1、B1U6Summary Writing青岛昌乐二中高级中学李李子子柒柒Water trickles pastorally off of the tips of cut bamboo stalks.A gentle breezes sways the branches of a grove of trees as a Chinese flute plays softly in the background.Its just a day in the life of Li Ziqi,who may be the most famous YouTuber you havent heard of.Th
2、e phenomenally popular Chinese food blogger,with almost 10 million YouTube subscribers and 24 million followers on Sina Weibo,posts almost fairy-tale-like videos of her life in rural Sichuan chatting with her grandmother,foraging,cooking rustic,positively perfect-looking food,and also maybe wearing
3、a giant red cape and riding through the forest on horseback.Q1:Whats the news mainly about?Q2:Which sentence gives the core information？Q3:What are the other sentences intended for?a long text a summary lose weight delete 50-70 words350 words 60 wordsWhat is a summary?A summary is a brief statement
4、that gives only the main points of sth,not the details 牛津高阶英汉双解词典 Read and pick out the topic sentence of each paragraph.Work out the logic between the topic sentence and its supporting sentences.？British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs.With pleasant flavors and scents,and coming in a v
5、ariety of colors,fruit and herbal teas make a nice change to traditional teas.Many people grow their own tea gardens,in which they plant easy-to-grow herbs such as mint and lemongrass.topic sentencereasonfacttheir popularity Herbal tea has various health benefits.Many people enjoy herbal tea because
6、 it can have a positive effect on energy levels.If you need a good nights sleep,choose a tea that helps you relax.If you havent been feeling very well,drink some ginger tea to give your immune system a helping hand.Mint tea,meanwhile,is good for digestion.topic sentenceexample1example2example3health
7、 benefits reasonFlavors such as lemon and ginger have long been popular in the UK.However,recent years have seen more and more unusual flavors come onto the market.Fruit teas now include mango,strawberry,apple and pear.Herbal teas include blackberry leaf and dandelion.facttopic sentenceexample1examp
8、le2unusual flavors Think and decidewhat information is supposed to be put in the summary.Fruit&Herbal Teas theirpopularityunusualflavorshealthbenefitstopic sentencereasonfactfacttopic sentenceexample1example2topic sentencereasonexample1example2example3 British people love to make tea with fruit and
9、herbs.With pleasant flavors and scents,and coming in a variety of colors,fruit and herbal teas make a nice change to traditional teas.Many people grow their own tea gardens,in which they plant easy-to-grow herbs such as mint and lemongrass.topic sentencereasonfacttheir popularity Flavors such as lem
10、on and ginger have long been popular in the UK.However,recent years have seen more and more unusual flavors come onto the market.Fruit teas now include mango,strawberry,apple and pear.Herbal teas include blackberry leaf and dandelion.facttopic sentenceexample1example2unusual flavors Herbal tea has v
11、arious health benefits.Many people enjoy herbal tea because it can have a positive effect on energy levels.If you need a good nights sleep,choose a tea that helps you relax.If you havent been feeling very well,drink some ginger tea to give your immune system a helping hand.Mint tea,meanwhile,is good
12、 for digestion.topic sentenceexample1example2example3health benefits reason change words and phrases（替换字词）（替换字词）change the part of speech（改变词性）（改变词性）change sentence patterns（改变句式）（改变句式）Ways to paraphrase概括要点概括要点同义表达同义表达3Summarize each paragraph with one sentence and make sure the subject of the sent
13、ence matches the topic of the whole passage;the whole sentence focuses on the main idea of the paragraph.连接成文连接成文British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs.With pleasant flavors and scents,and coming in a variety of colors,fruit and herbal teas make a nice change to traditional teas.Fruit
14、and herbal teas,with pleasant flavors,scents and colors,_.gain great popularity among British people are popular with British people their popularity 替换字词替换字词改变词性改变词性However,recent years have seen more and more unusual flavors come onto the market.More unusual flavors _.unusual flavors 替换字词替换字词改变语态改
