1、外研版九年级上册英语Modules 1-7写作复习指导M1 Wonders of the world+M10 Australia 作文复习指导主题群：人与自我(为主) 子主题：丰富、充实、积极向上的生活，主要国家、主要城市的景观和习俗无论是“一日观四季，十里不同天”的独库公路，还是他乡街头的赞食，都是这个世界上的美丽风景。“读万卷书不如行万里路”，旅行是我们生活中必不可少的话题。假如你叫李华，你校英语社团将在全校举办一次“爱旅行，爱生活”的英文征文比赛，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇英文投稿。作文要求：1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。2. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实
2、校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。3. 语句连贯，词数80词左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄在答题卡上。Love Travel, Love LifeBy Li HuaNowadays, more and more people love to travel. 第一步：审清题意定基调体裁: 书信或电邮( ) 演讲稿( ) 日记( ) 记叙文( ) 说明文( )人称： 时态： 内容分分配 第二步：构建提纲建框架爱旅行，爱生活写作要点鲜明观点核心词句人们热爱旅行的原因有机会观景识人品美食，长知识， 开眼界。(一现)provide them with a chance to.incre
3、ase knowledgebroaden horizons我的一次旅行经历(地点和活动)暑期游桂林：游览伏波山和漓江，美景惊艳；品当地美食等； 玩得很开心。(一过)went to Guilin with. during. (拓展一句描述) Its a place with.visited(仿写书本句式拓展一句feeling) We were surprised at how stunning the view was.tasted the local dishes that are popular among/with. (用定语从句拓展一句描述)enjoyed ourselves(一句话小结
4、)对我生活和学习的影响变得独立，学会做计划。(现完)have become more independent have learnt how to make a plan第三步：句子提升展亮点 【课文复现】1. In my opinion, man-made wonders are more exciting than natural wonders. 在我看来,人造奇观比自然奇观更加激动人心。(M1)2. On the first day, we took a plane tour over the rock and I was surprised at how big it was. 第一
5、天,我们乘飞机参观了艾尔斯岩，它如此之大，真让我惊讶。(M10) 【内容提升】1. This is a great place which is really worth visiting, and I will never forget the trip from which I learned about some localcustoms. 这真的是一个值得一游的地方，我不会忘记这次让我学到了一些当地习俗的旅行。2. As an old saying goes, better to see something once than hear about it a thousand time
6、s. 正如一句谚语所说, 耳听为虚,眼见为实。3. The world is a book and those who dont travel only read one page of it. So what are you waiting for? Lets hit the road! 世界是一本书，而不旅游的人只读了一页。所以，还在等什么? 出发吧！4. The meaning of travelling lies in the views you see, the people you meet, and above all, the discovery of another your
7、self.旅行的意义在于看到的风景、遇到的人，而最重要的是你会发现另一个自己。5. Travelling not only increases my knowledge, but also broadens my horizons. Thats why I love it. 它不仅增长了我的见识,还开阔了我的眼界。这就是我爱旅行的原因。第四步：完成范文背全文！Love Travel, Love LifeBy Li HuaNowadays, more and more people love to travel. It (给他们提供了) a chance to visit amazing pla
8、ces, meet different people and enjoy the delicious food. They can (增长知识) and broaden their horizons. (去了) to Guilin with my parents 儋假期间). It is abeautiful place (有很多山和水). We (游览了) Fubo Hill and LijiangRiver and (为那绝美的景色感到震惊). Wealso (品尝了) quite a few local dishes (定语从句,很受游客欢迎的). We really (玩得很开心).I
9、ve (变得独立得多) after this trip and learnt how to (做计划) before traveling. I hope all of us can enjoy traveling, enjoy thinking, enjoy learning and enjoy living.参考答案Love Travel, Love LifeBy Li HuaNowadays, more and more people love to travel. It provides them with a chance to visit amazing places,meet di
10、fferent people and enjoy the delicious food. They can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons.I went to Guilin with my parents during the summer vacation. It is a beautiful place with lots of hills and rivers. We visited Fubo Hill and Lijiang River and were surprised at how stunning/wond
