1、1010203概况三点击此处输入相关文本内容整体概况概况一点击此处输入相关文本内容概况二点击此处输入相关文本内容2。1句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整 或或句子成分多余句子成分多余 2 词性误用词性误用 3主谓不一致主谓不一致 4根据中文逐字硬译根据中文逐字硬译35.名词可数与不可数的误用名词可数与不可数的误用6.介词介词to和不定式符号的混淆和不定式符号的混淆7.动宾搭配不当动宾搭配不当8.词组搭配错误词组搭配错误9综合性语言错误综合性语言错误:有诸如时态，有诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误45 改为1：改为2：改为3：6
2、 7 8 9 10 11 12 as well as 13 14例Its likely to success if you have confident,diligent and intelligence.改为1：You are likely to succeed if you have confidence,diligence and intelligence.15 改为2：Its likely that you will achieve success if you are confident,diligent and intelligent.改为3：16例2You cant succes
3、s without your efforts.改为1：You cant succeed without your efforts.改为2：You cant obtain success without your efforts.改为3：You cant become successful without your efforts.17改为4：Success is no longer out of reach with your great efforts.18例3As the development of science and technology,-改为：With the developm
4、ent of science and technology,-/As the science and technology develop-19改为：I usually do some public services for free,trying my best to serve the public.20例5 The public service advertisement is benefit to us.改为1:The public service advertisement is beneficial to us.改为2:The public service advertisemen
5、t benefits us.改为3：The public service advertisement is of great benefit to us.21改为4:We benefits a lot from the public service advertisement.22例6Some seniors were died because of without their childrens support.改为：Some seniors died for lack of their childrens support.23例7The old man was hit by a car w
6、hen he across the street.改为：The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street.24例8The children are supposed to spare some time to company their parents.改为：The children are supposed to spare some time to accompany our parents chatting.25例9With the rapid development of economic,the conditio
7、ns of our life is improving.改为：With the rapid development of economy,the conditions of our life are improving.26例10They need economical concerned,but also mental concerned.改为：They need not only financial support,but also emotional support.27例11With the development of the mordern social,more and more
8、 families prefer to have one child or even none,which cause the sum of the seniors has been increase quickly.改为：With the development of the modern society,an increasing number of families prefer to have one child or even none,which cause the rapid increase of the sum of the seniors.cause sth.cause s
9、b.to do sth.28例12The fire was because of the wrong of electricity.改为：The fire was due to electric fault.29例13The cause of the fire includes peoples careless and dry weather.改为：The cause of the fire includes peoples carelessness and dry weather.30例14Although I am not a specialize student of computer,
10、I have enough knowledge about computer and I have ever take a part-time summer job as a sellman before.改为：Although I am not a computer major/a student majoring in computer,I have enough knowledge about computer and I have ever taken a part-time summer job as a salesman before.31例15Many students choi
11、ce go to the library in their spare time in order to get more knowledge.改为：Many students choose to go to the library in their spare time in order to update their knowledge.32 改为：There are too many things we can do to protect our earth.33 改为1：Hard work then enables/helps us to achieve the success.改为2
12、:We are bound to succeed through hard work.34改为:With 35 改为：36373839.Students should Students should strive to learn knowledge.40 4142/Education and Science Institute 43 44 4546474849505152改为1:/improve earth environment.53改为2:/improve earth environment.54改为1:改为2:55改为1:改为2:改为3:56改为:57改为1:改为2:改为3:Vario
13、us 58改为:59改为:60改为：61 621、使用有难度的词汇；2、使用形容词修饰名词，用副词修饰动词或整个句子；3、使用被动语态；4、使用倒装句；(not only.but also.；only.)5、尽可能地使用名词，而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。63There be+主语主语+定语定语+状语状语.1.There must be(a variety of)reasons for this.2.There is no point in talking about it about again.(sense/use/good)3.There is no denying the fact th
