1、高考英语写作复习系列 化繁为简化繁为简 大道至简大道至简 01 遣词造句 目 录 02 认真审题 03 连句成段 04 谋篇布局 Part one Knowing how to write better sentences will help you Knowing how to write better sentences will help you write better paragraphs, which will help you be a better write better paragraphs, which will help you be a better writer!w
2、riter! To paraphrase Shakespeare, To paraphrase Shakespeare, “the sentence is the “the sentence is the thing.” thing.” These tips will help you write better sentences, which These tips will help you write better sentences, which will create better paragraphs, which will blossom into better will crea
3、te better paragraphs, which will blossom into better compositions or articles. compositions or articles. The ability for better sentences 教学重点 The sentence is the thing. Shakespeare 1 2 先主干句，后附加句。 先写出无意义的主干句 写作技巧点拨 再根据句意要求补充附加信息 主语 谓语 宾语 定语 状语 词，短语，从句 词，短语，从句 Alice is a girl. Sample One Alice, 16 ye
4、ars old, is an American girl . Alice, 16 years old, is an American girl from a mountainous village in Los Angeles. Alice, 16 years old, is an American girl, a popular dancer, coming from a mountainous village in Los Angeles . This sentence communicates much more to the reader and shows that you know
5、 how to really use English well. Sample two I am very tired. I am always tired after work. I always feel tired after working from 9 in the morning until 10 at night. Im tired out after working on the project around the clock without any rest for three days. Remember: 1)When you write, you are trying
6、 to communicate. 2)These specific details are what communicate information to your reader. Sample Three Can you come? Can you come to my office tomorow morning? Can you come to my office tomorrow morning between 9:30 and 10 oclock? Can you come to my office tomorrow morning between 9:30 and 10 ocloc
7、k so that I can give you the information you wanted? Remember This! When you are writing, always remember to answer the basic questions in detail: Who? What? When? Where? Why? and How? 遣词造句小技巧 词语多在名词前面， 短语多在名词后面， 句子躲在名词后面。 频度状语可在句首，句中和句尾 时间状语多在句首和句尾，偶居中， 多数程度状语在句尾，个别在句首。 掌握造句技巧，在于先化繁为简，再根据需要增添附加成分 主
8、干句 定语 成分 状语 信息 造句小结 Part two 假定你是李华假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语学习汉语。请你写封邮件请你写封邮件 告知下次上课的计划告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：内容包括： （1）时间和地点；时间和地点； （2）内容：学习唐诗；内容：学习唐诗； （3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意：注意： 1. 词数词数100左右；左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯以使行文连贯。 认真审题 Who What ? why 随随便便看一下， 就开始动笔写作文 认真审题 认真审题 Who, Wh
9、at, Why and When 首段切记四要素 Follow the Order One by One Tense and Personal Adding Reasonably 作文主体要点齐全 Echoing (Expectation and Wish ) Polite 结束部分最关键 Part three Who = I Li Hua , Leslie What = write an email to tell him about the plan for his Chinese class When = next time 信息筛选 作文首段 关键四要素 Im writing to y
10、ou. Im writing to tell you. Im writing to tell you about the Chinese class. Im writing to tell you about the Chinese class next week. 遣词造句 信息筛选 When: Not given. “?” Just depend on you. What: 1 learn some poems of Tang Dynasty Why: ? 1, 2, 3, What:2 know something about Chinese ancient history in adv
11、ance Basic capacity to set time on your own Capacity of reasonable imagination, offering some additional information by yourself according to the information given 作文主体 要点与增添 Lets meet again. Lets meet at 14:00 next Tuesday again. Lets meet at the coffee shop at 14:00 next Tuesday afternoon again. L
12、ets meet at the coffee shop near my school at 14:00 next Tuesday again. Lets meet at 2:00 p. m. next Tuesday again. 遣词造句 作文主体 要点与增添 I plan to help you. I plan to help you learn some poems of the Tang Dynasty. I plan to help you learn some poems of the Tang Dynasty, which is an important part of Chin
13、ese history. The Tang Dynasty is an important part of Chinese civilization History. Additional information given by you Why 1 遣词造句 遣词造句 作文主体 要点与增添 Many poems of the Tang Dynasty. Many poems of the Tang Dynasty have greatly influenced Chinese literature. We Chinese learned them at a young age. Why 2
14、Reasonable imagination comes from our reading. So we students should do a lot of reading in Our free time. Why 3 作文主体 要点与增添 Ill help you read the selected poems. Ill help you read and understand the selected poems. Ill help you read and understand the selected poems before we discuss them. Ill help
15、you read and understand the selected poems before we have a discussion of them. 遣词造句 Why 4 Its very important for us to mix the information given and additional by ourselves in writing. 作文结语 呼应与客套 I suggest you get some knowledge of the Tang dynasty in advance. 遣词造句 I suggest you read some articles
16、and get some knowledge of the Tang dynasty in advance. To make it easier, I suggest you read some articles and get some knowledge of the Tang dynasty in advance. Write a short and simple sentence first, and add some other information in the sentence. Best wishes! Part four 作文架构 谋篇与布局 作文分段，思路清晰，起承转合，
17、不可颠倒。 首段：写作目的，须有四要素 主体：内容要点，增添合逻辑 结语：前后呼应，外加客套话。 Hi，Leslie, Im writing to tell you about the Chinese class next week. Lets meet at 14:00 next Tuesday at the coffee shop near my school again. I plan to help you learn some poems of the Tang Dynasty, which is an important part of Chinese civilization.
18、Many of the Tang poems have greatly influenced Chinese literature. And we Chinese learned them at a young age. Ill help you read and understand the selected poems before we have a discussion of them. To make it easier, I suggest you read and get some knowledge about the Tang dynasty in advance. See
19、you later! Best, Li Hua 谋篇布局 Part five 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申 请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她 帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format） 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 自我演练 自我演练 假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club） 将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。 请他提供作品。信的内容包括： 1主题：环境保护； 2展览时间； 3投稿邮箱：. 注意： 1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 本课小结 每天必须遣词造句，熟悉英 语常用词语和基本句型，每 天阅读英语必不可少，随时 记常用词语和优美句子。 写作是你的才华展现， 是呈现你的思维逻辑， 征服老师于字里行间， 高分来自寒梅笑冰雪。 审读认真，细心排序， 先写短句，再做整合， 首段四要素必须记牢， 书信主体要点须齐全， 尾段呼应主题加客套。 谢谢您的聆听
