .The things following below are my proposal .In the advertisement of TELECARS, it gaves details
5、. Its a good reference. The three details are useful for us. We need the 24-hour service, because our company is runned for whole day, and we need meet the clients at any time.Compared with the other one, I think the one of STREETLIGHTCABS is not well. Its a new company and it has not any references
6、. The distance is important for us because we are in the urban. If no distance is too far, it not good for our business. And it also has no internet booking. So I think the advertisement of TELECARS fits for our requires.Band 2An attempt is made to address all the language points, but this is not al
7、ways successful. Generally the range of language is fairly limited and basic errors occur.Sample 2Introduction.The purpose of this report is to assess and recommend a taxi firm that will become our regular transporter. We will need them especially during next year trade fair and conferences. There a
8、re two firms to assess.Findings:As regards to Telecars we have a good references on them. It is very experienced traditional firm and is also very reliable. They provide 24-hours service that is useful during night meetings and negotiations. StreetlightCabs is brand new company and there are no refe
9、rences on them. But they provide long distance routes which we use very often and they are also cheaper. On the other hand they dont have web page and so internet booking isnt available.Conclusion:I recommend to choose Telecars because of their reliability, long tradition and well trained staff.Band 4All the content points are covered and are well organized. The range of language is good, and though some errors occur, these do not obscure the message. The register is appropriate.
