1、1Unit 5 The Value of MoneySection Reading for Writing剧本写作2本单元的写作任务是戏剧剧本创作。戏剧剧本属于记叙文。在写作形式上以对话为主,应主要包括戏剧人物、人物的语言、舞台说明性文字等。3Pre-writing()Learning to write after the modelTHE MILLION POUND BANK NOTEAct 2,Scene 1Narrator：Henry is walking along the street holding the bank note in his handHis coat is worn
2、 in several placesHe sees a sign for a tailors shopHenry：(entering the shop)Id like to have a suit coat1st Clerk：(in a rude manner)See him there(pointing to another clerk)2nd Clerk：Ready-made suits?Downstairs4Henry：(after going down some stairs)Can you show me a suit,please?3rd Clerk：Yes,I can,sirTh
3、is way,pleaseAh,here we are,the very thing you need1st Clerk：(pulling the 3rd clerk aside and whispering)Mr Reid says youd better serve him quick and get him out quick!3rd Clerk：I know what Im doingIve got eyes,havent I?Henry：Its a little too bright,isnt it?3rd Clerk：(looking at him with a frown)Its
4、 all we have in your sizeHenry：Well,I suppose it ought to do for nowIll take it53rd Clerk：GoodShall I put it in a box?Henry：NoIll wear itOh,Id rather not pay you nowId like to pay in a monthYou see,I dont have any small change3rd Clerk：(trying not to show hes angry)I suppose a gentleman like you onl
5、y carries very large billsHenry：Now,you shouldnt judge people by their clothesI just dont want to cause you trouble with a large note3rd Clerk：Its no trouble at all6Henry：In that case,theres no problem(He gives the clerk the bank noteThe clerk drops Henrys coatThen he folds the bill and slowly unfol
6、ds it again,as if looking at something he cant believe is there)Owner：Well,what seems to be the trouble?Henry：Im just waiting for my changeOwner：Give him his change,ToddGet going(after getting the bank note from Todd)Would itcould it be the one I saw in the papers last week?I remember thinking that
7、never would I hold such a note as this(to Henry)Oh,take off this coat,sir(to Todd)Go get the others,Todd！(to Henry again)Allow me,sir！This way,sir(in another part of the shop,where there is a wide range of options for Henry to choose from)7Henry：This is nice,but I really dont need itOwner：Never mind
8、(with a broad smile)Oh,its perfect！It was made for some king but hell just have to waitYoull need many suits for many occasionsYes,indeed you willHenry：Wait a minuteI only came here to get a suit coat to wear todayI dare not buy all these thingsYou would have to wait a long time to get paidOwner：A l
9、ong time,sir?Why,you dont have to worry about that!83rd Clerk：Yes,we can wait forever!Henry：Well,all rightIll take the suit coat for now and get the others laterOwner：Fine,fineYour address,sir?Henry：I dont have oneErIm movingOwner：Of course you are！Thats very normal！A busy man,Im sure，9篇章结构Before sh
10、owing the bank note：the clerks look down upon Henry and treat him in a rude manner After showing the bank note：the clerks and owner respect Henry a lot and even try hard to please him1011()Preparation for writingwords and phrases_一张大额支票_以一种方式_向某人展示 _ vt服务_ vt认为 a large bank notein amannershow sb sth
11、servesuppose12_宁愿_ vt支付 _ 小额零钱_ 通过判断 _担心would ratherpaysmall changejudgeby worry about13While-writing根据下面提示,写一篇戏剧,介绍亨利带着100万英镑的钞票去理发的过程。亨利正走在大街上，看见了一家理发店，决定去理他的长头发；理发匠用粗鲁的态度接待了他；亨利坐在椅子上等待；理发匠告诉他是否能够担负得起高昂的费用；理发结束后，亨利出示了百万英镑的钞票；理发匠十分吃惊，告诉他随时光临。14Step 1List the outline of the passagePart 1：_Part 2：_Pa
