1、 Sally is one of my best friends from the UK. She is going to study at Yunnan University this winter. She wants to know about the Green Lake Park in Kunming. Can you help her? 1.Where is Sally from? 2.What is she going to do at Yunan University this winter? 3.What does she want to know about ? Where
2、 is the Green Lake Park? Its in the center of Kunming City. Its in the fun part of Kunming city. Its near Yunnan University. Its close to my home/ school. Greenwood Park is _ place to go to on weekends. I always finish my breakfast _on Saturdays because I want to get to Greenwood Park before 10:00 a
3、.m. to meet my friends. The park is _ place on weekends because almost everyone goes there to see the street performers. Some people think they are boring, but I think they are _people. However, the place where you can enjoy your time _is at one of the small coffee shops near the park. You can read
4、or relax there. There is something for everyone at Greenwood Park. fastest the most crowded the most creative most quietly the best meet friends see the street performers read and relax in a coffee shop fastest the most crowded the most creative the most quietly Greenwood Park is the best place to g
5、o on weekends. Greenwood Park is best park in the city and its in the center. Greenwood Park is my favorite and its the closest to my home. Greenwood is the best place to spend our weekends. Its in the fun part of the city. There is something for everyone at Greenwood Park. Why not visit Greenwood P
6、ark on weekends? Dont miss Greenwood Park. If you come here, you will have a lot fun. If you visit here, youll fall in love with it. because, but, however. so, so that, so.that, when, if . Beginning Body Ending name/ location activities/ feelings conclusion/ suggestions watch seagulls feed seagulls
7、go boating play with seagulls lotus flowers tulips run sing and dance watch street performers Yunnan Military Academy Yunnan Library coffee shops interesting, wonderful, famous, relaxing, exciting, creative, fast, happy, enjoyable, close, good, popular, beautiful, fatastic, comfortable, crowded, fas
8、t, quietly, happily, beautifully, loudly, comfortably, carefully seriously Adjectives Adverbs A good beginningA good beginning Activities and feelings that explain main idea Proper linking words Use correct superlative forms of adjectives and adverds A good ending The Green Lake Park is a good park
9、in Kunming. It is in the center of the city. It is easy for people to go there. Every Saturday morning, I often spend more than two hours drawing in the park.Look! There are lots of seagulls flying over the lake.some old people always dance and sing happily. Why not visit the Green Lake Park? The Gr
10、een Lake Park is a good park in Kunming. It is in the center of the city. It is easy for people to go there. The Green Lake Park is the best park in Kunming. It is in the center of the city so it is easy for people to go there. Every Saturday morning, I often spend more than two hours drawing in the
11、 park.Look! There are lots of seagulls flying over the lake.some old people always dance and sing happily. Every Saturday morning, I often spend more than two hours drawing in the park. I think it is the most relaxing time for me. Look! There are lots of seagulls flying over the lake. The park is th
12、e most crowded place because almost everyone goes here to feed and play with these lovely spirits. They only stay here in winter. However, some old people always dance and sing most happily. Some people think they are boring, but I think they are the most ceative people. Why not visit the Green Lake
13、 Park? Why not visit the Green Lake Park? If you come here, you will fall in love with it. The Green Lake Park is the best Park in Kunming. It is in the center of the city so it is easy for people to go there. Every Saturday morning, I often spend more than two hours drawing in the park. I think it
14、is the most relaxing time for me. Look! There are lots of seagulls flying over the lake. The park is the most crowded place because almost everyone goes here to feed and play with these lovely spirits. They only stay here in winter. However, some old people always dance and sing most happily. Some p
15、eople think they are boring, but I think they are the most ceative people. Why not visit the Green Lake Park? If you come here, you will fall in love with it. A good beginningA good beginning Activities and feelings that explain main idea Proper linking words Use correct superlative forms of adjecti
16、ves and adverds A good ending Do I have aDo I have a good beginninggood beginning? ? Do I have activities and feelings that explain main idea? Do I have proper linking words? Do I have correct superlative forms of adjectives and adverds? Do I have a good ending? Does he or she have aDoes he or she h
17、ave a good beginninggood beginning? ? Does he or shehave activities and feelings that explain main idea? Does he or she have proper linking words? Does he or she have correct superlative forms of adjectives and adverds? Does he or shehave a good ending? the Green Lake Park in Kunming Lets share our writing together. Try to correct your mistakes and learn from each other. Homework: 1.Rewrite the Green Lake Park 2. Read more about the places of interset in Kunming. Love Kunming! Welcome to Kunming! Better city, Better life! Thanks for your listening!