1、雅思大作文写作结构和各段功能句审题步骤1.读懂题目,题眼:1.adjadv2.否定3.重复出现的=主题2.(判断题型)确定主体段落的结构回忆3.列提纲写作速度?论据(支持/反对的原因,问题有几个解决办法,优点/缺点是哪些。)选择论据/例子A:列(多多益善)B:并(重复,有关联的)C:选(去掉抽象/不能表达/缺乏词汇支持的)D:排(分组/合适的顺序)文章结构驳论类1(一个观点,同不同意YesorNo)第一段:背景句+引出话题+考题改写+本人立场第二段:*支持该观点的原因1组总括(功能性的句子)+首先(解释+举例),其次(A+B)第三段:*支持该观点的原因2组第四段:让步+重申立场+(建议/预测)
2、点到为止2.给出2个观点选择1个AorB第一段:背景句+引出话题+考题改写(AB观点都列出来)+本人立场(我选择A/B)第二段:分析正面观点+原因可以分两段第三段:分析反方观点+原因23第四段:总结+重申自己立场+(建议/预测)立场3.中立:多大程度同意yesandno第一段:背景句+引出话题+考题改写第二段:论证正面第三段:论证反面23/2=3多大程度同意第四段:折中+建议(解决办法=本人立场观点)立场论证(正)让步总结4.优缺点4para第一段:背景句+引出话题+改写考题=(这个东西有好有坏)第二段:优点:是什么123(为什么?)第三段:缺点:是什么123(为什么?)第四段:总结(承认并存
3、/分析主导)+建议+(预测)5.解释问题原因+措施problem?causes+solutions第一段:背景句+引出话题+改写考题+尾巴(总括问题的原因/在我看来原因很多)第二段:问题1?原因1+措施1第三段:问题2?原因2+措施2第四段:问题3?原因3+措施3第五段:总结建议+预测6.discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion第一段:背景句+考题改写=双方观点列出来第2段:论证观点一第3段:论证观点二第四段:我自己的观点?针对话题2+3?4第五段:总结+建议+预测7.综合类A:驳论立场+论述(支持论据)+让步B:讨论1.优缺点2.分析原因+措施3.给出个人意
4、见主题描述C:综合类主题描述+驳论开头背景句引入话题对这个主题做出描述驳论:表明立场给出论证总结:做出适当让步conclusion驳论+措施/优(/缺)点开头背景句引入话题表明立场驳论:给出论证做出适当让步写明措施/写出优(/缺)点总结:conclusion各个段落结构及句型:功能句第一段1交代背景:l Todaythewayweconsiderhumanpsychologyandmentaldevelopmentisheavilyinfluencedbythegeneticsciences.l Nowadays,areplayingincreasinglyimportantpart/role
5、inourlife/whenl Inthepresentdays,withthedevelopmentof(thankstosth),stharebecomingn/moreandmoreheating/adj背景(time,科技发展环境,生活大环境。/quotation)2.交代话题:(东西=部分关键词)l Increasingnumberofpeoplearepayingattentiontosth/thetopicthatl 思路方式l What/whether/how+isworthdiscussing.l Increasingnumberofpeoplebegintoenjoy/ta
6、ketheadvantageof.l Maybethemost+adj最高级ofisXXX(要讨论的主题名词)when3.交代观点:(改写题干)原题:someonethink/say/hold:改结构+换词(同义词,词词组)AorB题型尤其适用l Itseemstobeacomplexissuebecausesomeholdtheopinionthatwhileothersarguethatl Agreatnumberofpeoplesupporttheidea/opinionthat,onthecontrary,somestandagainstit.l WhetherXXXshould.ha
7、slongbeendiscussed/isstillbeingdiscussedheatedly.4.提出观点()l AsfarasIamconcerned,Isidewiththeformerone.l Asforme/speakingofme/personallyspeaking,l Iseemorereasonsinthelatterpoint/l Iaminfavorofthepointswhichareputforwardbytheopponents.Body第二段开头5.支持的论点:(概括following1段)功能:我之所以支持这个观点是有如下的几个理由的。l Severalre
8、asonscanbeofferedtoprovethattherearemanybenefitsif.l Itisobvioustoseethatprofitsareinthemainpositionif.l Convincingargumentscanbedeliveredtoshowthat6.第一个论据(理由)Tostartwith/inthefirstplace/thefirstthing/reasonthatcomesintomymindis/Whatstrikesmefirstisthat7.解释(可选)Thatistosay/morespecifically/moreprecis
9、elyspeaking8.举例子编:可信,有用l Itiseasytotakeitasaconvincingexamplethat句子A.l WecaneasilyfindNagoodexample.l Forexample,句子A.9.让步?提出反方论点功能:但是,有人持有别的意见也是有道理有原因的。l However/ontheotherhand/incontrast/。,l thosepeoplewhobelieve/that(B观点/反方观)seemtopossesstheirownviews/reasons.1l Apartfromthebenefitsmentionedabove,