11、erful the view was. We also tasted quite a few local dishes that are popular among/with visitors. We really enjoyed ourselves/had a great time/ had great fun.Ive become much more independent after this trip and le arnt how to make a plan before traveling. Ihope all of us can enjoy traveling, enjoy t
12、hinking, enjoy learning and enjoy living.M2 Public holidays + M11 Photos 作文复习指导主题群：人与社会； 子主题：节假日与文化景观，文化习俗； 拍照与记录。我校举办主题为“宣扬中国传统节日”的摄影比赛。假设你是李华，就某一中国传统节日拍摄了照片参赛。写一封邮件投稿，详细描述你的照片，内容包括：1. 简单介绍照片中的节日(时间、活动、 习俗等)：2. 详细描述照片内容；3. 说明你喜欢这张照片的理由。作文要求：(1) 不能照抄原文； 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。(2) 语句连贯，词数80词左右。作文的开头
13、和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。To whom it may concern,The photo I took is about I hope you will like my photo.Best regards,Li Hua第一步：审清题意定基调！体裁: 书信或电邮( )演讲稿( )日记( ) 记叙文( ) 说明文( )人称： 时态： 内容分分配 第二步：构建提纲建框架！拍照帮我们记录生活写作要点鲜明观点核心词句照片中节日的介绍春节是家人团聚的象征。(一现). is a symbol of. is celebrated in/on .详细描述照片内容照片中每个方位的人和
14、正在进行的动作。 (一进)This photo shows.(运用定语从句用一句话描述照片内容)On the right/ in the middle/at the back .(描述人物在照片中的方位)喜欢照片的原因照片帮我和家人分享美好时刻并教我学会珍惜家人。 (一现)The reason I like . is .(一句话总结喜欢的理由)Every time I look at the photo,1(拓展照片的意义)第三步：句子提升展亮点！ 【课文复现】1. The festival is a very busy time for travel when friends and fam
15、ilies come together to celebrate.这个节日是一个非常繁忙的旅行时间，朋友和家人聚在一起庆祝。(M2)2. They show some of the experiences of a young visitor to our country, and some memories of his home.它们展示了一位年轻游客来我国的一些经历，以及他对家的一些回忆。(M11) 【内容提升】M2 Public holidays1. 在中国，中秋节被认为是家庭团聚的象征。In China, Mid-autumn Day is considered to be a sy
16、mbol of family reunion.2. 春节期间，年画被贴在窗户、门和墙上，作为好运和快乐新年的象征。During the Spring Festival, the pictures are put on windows, doors and walls as symbols of wishes for good luck and a happy new year.3.端午节是一个历史悠久的传统节日，它在农历5月5日被庆祝。The Dragon Boat Festival, a traditional Chinese festival with a long history, is
17、 celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month.M11 Photos1.摄影是我们认识世界的一种方式。Taking photos is a way for us to know about the world.2.照相机就像我们的眼睛，有它，我们就能发现更多世间的美。Cameras are like our eyes from which we can discover more beautiful sights of the world.3.照片不但会告诉我们往事，也会提醒我们要珍惜当下，心怀未来。Photos can not on
18、ly tell us what weve gone through, but also remind us to cherish the present and hope for the future.第四步：完成范文背全文！To whom it may concern, (我拍的照片是关于) the Spring Festival. In China, the SpringFestival . (被认为是家庭团聚的象征。) It (在被庆祝) sometime in January or February. The festival is (一段繁忙时期) for travel when f
19、riends and families come together to celebrate. During the festival, (有很多要看和做的事情).This photo shows (我的家人们正在度过的美好时光) on the evening of New Years Eve. In the middle is my mom and my aunt (正忙于准备特别的晚餐) at the table. On the right is my brother (冲过) the room to help (摆餐桌). The men (在后面) are my dad and gra
20、ndfather. They are trying to (张贴) the red couplets (在墙上). (我喜欢这张照片的原因是) it records (我跟我家人共享的美好回忆). Every time I look at this photo, (我学会更珍惜我的家人).I hope you will like my photo.Best regards,Li Hua参考答案To whom it may concern,The photo I took is about the Spring Festival. In China, the Spring Festival is
