1、Unit 5 Music Writing 写作课1.Teaching Objectives（1）通过模仿课文write a speech 的写作特点，学生能学习 掌握演讲文本的结构特点和语言特点；（2）通过模仿课文write a speech范文，能够联系自身，创 作、检查并修改有关音乐改变人生的演讲稿。BeginningBodyEnding structure content languagegreeting,self-introduction and topicexperience with musicfeelings about musichopes and thanks to the
2、audiencerhetorical devices（修辞手法修辞手法）:1.repetition（重复）（重复）,2.simile（明喻）（明喻）,3.metaphor（暗喻，隐喻）暗喻，隐喻）,4.personification（拟人）（拟人）5.rhetorical question（设问）（设问）,6.quote（引用）（引用）clear topic-focused attractive Review1.repetition(重复）重复）2.simile（明喻）（明喻）3.metaphor（隐喻、暗喻（隐喻、暗喻)4.personification（拟人）（拟人）5.rhetorica
3、l question（设问）（设问）6.quote（引用）（引用）A.Trees are whispering(低语)and birds are singing.B.All the world is a stage.C.Her eyes twinkled like stars.D.Jonh A.Longan said,“Music is the medicine of mind.”E.How can you be so unconfident?F.I came,I saw,I conquered(征服).FCBAEDMatch the sentences with Rhetorical dev
4、ices(修辞手法)1完成句子很荣幸能站在这里和大家分享关于音乐是如何对我的生活产生影响的故事。(it作形式主语)_ the story of how music has had an impact on my life.有一段时间，我感到非常沮丧。(depress)There was a time _when I felt greatly depressedIts an honour to be here and to share with you Pre-writing 我去年就读一所高中寄宿学校(boarding school)，但我很不适应这样的环境。(adapt to)I s t u
5、 d y i e d i n a s e n i o r h i g h b o a r d i n g s c h o o l,a n d I _我感到太孤独了,因为没有我以前熟悉的老朋友和环境。(be familiar with)I felt too lonely because _.I dont have the old friends and environment I used to be familiar with.couldnt adapt to it Pre-writing 然后有一天，我偶然听到了柔软而平静，舒适而有力的古典音乐。(用定语从句造句)T h e n o n e
6、d a y I h e a r d t h e c l a s s i c a l m u s i c b y a c c i d e n t,_.音乐不仅给了我陪伴和安慰，更给了我勇气去面对所有的困难。(not only.but also.)。M u s i c n o t o n l y g a v e m e c o m p a n y a n d c o m f o r t ,_.is soft and calming comforting and powerful Pre-writing 假如你是李华，作为交换生正在英国学习。你所在的学校要举办假如你是李华，作为交换生正在英国学习。你
7、所在的学校要举办英语演讲比赛，主题是英语演讲比赛，主题是“How music has changed my life”。请写一。请写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：1.与音乐有关的个人经历；与音乐有关的个人经历；2.音乐的影响。音乐的影响。While writing确定体裁、话题体裁：应用文(演讲稿)话题：音乐改变我们的生活确定时态、人称时态：一般过去时为主，兼顾一般现在时人称：第一人称为主布局文章架构首段：引入正文中段：提出问题，说明原因尾段：感谢列出核心要点1.引入正文分享音乐改变了我的生活的经历2分析原因(1)孤独；(2)音乐给了我陪伴和安慰，更给了我勇气去面对所有的困
8、难；(3)对音乐的见解3结束语感谢Its an honour to be here and to share with you the story of how music has changed my life.I studyied in a senior high boarding school,and I couldnt adapt to it.I felt too lonely because I dont have the old friends and environment I used to be familiar with.Then one day I heard the c
9、lassical music by accident,which is soft and calming,comforting and powerful.Music not only gave me company and comfort,Step 4 post-writing 1.Does each sentence relate to the topic?2.Is a specific discription given in this sentence?3.Does this sentence use rhetorical devices,such as metaphor,personification and simile.4.Are all words spelt correctly?1.Polish the“body”part and add a“beginning”&“ending”to achieve a complete speech draft.2.Practice your speech and present it in next class.Homework
