1、读后续写话题素材一人际交往阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。There was once a guy who suffered from cancer,a cancer that cant be cured.Hewas 18 years old and he could die anytime.One day,he wanted to go out for walking.So hismothergave him permission.He walked down his block and found a
2、lot of stores.He passed aCDstore and looked through the front doorfor a secondas he walked.He stopped and went back to look into the store.He saw a beautiful girl about his age and he knew it wasloveat first sight.He opened the door and walked in,not looking at anything else but her.He walked closer
3、 and closer until he was finally at the front desk where she sat.She began to looked up and asked,Can I help you?She smiled and he thought it was the most beautiful smile he had ever seen before.Uh.Yeah.Umm.I would like to buy a CD,he looked at her andsaid.He picked one out and gave her money for it
4、.Would you like me to wrap it for you?she asked,smiling her cute smile again.人际交往人际交往主题语境：主题语境：社会交往语篇类型：语篇类型：短篇小说语篇难度：语篇难度：关键词：关键词：a CD store短文词数：短文词数：348建议时间：建议时间：20 minsHe nodded and she went to the back.She came back with the wrapped CD and gave it to him.He took it and walked out of the store.Fr
5、om then on,he went to that store every day and bought a CD,and she wrapped it for him.He took the CD home and put it in hiscloset.He was still too shy to ask her out.His mother found out about this and told him to just ask her.So the next day,he took all his courage and went to the store.He bought a
6、 CD once again.She went to the back of the store and came back with it wrapped.He took it and lefta piece of paperof his phone number on the desk and ran out.RRRRRING!Shewas surprised tofind that.One day the phone rang,and the motherpicked it upand said,Hello?“注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关
7、键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：It was the girl!Paragraph 2：The mother was deeply moved by her son.语篇解读语篇解读这是一篇记叙文类读后续写。通过阅读原文，可以归纳其发展脉络：身患绝症憧憬美好音响店购买CD邂逅美丽女孩暗自眷恋发出爱的信号原文的情节提示设置的悬念：男生邂逅美丽的女孩后，激发了他怎样的勇气和动力？在生命走向尽头的前夕，他勇敢地迈开了什么步伐？这些勇气反映在哪些方面？或体现在什么东西上？母亲是如何揭示这些秘密的？续写的情节
8、构思：（1）母亲接起电话；（2）女孩的反应；（3）母亲在收拾儿子的遗物；（4）发现的东西；（5）真情实意；（6）令人感动的理由。难句分析难句分析原文：There was once a guy who suffered from cancer,a cancer that cant be cured.译文：曾经有一个人，他患了癌症一种无法治愈的癌症。分析：该句含有两个定语从句。第一个定语从句是由指人的关系代词who引导，修饰先行词a guy，该关系代词在定语从句中作主语。第二个定语从句是由指物的关系代词that引导，修饰先行词a cancer，该关系代词在定语从句中也作主语，且第二个定语从句是解释
9、说明上文提到的cancer，故翻译时该加上破折号。笔前点睛笔前点睛审题分析审题分析 审要求1.文章属于记叙文；2.顺应文章发展脉络，使用第三人称进行续写；3.以一般过去时为主，适时使用相应的过去时态和一般现在时；4.后续事件须自然过渡、合情合理；5.突出正能量，展示积极向上的勇敢精神。思路点拨思路点拨第一段：1.母亲听闻女孩的电话而抽泣；2.告诉女孩儿子已经故去；3.母亲思绪万千，整理儿子遗物；4.发现儿子写给女孩的情书。第二段：1.母亲极为感动；2.一份朴素的情感；3.让儿子活了更长时间；4.活要活得美好，梦要梦得热烈，爱要爱得完整。高分范文高分范文Paragraph 1:It was th
10、e girl!Themothercouldnt hide her deep sadness,so she began to cry and said,Lovely girl,my son is already gone.The girl kept silentfor a second,and then continued to comfort the boys mother.A few minutes later,she had to say goodbye to the mother.Eventually,the mother lost control of her emotions and
11、 burst out crying.What a good girl!she said.And then she was collecting his sons relic in his room.Shewas surprised tofind out a new notebook,which was placed among all his CDs,from which the notebook dropped.There was full of loveon it,and on the last page it was written as follows:Hi.pretty girl,I
12、 wrote RRRRRING ona piece of paperto you.Do you see it?Paragraph 2:The mother was deeply moved by her son.Sure enough,this kind of courage could make people touched.What is love?As an old saying goes,Live beautifully,dream passionately and love completely.(157 words)篇章分析篇章分析重要短语hide ones deep sadnes