10、bynomeansshouldweignorethefactthattherearestillsomedownsidesof.l Admittedly,+B观点/反方观点.10.总结(强调观点/重申立场)(别抄题目:1.扣字数2.我的语言能力很苍白)Fromallabove/tosumup/inconclusion/,though(概括反方观点),wecannotavoidacceptingthetruththat正方观点11.建议性结尾:如果可以做点事情把我选择的观点变得更加完美,未来就会更加美好。Withthecooperationdevotedbyvarioussocialgroups,
11、wecanconfidentlycherishthehopethat预测12.分析原因:尾巴Diversecauses/factorscontributeto问题leadto问题例:Trafficjamisonethemostseriousproblemsinacitystransportation.Diversefactorsleadtothetrafficjaminthemoderncity.问题原因分析+解决方案题型主题段落展开方式l Firstlyandmostimportantly,问题方面1+原因+solutionsl Itcannotbeforgottenthat问题方面2+原因
12、+solutionsl Thereason/problemthat问题方面3shouldalsobetakenintoconsideration.+原因+solution13.提出解决方法Itisnotsimpletomakethissolvedthoughimpossibleisnothing.Firstlyproblem.Toease/tacklethisproblem,thefirstactionweshouldtakeisn./that/todo(Fortunately),名词(词组)canalsoserveasaneffectivesolution.Lastbutnottheleas
13、t,名词(词组)couldbetakenintotheapproachestomakeitdecrease/improve/do/better/solved/adj.开头段范文:1.The2008BeijingOlympicGamesmadethewholeworlddeeplyimpressedandalmosteveryonewouldbeastonishingatthesplendidBirdNeststadium.However,atthesametime,somepeoplecameupwiththequestionwhetheritwasreallyworthforthegover
14、nmentspendingsuchhugeamountofmoneyonbuildingit.Shouldntthemoneybespentonthingsofhigherpriority,forinstance,medicalfacilityanddevelopingeducation?Personally,Ijusthavethesamedoubt.2.Collegegraduatesarefacingdifficulttimefindingjobs.Oneofthemostfrequentreasonsisthatmostofthemwillbecriticizedbytheemploy
15、eesforlackingexperienceandpracticalworkingskills.Andthiswillnaturallyresultintograduatescomplaintthattheuniversitiesdontteachthemtheseskills.Therefore,whatshouldbethemainfunctionofauniversityhasarousedpeoplesdiscussion,workingskillsortheacademicknowledgeforitsownsakelikethetraditionalway?Asforme,Ise
16、emorereasonsinthelatterone.3.Peoplehavemorechoiceswhentheydecidewhattotakeasameansoftransportationthankstothehighdevelopmentofmoderntech.Planeswhichdischargemorepollutionwhileusemorefuelsarethefirstchoiceinpeoplesmind.Theargumentwhetheraircraftisinrealneedissomethingthatpeopleareconcerning.Inmypart,
17、weshoulddecreasetheuseofairplanesbecauseoftheirdrawbacks.4.Peopletodaysufferalotfromthepressureinwork,andformanyofthem,smokingmightbeoneofthemostfrequentwaystorelax,thoughitisnotveryhealth.Forinstance,theratesofsomecertaindiseasesareconsiderablyhigheramongthosechain-smokers.Peopleevenarguethatsmokingbringsserioussocialproblemsthusshouldbeforbidden.Personally,Isidewiththem.来源:网络转载