1、环境描写微技能以人教版必修二第四单元Reading for Writing为框架What joke?Lead-in:scenic spots in Jiangxi Lead-in:scenic spots in Jiangxi Lead-in:scenic spots in Jiangxi Our government will issue an English brochure to promote Lushan,calling on everyone to contribute.Lead-in:a brochure waiting for you to completeReview Rev
2、iew:analyse the descriptive paragraph.What words does the writer use to describe sensory details?庐山庐山 (Lushan)Describe Lushan from sensesA.relaxedB.satisfiedC.sadD.shockedTouch:mountain road Walking along the mountain road,feel the sun and _ on your skin,and you will definitely be _.breezeABAdd emot
3、ion to the description of the environment.In Flower Path,breathe in the sweet scent of peach blossom,and you will cer tainly be peaceful.Smell:Flower Path（花径）Describe the place from smell and add emotion.桃花(peach blossom)Sight:the observation deck（观景台)What can you see in the picture?Mountains,people
4、,trees.A.mountains rise and fall one after another.B.the green trees grow thickly all around.C.there are rolling hills dotted with people.D.trees are like being in the green ocean.Sight:the observation deck（观景台)From the observation deck,you can see _ABHearing:Sandiequan Waterfall（三叠泉瀑布）What did you
5、hear?Birds,waterflow.Hearing:Sandiequan Waterfall（三叠泉瀑布）Find out the related description of Ireland and imitate the sentence to describe the place from hearing.D o w n b y S a n d i e q u a n Waterfall,the sound of waterflow and cries of birds make up the music of the mountain.Located in Jiujiang,Lu
6、shan is a mountain whose scenery excites and inspires all,offering something for the senses.CHECKLISTEmotionIs there right emotion behind your descriptions?SensesDoes it cover sensory details correctly?TransitionsIs the language easy to followWrite a brochure to promote LushanConclusion1.When descri
7、bing a place,you can start with the five senses.2.You can add emotion to the description of the environment.1.Polish your drafts and finish the self-assessment list.2.Look up the definition of a travel journal and change your brochure to a journal.(Optional)Homeworkself-assessment listAfter this period,I can rate my performance 3(excellent),2(good),1(needs improving).Things I have learnt:rate1.add emotion to the descriptions of the environment;2.describe the scene in the pictures;3.write a draft to describe Lushan by using those descriptions;Things I want to learn more next time