13、s 隐藏某人的深痛keep silent 保持沉默say goodbye to 向说再见lose control of 失去对的控制burst out crying 突然哭起来be full of love 满满的爱as follows 如下sure enough足够了 高级句型1.What a good girl！（what引导的感叹句）2.a new notebook,which was placed among all his CDs,from which the notebook dropped.（句中含有两个定语从句，即which引导的非限制性定语从句和“介词from+which”引
14、导的非限制性定语从句）3.As an old saying goes,Live beautifully,dream passionately and love completely.（关系代词as引导非限制性定语从句）高分解密高分解密1.作者从语篇材料内容的阅读到段落开头语和标注的关键词的综合分析，再到想象力的自由发挥，充分展示了高超的续写文章的能力。表达逻辑性强，层次分明，上下文衔接完美。2.语言运用丰富。使用了较多的高级词汇，如hide ones deep sadness、keep silent、say goodbye to、lose control of、burst out crying
15、、full of love、as follows 以及sure enough等。高级句式运用得体，如which引导的非限制性定语从句，as引导的非限制性定语从句等。3.过渡性词语的使用恰到好处，如so、and then、a few minute later、eventually 以及sure enough等。模拟训练参考范文写作思路读后续写话题素材二人生态度人生态度人生态度阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Everybody has to facebad daysin their life.Some face
16、 diseases,some face fears,some face poverty,some face helplessness,etc.No one can escape from it.It is a rule of life.Two things always combine together like joy and sadness,laugh and cry,health and illness,profit and loss,morning and night,victory and failure.Likewise,good daysand bad days always c
17、ombine together.You know what is the biggest advantage of bad days?First of all in hard days you come to know yourskillsandyour potential.All the superheros we watch in the television had badly past life therefore they are what they are today.In bad times we try hard to come out of it.Remember one t
18、hing that when bad days finish and good days start a person changes hisattitudeand forgets his pain and this isthe reasonthat good days and bad days keep on coming and going.One thing I must say is that your hard days are your teacher and nobody can understand what you face.Make sure whatever you ha
19、ve faced you will never do that with others though your whole life passes in good days or bad days.主题语境：主题语境：人生态度语篇类型：语篇类型：论说文语篇难度：语篇难度：关键词：关键词：life短文词数：短文词数：320建议时间：建议时间：25minsWhen bad days come apersonfirst of all cannot understand what is going on,why me?But after some time he realizes his streng
20、th and starts doing every single thing to come out of it.Thatjourneyis very painful but when you once cross it you will find your journey very meaningful.You have totally changed your thoughts,your perception（感知）,and you can understand life better.You getthe meaning of your life.In short,you start b
21、ecoming wise.The biggestlessonof life during bad days according to me is that a person becomes wise and a giver whom he wasnt before.Life means to create it.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph 1：Therefore,you shouldnt fear hard days in
22、your life.Paragraph 2：However,when you go into the good days.语篇解读语篇解读生活中的事情是五彩缤纷、绚丽多彩的，是喜怒哀乐的混合体，所以在艰辛的日子望不气馁，在阳光明媚的日子里不自做，要有清醒的生活理念，才能成为生活的强者、胜者。难句分析难句分析原文：One thing I must say is that your hard days are your teacher and nobody can understand what you face.译文：有一件事我必须说，你的艰难日子是你的老师，你所面对的，没有人能理解。分析：这是
23、一个主从复合句。主语中I must say为省略关系词的定语从句，that引导表语从句，其中从句中的what引导宾语从句。文章来源文章来源本文选自英文网站，原文题目为：“Lifes Biggest Lessons During Hard Days”在艰苦岁月中生活的最大的教训，作者为Sonia Kaur。笔前点睛笔前点睛审题分析审题分析 审要求读后续写，本文属于议论文；审人称、时态第二人称、兼顾第一人称，以一般现在时为主；审要点艰辛的日子不气馁，生活态度积极，光明就在眼前；好日子要珍惜，否则会家破人亡，遗憾终生。原文所给的关键词分类人物：person事件：bad days、life、good
24、days、skills、attitude、the meaning of your life、the reason、journey、lesson在续写时，除了注意原文给出的关键词，还需要注意以下线索：1.What does the author think of bad days？2.What do bad days bring you？3.How do you speak of bad days？4.Whats the relationship between bad days and good days？5.How can you become a winner of life？思路点拨思路
25、点拨本篇续写内容难度大，涉及对生活的感悟，该话题对学生来说较深奥，可以先把文章理解透，正确把握原文内容，根据最后段落，发现规律和逻辑关系，结合提示语、提示词从而找到续写线索，本文着重写了bad days对人生的影响以及人们如何才能把不利条件变为有利条件，从中汲取教训避免走弯路，然后再过渡到good days的叙述上，但要珍惜来之不易的生活，不能让它流失，这样才能成为生活的胜者。此外，要注重提升表达层次，多用复杂句式和高级词汇。高分范文高分范文Paragraph 1：Therefore,you shouldnt fear hard days in your life.You should fir