21、 considered to be a.symbol of family reunion. It is celebrated sometime in January or February. The festival is a very busy time for travel when friends and families come together to celebrate. During the festival, there are many things to see and do.This photo shows the good time which my family ar
22、e having on the evening of New Years Eve. In the middle is my mom and my aunt who are busy preparing for the special dinner at the table. On the right is my brother rushing across the room to help lay the table. The men at the back are my dad and grandfather.They are trying to put up the red couplet
23、s on the wall.The reason I like this photo is that it records the good memories I shared with my family. Every time I look at this photo, I learn to cherish my family more. I hope you will like my photo.Best regards,Li Hua第 20 页 共 26 页M3 Heroes+ M8 Sports life 作文复习指导主题群：人与社会；子主题：对世界、国家、人民和社会进步有突出贡献的
24、人物；日常体育活动，重大体育赛事，体育精神。杭州亚运会刚落下帷幕，巴黎奥运会举办在即。假设你叫李华，你得知你的外国好友 James 对你心目中的体坛英雄很有兴趣，请你根据以下表格提示，写一封信给James，内容包括：1. 你心目中的体坛英雄的个人信息(训练项目、个人经历等)；2. 喜欢他/她的原因；3. 你对他/她的评价。作文要求：(1) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。(2) 语句连贯，词数80词左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear James,How are you doing? I am so glad to hear
25、 that you are interested in the sports hero in my heart.I am looking forward to knowing about your sports hero.Best regards,Li Hua第一步：审清题意定基调！体裁: 书信或电邮( )演讲稿( )日记( ) 记叙文( ) 说明文( )人称： 时态： 内容分分配 第二步：构建提纲建框架！体坛英雄写作要点鲜明观点核心词句体坛英雄个人信息家乡(一过)；训练项目(一现) ;成就(一现)., is a sportsman that. (定语从句补充个人信息)is widely kn
26、own as (成就)喜欢他/她的原因面对困难永不言弃(一现)；突破极限树立榜样(一现)Here are the reasons why .Although (面对的困难), he has a strong will and never gives up.His (美好品质) set a great example for me.你对他/她的评价产生影响(现完)； 高度评价(一现)has influenced us a lot.speak highly of him.第三步：句子提升展亮点！ 【课文复现】1. There are many books and films about him,
27、and he is still remembered in both China and Canada today。有很多关于他的电影和书本。同时，中国和加拿大的人们至今都还记得他。(M3)2. But he is still a symbol of courage and success, and we continue to;take pride in him.然而，他仍然是勇气和成功的象征，我们将继续为他感到骄傲。(M8)【内容提升】M3 Heroes1.英雄不过是做出不平凡事的普通人。Heroes are ordinary people who make themselves extr
28、aordinary.你是自己故事里的主宰。2. You are the hero of your own story.M8 Sports life1. 众所周知，强者不是常胜将军，而是面临失败也不放弃的人。As we all know, the strongest people arent always the people who win, but the people who dont give up when they lose.2. 生活就像海洋，只有意志坚强的人才能达到生命的彼岸。Life is like an ocean. Only a strong-minded person c
29、an reach the other side of life.第四步：完成范文背全文：Dear James,How are you doing? I am so glad to hear that you are interested in the sports hero in my heart. The successful table tennis player (我非常仰慕的) is MaLong. Ma Long is a professional table tennis player from Liaoning, China. He (在体育领域里已经取得巨大成功) and 并作
30、为其中一名最佳乒乓球运动员而广为人知).Here are the reasons why (他不仅仅是一名运动员, 更是一名体坛英雄) in my heart. To begin with, although he (面临诸多挑战和困难), he always (有坚强的意志) and (永不言弃). Additionally, Ma Longs excellent skills and the spirit of pushing his limits (为我树立了良好的榜样).Today, he is still (努力训练成为最好的). As the old saying goes,“Li
31、fe is like an ocean. Only a strong-minded person can reach the other side of life.” 他坚强的意志已经对我产生了很大的影响) and we Chinese continue to (高度评价他).I am looking forward to knowing about your sports hero.Best regards,Li Hua参考答案Dear James,How are you doing? I am so glad to hear that you are interested in the s
