1、09 交友亲情篇交友亲情篇 （一）（一） 初中生活即将结束，这三年一定给你留下很多美好的回忆英语俱乐部征文要求写篇 110 词左 右文章描述你难忘的校园生活、 师生情或同学情 以及在临别之际， 对他们说的感激和祝福的话 文 中不得出现真实的人名和校名 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 How time flies!Our junior high school days are coming to an end ， and Id like to say a lot to you all who have helped me and stayed with me 【高分句型一】
2、（点题）Firstly，Id like to thank my great teachersThey teach me not only how to learn but also how to be a manThough they look strict and serious，they are always kind to me （感谢老师） Secondly，I want to thank my friendly classmatesAs long as I have trouble，they are always around meI miss the happy days when
3、 we stay with each otherI love all of you （感谢同学） Finally， Im going to thank my parents They always look after me very well to keep me healthy And they often encourage me to work hard at school 【高分句型二】 （感谢父母） （二）（二） 初三学生 Sandy 面临中考，面对父母和老师的期望及每天堆成山的作业感到非常苦恼，昨天因 为看了一小时的电视和妈妈吵架，最后摔门而去。于是她写信给老师倾诉烦恼，请你根据
4、下列提示 以老师 Nancy 的身份用英语给她写一封回信。 提示： 1如何舒缓目前的压力； 2如何安排好每天的学习和休息； 3如何处理与父母的关系。 注意： 1必须包括要点中所有提示内容，并作适当发挥； 2文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 3表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 4词数不少于 90 词（开头已给出，不计入总词数） 。 Dear Sandy， Im really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me Here is my advice_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Yours， Nancy 【
5、满分【满分范文范文】 Dear Sandy， Im really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me Here is my advice （点题） First， its a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax and reduce your pressure 【高分句型 一】Second， you can make plans for your everyday life After you study for about two hours， you
6、 can take a walk outside and try to relax Besides， dont stay up late Its not good for your healthThird， never argue with your parents You should learn to understand them and spend some time communicating with them Discuss your problems with them and tell them your ideas They will help you find bette
7、r ways to solve them （建议） In a word， you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents 【高分句型二】 （总结全文） Yours， Nancy （三）（三） 假如你是英语校报编辑徐玲 校报收到初一新生 Ben 的来信， 他提出了自己面临的两个问题 请 你根据 Ben 的来信，每个问题结合自己的过往经历提出一些建议并陈述理由 Dear Xu Ling， My name is Ben Im a Gra
8、de 7 student Recently， I feel worried because I have trouble getting used to life in middle school I always feel lonely because I have few friends Also， I have problem remembering new English words Can you give me some suggestions to help me？ Thank you Best wishes， Ben 注意： （1）回信应包括所有要点； （2）词数 90 左右（
9、信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数） ； （3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分 Dear Ben， Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends I think _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ Good luck with everything Yours, Xu Ling 【满分【满分范文范文】 D
10、ear Ben， Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school （表示理解） In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends I think it is a good choice to join some clubs In this way， you can make more friends who share the same interest with
11、you 【高分 句型一】 I used to go to the tennis club every day and that brought me good health as well as many good friends Whats more， youd better be friendly to others A smile costs nothing but gives much Also， you found it difficult to remember English words Reading more English stories can help you lear
12、n English words Our English teacher once encouraged us to see English films to help us remember words If you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day， it will be helpful 【高分句型二】 （问题和建议） I hope you will find these useful suggestions （希望） Good luck with everything Yours, Xu Ling （四）（四
13、） 根据所给图画，用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文要求完整叙述图画内容 _ _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 Last week， my parents and I decided to go to visit my grandmother We went to a shop at half past nine and bought some gifts （去商店买礼物） We went there by bus It took us forty minutes to get to my grandmothers house（坐汽车去那儿） As soon as we arrived
14、 there， my grandmother and my uncle went out to meet us 【高分句型一】 （外婆和舅舅出来接我们） My uncle prepared lunch for us （舅舅准 备午餐） At noon ， we had a wonderful lunch together （聚餐） In the evening， after we said goodbye to my grandmother and my uncle ，we went home （告别，回家） What a happy day we had!【高分句型二】I hope we c
15、an visit them as often as possible （感受） （五）（五） 假如你叫 Paul，是第一中学九年级学生，今年夏天即将毕业初中三年你变化很大，请根据表格内 容，用英语写一篇短文，记录自己的成长过程，并谈谈你的暑假计划 过去 1性格内向，不敢在人前讲话 2对学习不感兴趣，成绩不好 3不爱运动，沉迷电脑游戏 现在 1乐于分享，与同学相处很好 2各科成绩优异，（举一例） 3积极参加各类活动，（举一例） 暑假计划 （一至两点） 要求：1）词数 100 左右，文章开头已给，不计入总词数 2）短文需包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥 3）字迹工整，条理清楚，行文连贯 4）文中请勿
16、提及你的真实姓名和学校 Im Paul， a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School Ill graduate this summer Ive changed a lot during the last three years_ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 Im Paul， a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School Ill graduate this summer Ive changed a lot during the last three years In the past，I was too s
17、hy to speak in front of others 【高分句型】 （性格内向，不敢在人前讲话）I wasnt interested in study， so I was weak in all my subjects （对学习不感兴趣， 成绩不好） Whats more， I didnt like sportsInstead，I was crazy about computer games （不爱运动，沉迷电脑游戏） However， Ive changed greatly nowIm willing to share things with others and I get alo