26、st think what you want in your life,and then you should smile at everything and have a positiveattitudeto start finding a good idea of solving it with yourskills.This is one of the most important things I have learnt in my life.To pass throughthe bad daysis the same as for apersonto have a hardjourn
27、ey.However,by doing that,youll change yourself and get a bright future in the end.Paragraph 2:However,when you go into the good days,you should value them and work hard than ever.Otherwise,youll lose the things belonging to you.For example,one of my friends once had a rich,happy family,but he didnt
28、work hard so that he had to drop out of school,which made his parents sad.Even worse,his parents got parted because of him some day,so that he felt sad and regretful.So you should knowthe meaning of your life.(152 words)高分解密高分解密本篇续写能够依据提示句、提示词并结合原文内容合理安排了所要补充的内容，较好地完成了续写任务；另外，作者在使用复杂句式的同时，注重段、句之间的逻辑
29、关系，较多地使用了过渡词，如 however、otherwise、for example、even wo篇章分析篇章分析 first.and then.首先接着，表示做某事的顺序，此处说明做事情的逻辑性，句中的what引导宾语从句。I have learnt.为省略关系代词的定语从句。过渡词However起到承上启下的作用，表示意思转折。本句为并列复合句。but连接前后两个并列分句，后一分句中so that引导结果状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句。本句中的过渡词Even worse强化观点，而so that引导结果状语从句。rse等，使得全文结构紧凑，成为得高分的亮点之处。模拟训练参考
30、范文Paragraph 1Paragraph 2范文解析Paragraph 1Paragraph 2读后续写话题素材三法治意识法治意识法治意识阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One dayKavyaand I were playing with the racketballand the ball went intoTakkus house.Though we were scared,we went to his house and asked him if he could give us our bal
31、l.He said,No.We felt helpless.Suddenly,I had an idea.There wasa water tankbehind Takkus house.I looked at it and said to Kavya,Kavya,look at this.We can climb the water tank and jump over the gate.Kavya agreed,but we were both wearing skirts.We couldnt climb.It doesnt matter.We can see tomorrow.Dont
32、 forget to weartrousers,said Kavya.I said bye to her and went backhome.The next day I went to Kavyas house early.We were both wearing trousers.Best of luck,said Kavyas brotherVijay.He knew everything.He said,Shout loudly if you need me.We went to the water tank.Who will climb first?asked Kavya.You I
33、 said.She agreed.She climbed down into Takkus house.I followed her and then we were lookingunder a bedfor the ball when we heard a noise.It was Vijay.Mother is calling you,he whispered.We hurried and took out the lost ball.But along with the ball was a gold bar!We quickly took both the ball and the
34、gold bar and climbed up the water tank again.主题语境：主题语境：法治意识语篇类型：语篇类型：个人故事语篇难度：语篇难度：关键词：关键词：ball短文词数：短文词数：311建议时间：建议时间：21 minsWhen we reached Kavyas house,the TV was on.It was news time.I couldnt believe my ears when it said that 20gold barswere stolen from a gold shop.They showed a picture of the go
35、ld bars and it was exactly like the one we had found.We all knew it because there was a look of surprise on everyones face.We quickly told the story toKavyas mother.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：When we finished it,Kavyas mothe
36、r felt shocked.Paragraph 2：When we arrived home.语篇解读语篇解读本文是记叙文，叙述了作者与朋友一起寻找丢失的球的过程中，偶然发现了一块金条，而那块金条与新闻报道中丢失的金条一模一样，然后快速地告诉了朋友的妈妈难句分析难句分析原文：Though we were scared，we went to his house and asked him if he could give us our ball.译文：尽管我们很害怕，我们还是去了他家并且问他是否可以把球给我们。分析：这是一个主从复合句。连词though引导让步状语从句，主句中并列连词and 连
37、接两个并列谓语；连词if引导的从句作动词asked的宾语。文章来源本文选自英文网站 ，原文题目为“The Lost Ball”丢失的球。笔前点睛笔前点睛审题分析审题分析 审要求读后续写，本文语篇类型属于记叙文；审人称、时态以第一人称为主，兼顾第三人称；时态主要是一般过去时。审要点报警到Takku的家警察搜寻找到赃物偷来的金条收获奖品同学的欢迎和尊敬 原文所给的关键词分类地点：Takkus house、home、under a bed人物：Kavya、Vijay、Kavyas mother事件：ball、gold bars事物：a water tank、trousers在续写时，除了注意原文给出