32、ports hero in my heart. The successful table tennis player that I really look up to is Ma Long. Ma Long is a professional table tennis player from Liaoning, China. He has achieved great success in the sport and is widely known as one of the best table tennis players.Here are the reasons why he is mo
33、re a sports hero than a sportsman in my heart. To begin with,although he faces many challenges and difficulties, he always has a strong will and never gives up.Additionally, Ma Longs excellent skills and the spirit of pushing his limits set a great example for me.Today, he is still training hard to
34、become the best. As the old saying goes,“Life is like an ocean. Only a strong-minded person can reach the other side of life.”His strong will has influenced me a lot and we Chinese continue to speak highly of him.I am looking forward to knowing about your sports hero.Best regards,Li Hua6M4 Home Alon
35、e+M6 Problems 作文复习指导主题群：人与自我(为主)； 子主题：自我认识，自我管理，自我提升； 身心健康，抗挫能力，珍爱生命的意识在我们的成长过程中，既有快乐，也有烦恼。假如你是李华，下周你们班的英语课上，老师将让你们分享曾经独自在家遇到的问题或烦恼。请你写一篇英文发言稿，内容包括：1. 你曾经独自在家的经历以及遇到的问题成烦恼；2. 你解决以上问题或烦恼的方法及结果；3. 你在这个过程中所受到的启发。作文要求：1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。2、语句连贯，词数80词左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄在答题卡上。Hello,
36、everyone. My name is Li Hua. Today I want to share my problem of home alone with you. 第一步：审清题意定基调体裁: 书信或电邮( ) 演讲稿( ) 日记( ) 记叙文( ) 说明文( )人称： 时态： 内容分分配 第二步：构建提纲建框架独自在家的问题或烦恼写作要点鲜明观点17核心词句曾经独自在家遇到的问题或烦恼父母出差；我一回到家就玩电脑到深夜；第二天迟到犯困没力气；作业未按时交(一过)were on business for .As soon as I got home, (仿写书本句式,拓展一句动作或fe
37、eling)played computer games till midnight .was late for schoolfelt sleepy and tiredfailed to hand in the homeworkmade a terrible mess (仿写书本句式, 拓展一句 feeling)解决以上问题或烦恼的方法及结果时间管理： 立刻做作业；按时睡觉；独立自理： 做饭搞清洁(一过)did my homework at once (拓展一句描述so that I .)went to bed on timeset an alarm clockcooked simple mea
38、ls and tidied up the room(用定语从句拓展一句描述)在这个过程中所受到的启发培养基本生活技能，学会做计划，独自解决问题，长大成人(现完)develop basic life skillsget into the habit of.manage to make planstry to solve problems on our own grow as a person(一句话小结)第三步：句子提升展亮点 【课文复现】6. I can look after myself although it wont be easy for me. 我会照顾好我自己, 尽管这对我来说不容
39、易。 (M4)7. If you tell him the truth now, he will be angry with you, but at least you will show that you are honest. 如果你现在告诉他真相，他会生气，但至少你展现了你的正直。(M6)房 【内容提升】1. Staying at home alone can improve our self-care ability and help us to become more independent. 独自在家可以提高我们的自理能力，帮助我们变得更加独立。2. When you are yo
40、ung, you may get so bored with your parents orders, however, as you grow older, you may consider theirorders as the most beautiful words in the world. 当你年轻时,可能会对父母的唠叨感到厌倦,但等你慢慢变老,可能会觉得他们的唠叨是世界上最美的话。3. You have to believe in yourself when no one else does.当没人相信你的时候, 你必须相信自己。4. Ask for help. Not becau
41、se you are weak but because you want to remain strong. 寻求帮助,不是因为软弱,而是为了保持强大。5. Everyone makes mistakes. The important thing is to not make the same mistake twice.人皆犯错, 重要的是不要重复犯错。第四步：完成范文背全文！Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. Today I want to share my problem of home alone with you. Last month, my parents ( 出 差 ) for two days. On the first day, I