12、rt 3：_NarrationThe rude manner in which the barber treated HenryThe change of hairdressers attitude towards Henry15Step 2List the words,phrases and sentences1Words and phrases_正在做就在这时_的标志_无论何时你喜欢_做是某人的荣幸be doingwhena sign forwhenever you likeIt is ones honour to do16_理发_以一种粗鲁的态度_确实；实在_支付得起_零钱；零头have
13、 ones hair cutin a rude mannerindeedaffordchange172Sentences亨利正在大街上行走,这时他看到一个理发的标志。(when)_您能看到我头发太长了。(as)_无论什么时候,只要您想来就来,即使您仅有很少的头发要理！(even if)_为您服务是我的荣幸！(it作形式主语)_Henry is walking down the street when he sees a sign for a place that cuts hair As you can see,my hair is much too longPlease come here
14、whenever you like,even if you only have too little hair cut!It will be my honour to serve you!18Step 3Draft the passage by using the following wordswhen,indeed,even if(Henry is walking down the street when he sees a sign for a place that cuts hairHe decides to have it cut)HHenryBBarberH：Good afterno
15、on,Id like to have my hair cut,if I may(The barber looks at Henrys hair and continues cutting another mans hair)Er,Id really like a haircutAs you can see,its much too longB：(in a rude manner)Yes,I can see thatIndeed,I can19H：Fine,well,Ill have a seat then(He sits in one of the barbers chairsThe barb
16、er turns to look at Henry)B：Its quite expensive here,you know!Are you sure you can afford it?H：YesI think so(After his hair is cut,the barber tells Henry how much he must payHenry shows the barber the bank note)B：Why Mr(looks shocked)H：AdamsHenry AdamsIm sorryI dont have any changeB：Please dont worr
17、y!(wearing a big smile)Nothing to worry about!Nothing at all！Please come here whenever you like,even if you only have too little hair cut!It will be my honour to serve you!20Postwritingpolishing the passageExchange your passage with your partner and pay attention to the following points1Does the wri
18、ter explain why he/she changed/wanted to change?2Does the writer tell how the changes have improved or will improve his/her life?3Is the text wellorganised?4Does the writer use words and expressions to show similarities and differences?5Are there any grammar or spelling errors?6Does the writer use c
19、orrect punctuation?21常用词汇in addition to,besides,bothand,not onlybut also,now that,thus,yet,but,however,otherwise,on the contrary,unlike,instead,although,different from,in spite of,actually,as a matter of fact,while,at first,obviously22亮点表达1The story happened in Guang Dong in the early years of the 2
20、0th century这个故事发生于20世纪初叶的广东。2It is very kind of you,sir,but we are not allowed to accept tips先生,您真是太好了,但我们不能收小费。3Im afraid itll cost a large amount of money恐怕这得花费一大笔钱。4Well,I wonder if you could permit me to have one day off嗯,不知你能否允许我请一天假。235If you pay your bill now，I can help the other customers如果你
21、现在能付账的话,我就可以去照顾别的顾客。6When Henry opens the envelope and holds a million pound bank note in his hands,he is surprised but the owner and waiter are shocked当亨利把信封拆开时,他拿出一张百万英镑的钞票,感到吃惊,店主和服务员也惊呆了。247Were so very glad that you even entered our little eating placeIndeed,sir,I hope youll come here whenever
22、you like我们非常高兴你能走进我们这家小饭店,先生,真的,我希望您随时光临。8You must come whenever you want and have whatever you likeJust having you sit here is a great honour!您什么时候想来就来,想吃什么就吃什么,您就是在这儿坐一下也是我们莫大的荣幸！25写作技巧写好英语戏剧，应该注意以下几点：1确定剧情、故事梗概及主题；2确定剧中人物及其形象和性格特征(喜、怒、哀、乐、害羞、友好、慷慨、吝啬、恐惧、惊讶以及勇敢等)；3确定故事发生的时间、地点、场景及其变化；4构思戏剧的矛盾冲突,事件的起因、发展、高潮和结局等。26本节内容结束