38、的关键词，还需要注意以下线索：1.Why didnt Takku give their lost ball？2.What did Kavyas mother do after listening to their story？3.What would the police give them？4.Why were they pleased with a reward？5.How did their classmates feel？思路点拨思路点拨本篇续写暗示有两方面的事情，第一是发现Takku家有偷来的金条后的处理方式。第二是Kavya和“我”协助警察抓到小偷后警察、家人和同学等对她们的看法。
39、只要把这两件事情弄清楚，注意两段之间的联系就能完成这篇续写。另外要把握好提示语，结合提示词，适当运用高级句式就能写出高质量的作文。高分范文高分范文Paragraph 1:When we finished it,Kavyas mother felt shocked.So she decided to call the police.After the police came quickly,they followed us toTakkus house.When they entered the house,they searched the house at once.To our surpr
40、ise,the police found moregold barsunder a bed.As a result,they caught Taktu.At the same time,the police said thanks to us and they gave us each a bag as a reward.What made me pleased was that we helped the police catch a thief.So we returnedhomeexcitedly.Paragraph 2:When we arrived home,we couldnt w
41、ait to open the bags.There was an investigative book and a pen forkavya.And there was an investigative book and aballfor me.So I gave my investigative book to kavyas brother Vijay.AfterKavyas mothersaw what we did,she felt very satisfied.The next day,when we went to school,our classmates were all wa
42、iting for us at the gate of the school.They hugged us together firmly and treated us as heroes.(164 words)高分解密高分解密本篇续写内容与原文融合度高，故事性强，是原文恰如其分的补充和延伸，没有这部分续写，读者就不知道最后的结论，坏人就不能得到惩治，好人不能得到肯定，故事就不完整，尤其是原文的最后一句把经过很快地告诉Kavya的妈妈，那么接下来会发生什么事情呢？读者肯定会努力地猜测。另外，作者虽然多次使用时间状语从句，但不显得单调，分别用了连词after、when等，是语境中的自然运用；再者
43、，本文中大量使用了高级词汇：call the police、to our surprise、as a result、reward、couldnt wait to、investigative等。模拟训练参考范文Paragraph 1Paragraph 2读后续写话题素材四公益事业公益事业公益事业阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“Can you tell me if anyone in our store doescommunityservice?”Bill asked.A person said,“I kno
44、w that Rose does.She helps the homeless at herchurch.”Bill,my husband,had recently been transferred to this store as the store manager.Bill liked to recognize employees who worked in community service.He met with Rose and found out about the outreach program operating out of her inner-city church.Bi
45、ll told Rose that he thought I would enjoy helping her.When Bill came homethat nightafter the two-hour commute,he told me about his conversation with Rose.I was excitedat the idea of helpingin such a program.I started to spread the word that Bill had an employee who was helping the homeless out of h
46、er church.I asked if anyone wanted to help bydonating usable items.The response was amazing.Different kinds of donations were flooding in.主题语境：主题语境：公益事业语篇类型：语篇类型：个人故事语篇难度：语篇难度：关键词：关键词：snowmobile suit短文词数：短文词数：346建议时间：建议时间：24 mins I took this opportunity to clean out the closets in our home,too.Bill
47、had an overcoat he seldom wore.I put the overcoat in,along with clothes our children had outgrown and several articles of clothing of my own.Every so often Rose would stop in Bills office and tell him stories aboutthe mission.One day she talked about an overcoat that her minister had taken from the
48、clothes we had donated.As Rose described the overcoat,Bill knew it was his.He was happy that he had been able to provide this young minister with the warm coat.One cold day I walked by our downstairs closet.I noticed asnowmobilesuitthat had been our oldest son,Todds.The thought to put this snowsuit
49、in for the mission immediately came to my mind.I dismissed the thought as I had been saving this snowsuit for Brandon,our youngest son.Toddhad died in a car accident a few years ago and for some reason,I had saved this snowmobile suit forBrandon.This was one of the very few things I hadsavedof Todds
50、.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph 1：I shouldnt have decided to give up thisspecialsnowsuit I had been saving all these years.Paragraph 2：Word about the mission spread like wildfire.语篇解读语篇解读你曾经做过社区服务吗？Bill所在商店的员工Rose常做社区服务。在Bill夫妇的帮助下
