1、高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、投稿：中学生“翘饭”现象（2024届12月浙江省三校（缙云中学、长兴中学、余杭高级中学）联考）学校英文报正在开展以“How Often Meals Are Skipped”为题的调查，结果显示绝大多数学生都存在“翘饭”现象，请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.调查结果和评论；2.你的建议。注意：1.词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。How Often Meals Are Skipped写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路：二段论。第一段介绍调查结果（要点1）；第二段发表评论（要点1）并提出建议（要点2）。【参
2、考范文】How Often Meals Are SkippedOur school English newspaper carried out an survey on How Often Meals Are Skipped. It comes as a shock that half of the students skip meals once a day, and 8 percent several times a week. By contrast, the number of those who never or seldom skip meals accounts for 37%
3、and 5% respectively.Reasons are various. Some believe that there is not enough time for them to eat and some argue that they take no interest in the food in the cafeteria, which will do great harm to our health. Therefore, its high time to attach great importance to it, and here comes my advice. Wha
4、t comes first is to strengthen the awareness of regular meals through education and activities.It is also preferable for the school to listen to the students demands to enrich the variety of dishes and improve the taste of food. (145 words)【中文翻译】大家下午好！我们的外教Lucy老师返回美国。今天，我们在这里为她举行欢送会。“翘饭”何其多近日，校英文报开展
5、的“翘饭现象”调查报告出炉，结果令人震惊。有一半的学生每天翘饭一次，还有8%的学生每周翘饭几次。相比之下，从不翘饭和很少翘饭的分别占比为37%和5%。学生翘饭的理由很多，有说来不及吃的，也有说不喜欢食堂的菜。长期翘饭势必会影响我们的身体健康。因此，我们要高度重视这种“翘饭”现象了，对此我有几点建议。首先，应该加强“翘饭”危害性的宣教活动，让全校同学都意识到这么做的不利后果。其次，学校也应听取学生的诉求，丰富菜品种类，改进食物的口味。【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为投稿；（2）因文体是投稿，故作者身份在正文中不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为介绍调查结果并发表评论和提出
6、建议，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。2.本文的亮点：（1）It comes as a shock that主语从句，it为形式主语；（2）by contrast相比之下；（3）account for占.比例；（4）take no interest in对.不感兴趣；（5）do great harm to对.造成伤害；（6）attach great importance to对.高度重视；（7）here comes my advice运用完全倒装结构；（8）What comes first is to首先要做某事；（9）It is also preferable to do sth其次要做某事
7、。二、介绍信：成人仪式（深圳实验、湛江一中、珠海一中2024届高三三校联考）假设你是李华，上周六参加了学校为高三学生举行的成人仪式。请根据以下要点，向你的外国朋友David介绍成人仪式的有关情况：1.活动过程；2.你的感受。注意：1.词数100词左右；开头和结尾以为你写好。参考词汇：成人仪式the coming-of-age ceremonyDear David,Yours,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段开门见山表明写信目的是分享成人仪式；第二段介绍活动过程（要点1）；第三段写自己的感受（要点2）。【参考范文】Dear David,I hope
8、this e-mail finds you well. Last Saturday witnessed the coming-of-age ceremony, which means a lot for us senior three students. Im writing to share it with you.Our principal addressed a speech, followed by the best wishes to all seniors into adulthood from our teachers and parents in various forms.
9、Then came four students poetry recitation to describe our growth, looking back on the past and looking forward to the future. All the students present ended up taking an oath under the leadership of the student representative and stepping into the Adult Door.The ceremony brought me warmth, witnessed
10、 my growth, benefited me a lot and even gained me a deep insight into life. I will continue to move forward with my appreciation and inspiration, pursuing higher goals and creating a better future. (135 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的大卫：见信好。上周六我校举行了一场对高三学子意义重大的成人仪式。我写信和你介绍下这次成人仪式。首先我们的校长为仪式致辞。紧随其后的是我们的师
11、长以各种形式为同学们送上美好的祝福。紧接着四位同学用饱含着深情的诗朗诵形式述说成长的点点滴滴，回首过去，展望未来。最后，全体高三学子在学生代表的领誓下进行宣誓，并跨入成人门。此次成人仪式是感动，是成长，是收获，更是心灵上的洗礼。我会带着这份感慨与感悟，继续前行，追求更高的目标，创造更美好的未来。李华【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为介绍信；（2）因介绍信文体，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为介绍成人仪式活动内容和感受，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。2.本文的亮点：（1）I hope this e-mail finds you well运用无灵主语结构；（2
12、）witness运用无灵主语结构；（3）., followed by紧接着；（4）Then came .接着是，运用完全倒装结构；（5）looking back on . and looking forward to回首.展望.；（6）end up doing sth最后做了某事；（7）gain sb a deep insight into让某人深入理解；（8）with my appreciation and inspiration运用尾韵修辞手法。三、发言稿：善待野生动物，实现和谐共生（53增分测评卷必修二UNIT 2）你校将举行以“善待野生动物，实现和谐共生”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一
13、篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.野生动物的重要性；2.野生动物的现状及产生的原因；3.发出号召。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Good afternoon, everyone!Thats all. Thanks for your listening!写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路：二段论。第一段介绍保护野生动物的重要性（要点1）并分析野生动物的现状及产生的原因（要点2）；第二段发出号召（要点3）。【参考范文】Good afternoon, everyone!As we know, it goes without saying that we
14、 cant emphasize the importance of wild animal protection enough. It contributes to the diversity of species as well as the ecological balance, and ultimately will protect human beings. An increasing number of wild animals, however, are dying out every year, some even on the verge of extinction, whic
15、h results from habitat destruction caused by human activities, hunting and global warming.When the buying stops, the killing can too. As students, we should make every effort to protect wild animals. Lets be kind to wild animals and exist in harmony with them! (100 words)Thats all. Thanks for your l
16、istening!【中文翻译】大家下午好！我们都知道，保护野生动物的重要性不言而喻。它有助于维护物种的多样性，保持生态平衡，从而最终保护我们人类自身。然而，每年都有很多野生动物死亡，甚至有的濒临灭绝。人类活动导致的栖息地破坏、捕猎活动以及全球气候变暖是造成野生动物减少的主要原因。没有买卖就没有杀戮。作为学生，我们更应该为保护野生动物尽一份力。让我们善待野生动物，和他们和谐共生！我的讲话到此结束。谢谢！【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为发言稿；（2）因文本是发言稿，故作者的身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为介绍保护野生动物的重要性并分析野生动物的现状及产生的原因，故本
17、文总体时态定调为一般现在时。2.本文的亮点：（1）It goes without saying that某事是不言而喻的；（2）cant emphasize . enough某事再怎么强调也不为过；（3）contribute to有助于；（4）an increasing number of越来越多的；（5）on the verge of濒临；（6）result from由于；（7）When the buying stops, the killing can too.没有买卖就没有杀戮；（8）make every effort to do sth尽力去做某事；（9）exist in harmony with和.和谐共生。4
