1、高考英语助人优秀品格续写练习与讲解阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs.Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet.People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs.Meredith was
2、 a most kind and thoughtful woman.She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor.She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help.When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before.There was a ma
3、n sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy.The little boy -his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to e
4、arn some money, but I dont see what he can do.”After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard.“I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara.“His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,” said Harry.“We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments, John
5、said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”The other children also jumped up all attention.When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one.“I tell you what we can do,” said John.“You know that big box
6、 of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too.With everything ready, Bernard started out
7、 on his new business.【写作思路】1.理清脉络Elements of the storywhowhenwhatwhyhow2.读出冲突3.明确主题4.读出伏笔5.构思情节6.写作（情节亮点语言）续写第一段：1.2.第二段：（1）（2）（3）好句积累【写作指导】1.理清脉络Elements of the storywhoa kind family: Mrs.Meredith, John, Harry, Claraa family in need: Bernard, Bernards sick father, Bernards motherwhenOne morningwhat
8、The Merediths wanted to help Bernards family to earn money but didnt know how to make it.whyBernards father was sick and his mother could not go out to work.howbyselling popcornwherein a small community2.读出冲突“He wants to very much to earn some money, but I dont see what he can do.”3.明确主题Helping othe
9、rs also helps yourself.It is love that makes the world go around and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.It turned out that not only did they help a boy in need, but also gave themselves the sweet taste of helping others .4.读出伏笔1.There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and c
10、ould not go out to work, and their little boy.2.“He is such a help to his mother.He wants very much to earn some money, but I dont see what he can do.”3.After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard.“I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara.“His family is suffe
11、ring so much.”4.“You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”5.构思情节做爆米花：准备材料着手做做好了爆米花Bernard得知孩子们帮助自己后的反应场景一：准备做爆米花的材料并着手做爆米花。场景三：把Benard请到现场以及Bernard的反应。场景二：做爆米花卖爆米花开始不太顺利转机爆米
12、花卖光主题升华场景一：一起出去街上卖爆米花。场景二：没有卖出去，大家很难过。场景三：想出一个好点子。场景四：爆米花卖光了，孩子们很开心。场景五：主题升华6.写作（情节亮点语言）续写第一段：1.准备材料与做爆米花:With her support, the children made a plan toput the idea into action.Harry, go next door to borrow a popcorn machine! Clara, fetch some corn for popcorn! John said excitedly before he went to t
13、he store to buy some seasonings and some paper bags.Without wasting a minute, the children headed for the supermarket together, where they bought corn, sugar, butter and paper bags.No sooner had they arrived home than Meredith brought their uncles popcorn machine home.After a detailed division of la
14、bour(劳动分工后), she took out the popcornmaker bought six months ago.Harry andClara were busy making paper bagswhileJohnput the rightamount of dessertto the corn .2.告诉Bernard计划以及Bernard的反应Harry ran to the Bernards and dragged him to the scene.Hearing their plan, Bernard jumped for joy, tears of happines
15、s and gratitude welling up in his eyes.Seeing what they did for him ,Bernard thanked them for their generous help,tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes. Hearing the explanation, Bernard stood mute（哑）,eyes brimmed with tears.After hearing the explanation, Bernardwas over whelmed with excitement a
16、nd gratitude.第二段：1.卖爆米花Carrying the basket with excitement, he set off to sell the tasty popcorn from door to door.But to their disappointment,it turned out thatno one came to buy their popcorn.When evening fell,their spirits sank.Exhausted and hungry,they decided to go back home, not knowing what t
17、o do with the popcorn.升华主题It turned out thatnot only did they helpaboyin need,but also gave themselves the sweet taste of helping others .Bernard wanted to give them some money.John said they had already got the best reward-being helpful to others.He knew, from the bottom of his heart, that it was n
18、ot just money, but also love and sacrifice, that filled his pot.It is love that makes the world go around and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.It was such a small kindness that brightened the day of the Bernard .Although the act of kindness is small , it can lighten up others life.In a sense
19、,the biggest difference between corn and popcorn was that popcorn had a lot of love .He did not forget the help of Merediths family, and he also did what he could to help those in need.7.范文赏析：When Mrs.Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too.So, they went to the local superma
20、rket together.They boughta popcorn machine andsomepaperbags for popcorn.When they got home, they made a lot of popcornwith uncles cornand put it in the special bags.With the popcorn, they went to Bernards home.They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn.Bernard and his parents were very grateful.And t
21、he Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family.With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn.He earned a lot of money.Then, he wanted to be self-dependent.Therefore, he asked Mrs.Meredith to teach him how
22、 to make popcorn.After that, not only did he sell popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better.Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man.He did not forget the help of Merediths family, and he also did what he could to help those in need.范文点评：【分析】本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事。【详解】1.认真读懂所给提供的材料:善良的Meredith一家住在一个小社区里，他们想帮助一个贫困的家庭。那家的男主人生病卧床，女主人要照顾丈夫、无法外出赚钱，家中的小男孩Bernard也做不了什么事情，生活十分困难。后来，Meredith的孩子想出了一个主意-制作爆米花，让Bernard去卖爆米花。2.根据所给材料确定文章主题:Meredith如何通过制作和卖爆米花帮助Bernard一家摆脱困境的。3.续写部分和前面的文章衔接得上，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。5