18、ng well with my classmates （乐于分享， 与同学相处很好） I study so well that Im a top student in our class now 【高 分句型】 （各科成绩优异）Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities （积极参加各 类活动）Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition During the coming summer holiday，Ill
19、help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself 【高分句型】 （暑假计划） （六）（六） 百善孝为先,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。某英语报社正在举办以弘扬中华传统文化为主题 的征文活动,请你以We should honor our parents为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动。内容包括: What do you often do for your parents? Why should we honor our parents? How should we honor our parents? 要求
20、： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数） ； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 We should honor our parents As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China._ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 We should honor our parents As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of
21、 China.I honor my parents.I often help my parents do housework in my spare time.I think its our duty to honor our parents.Our parents take much effort to raise us, so its important for us to honor them.They love us so we should love and respect them. First of all, we should try our best to study har
22、d to make them proud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.Next, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely.Wed better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.Its also important to tell our parents we love them. 【
23、解析】 本题要求考生以我们应该尊敬我们的父母为题结合所给的内容要点，写一篇作文。这是篇材料作 文，主要内容要点已给，所以考生要围绕着要点，进行写作，不要遗漏，当然顺序可以适当调整。 这篇作文又句型亮点，例如：As we know，众所周知；.I think its our duty to do sth 等等，其次文 章结构也比较清晰，例如第二段的衔接词，First of all，Then，Next，使用的简单而恰当。 （七）（七） 在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心帮助同学？是体贴、 理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋好友？还是成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以I
24、am not a child anymore为题，记叙你在学习生活中经历的事，表明你已经不再是一个小孩子。 （注意：短文中不能出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 ） _ _ _ _ _ 【满分【满分范文范文】 I am not a child any more I am a 16-year-old girl now. I used to be weak and thin. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. The most important thing is that I have learned to care
25、about others. It was a Saturday evening. My mother is ill, so I cooked the meal. My mother said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. After supper ,my mother said: Dear, you have grown up. I realized I was not a child any more. 【解析】 1.题干解读：本文属于话题作文，写作要点从我的改变和生活中经历的一件事展开描述。 2.例文点评：例文
26、采用第一人称描述，时态主要为一般过去时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。 围绕主题展开作文，逻辑性强，句子通顺。 3.高分亮点：used to do sth 过去常常做某事；asas 如一样；My mother said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty 句型中although引导的让步状语从句。 （八八） 请你根据上面五个问题的内容及你的回答，结合以下提示，以How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。 提示： 1. 谨慎
27、交友。 2. 不参与打架斗殴。 3. 面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。 参考词汇：1. self-protection（自我保护） 2. bully(n./v.欺凌） 3. personal safety（人身安全）4. have violent behaviors(打架斗殴） How Can We Protect Ourselves at School? _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 这是一篇话题作文，以How Can We Protect Ourselves at School?为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短 文。本文人称主要第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。仔细阅读所给材
28、料，认真审题，确定主题，确定 要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容。字数80-100词。要运用合适的连接词或 过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有 无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。 【满分【满分范文范文】 How Can We Protect Ourselves at School? School bullies happen in almost every school. In my school, we sometimes have bullies and some students are hurt,
29、 so it is really bad for us to bully others or be bullied at school. We are supposed to stop any school bully when we are in the trouble of it. For example, we should stay calm before a bullying behavior happens. We should always be friendly and helpful when making friends with others. Here are some
30、 of my ideas about stopping school bullies. Firstly, we will learn how to have a self-protection because our personal safety is the most important. Secondly, we should be peaceful with others at all times and cant have any violent behavior. Finally, obeying school rules is also a way to avoid school
31、 bullies. Im hoping that no school bullies will happen at school in the future, do you think so? （九）（九） 学校英语社团正在组织题为My Family的征文活动。假如你是李明，请根据以下内容提示用英 语完成征文。 内容要点如下： 1. 三口之家，家庭幸福，邻里和睦； 2. 父母为教师，在校深受欢迎； 3. 分担家务，周末户外活动； 4. 相互陪伴，经常交流，良好家规助我成长； 5. 请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。 注意： 1文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 2词数：60 80； 3内容连贯
32、，不要逐条翻译； 4标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： popular adj. 受欢迎的 activity n. 活动 rule n规矩 My Family Im Li Ming. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 【写作思路写作思路】 本文属于材料作文，介绍我的家庭。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯， 符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。 写作时可以从以下几个方面做起： 认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要 求。 构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的 话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确 的关键。 初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、 连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连 词，使句子衔接自然。 修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检 查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要 求等。 【满分【满分范文范文】 My Family