14、at air pollution is an extremely serious problem.644.There remains nothing(more)(to be done).5.There is a great change(produced in the worlds communications).6.There is something(you dont know).7.There are about 78%of the college students (wanting to further their study after their graduation).65名词化
15、结构名词化结构1名词从句转换成名词短语名词从句转换成名词短语That the women actively participate in public life causes the change of their role in the society.The womens active participation in public life-662.表语从句转换成名词短语表语从句转换成名词短语 One of the positive effects of physical exercise is that it contributes directly to a persons phys
16、ical health.-is its direct contribution to a persons physical health.673由由of 连接含有连接含有by 的名词短语的名词短语That James Watt invented the steam engine started the Industrial Revolution in the 18th century.The invention of the steam engine by James Watt684.被动结构转换成名词被动结构转换成名词It has been suggested that we should
17、spare no effort 不遗余力不遗余力to beautify our environment.A suggestion has been made that-695.副词与动词一起转换成名词短语副词与动词一起转换成名词短语The computer is chiefly characterized by accuracy and quick computation.计算计算The chief characteristic of the computer is-706.介词短语与动词一起转换成名词短语介词短语与动词一起转换成名词短语The professor explained the
18、theory of relativity to his students in detail.The professor gave his students a detailed explanation of-7.动词转换成介词短语动词转换成介词短语Some problems are being discussed.Some problems are under discussion.71Exercise:1.He has breakfast quickly.2.As the science and technology develop,the peoples living standard
19、is on the rise.3.There is still room for improving your work.4.What he said is brief and to the point.5.The money in itself is not important to us.721.He has a quick breakfast.2.With the development of science and technology,the peoples living standard is on the rise.3.There is still room for improv
20、ement in your work.4.His words is brief and to the point.5.The money in itself is of no importance to us.73平行结构平行结构1.名词平行名词平行The doctor recommended plenty of food,sleep and exercise.2.形容词平行形容词平行Air travel is fast,safe and convenient.3.副词平行副词平行He always speaks English slowly and clearly.744.非谓语动词短语平行
21、非谓语动词短语平行They waited for hours at the airport,reading and sleeping.5.动词平行动词平行Lucy and Lily lived,worked and studied together.756.不定式平行不定式平行 To go ice skating and to go skiing are popular winter sports in North china.7.动名词平行动名词平行 My sister likes dancing,swimming and bicycling.768.从句平行从句平行 extra studi
22、es bring about unhealthy impacts on physical growth of the children and because extra studies deprive children of the time to play and communicate with their peers,we may safely draw the conclusion that it is absurd不合理的，荒谬的不合理的，荒谬的 to force children to take extra studies after school.77Proof reading
23、：1.To get a job you are satisfied with,it is not only depends on your ability,how to succeed in a job interview is also very important.2.Firstly,you should have a good appearance,tidy clothes,making hair well.3.Her speech is witty诙谐的诙谐的,interesting and she plans it carefully.4.Her ideas were progres
24、sive and therefore adopted without doubts.78 Reference1.To get a satisfactory job not only depends on your ability,but also on a successful job interview.2.Firstly,you should have a good appearance,tidy clothes,well-done hair.3.Her speech is witty诙谐的诙谐的,interesting and carefully planned.4.Her ideas
25、were progressive and therefore were adopted without doubts.79物称表达法物称表达法1.被动语态被动语态The question is supposed to be more complicated.(be thought,regarded,believed,estimated/evaluated)2.主语从句主语从句(1)It+be+adj.+thatIt is highly important that we reach a correct conclusion.(clear,obvious,likely,surprising,tr
26、ue)80(2)It+be+V-ed+that It was pointed out that computer skills will enhance提高，增加提高，增加 their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.(well-known,generally believed,admitted,universally held,reported,stated)81问题提问与解答问答HERE COMES THE QUESTION AND ANSWER SESSION82添加标题添加标题添加标题添加标题此处结束语点击此处添加段落文本 .您的内容打在这里，或通过复制您的文本后在此框中选择粘贴并选择只保留文字83谢谢聆听THANK YOU FOR LISTENING演讲者：XX 时间：202X.XX.XX84