15、变语态 have become available in the UK can be found in the UKHerbal tea has various health benefits.Many people enjoy herbal tea because it can have a positive effect on energy levels.Herbal tea can bring people many health benefits,for _ _ ones energy levels can be positively adjusted.health benefits
16、it can positively affect ones energy levels.with which改变句式改变句式改变语态改变语态A possible version:With great flavors,scents and colors,fruit teas and herbal teas,gain great popularity among British people._,more unusual flavors have become available in the UK.Herbal tea,_,can bring people many health benefit
17、s,for they can positively affect ones energy levels.In recent yearsin particular阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：1.对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；2.应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；3.上下文的连贯性；4.对各要点表达的独立性情况。概要写作的四项基本原则概要写作的四项基本原则1.一定要使用第三人称第三人称。2.一定不可加入自己的观点不可加入自己的观点。3.一定不可对原文内容加以评论不可对原文内容加以评论。4.一定不要引入与原文内容无关的信息不要引入与原文内容无关的信息。说明现象说明现象/问题问题:intr
18、oduce the phenomenon/problem+reason+solution(cause and effect)说明物品说明物品:how it is made,how it is used,how it may change,what makes it new or significantWho Why What When Where HowThe result The opinion of the writer Argument 1/supporting detail l Argument 2/supporting detail 2 ConclusionNarrationArgu
19、mentationExpositionThe Renaissance(15th to 16th century)During the Renaissance,new ideas and values gradually replaced those held in the Middle Ages.People began to concentrate less on religious themes and adopt a more humanistic attitude to life.At the same time painters returned to classical Roman
20、 and Greek ideas about art.They tried to paint people and nature as they really were.Rich people wanted to possess their own paintings,so they could decorate their superb palaces and great houses.They paid famous artists to paint pictures of themselves,their houses and possessions as well as their a
21、ctivities and achievements.One of the most important discoveries during this period was how to draw things in perspective.This technique was first used by Masaccio in 1428.When people first saw his paintings,they were convinced that they were looking through a hole in a wall at a real scene.If the r
22、ules of perspective had not been discovered,no one would have been able to paint such realistic pictures.By coincidence,oil paints were also developed at this time,which made the colours used in paintings look richer and deeper.Without the new paints and the new technique,we would not be able to see
23、 the many great masterpieces for which this period is famous.【分析】Step 1:Step 1:Determine the type of writing and identify the topic as well as the authors purpose确定体裁，明确主题确定体裁，明确主题体裁：_主题：_ Step 2Step 2:Divide the passage&summarize the main idea of each part.明确文章结构明确文章结构Step 3Step 3:Highlight the key
24、 information of each part.划出主题句和关键信息Para1：During the Renaissance,new ideas and values gradually replaced those held in the Middle Ages.People began to concentrate less on religious themes and adopt a more humanistic attitude to life.At the same time painters returned to classical Roman and Greek ide
25、as about art.They tried to paint people and nature as they really were.Rich people wanted to possess their own paintings,so they could decorate their superb palaces and great houses.They paid famous artists to paint pictures of themselves,their houses and possessions as well as their activities and
26、achievements.Para2：One of the most important discoveries during this period was how to d r a w t h i n g s i n p e r s p e c t i v e.T h i s t e c h n i q u e w a s f i r s t u s e d by Masaccio in 1428.When people first saw his paintings,they were convinced that they were looking through a hole in
27、a wall at a real scene.If the rules of perspective had not been discovered,no one would have been able to paint such realistic pictures.By coincidence,oil paints were also developed at this time,which made the colours used in paintings look richer and deeper.Without the new paints and the new techni
28、que,we would not be able to see the many great masterpieces for which this period is famous.Information about perspective:Put forward:Masaccio;1428Content:looking through a hole in a wall at a real scene.Assistance:By coincidence,oil paints were also developed【分析】Step 1:Step 1:Determine the type of
29、writing and identify the topic as well as the authors purpose确定体裁，明确主题确定体裁，明确主题体裁：_主题：_ Step 2Step 2:Divide the passage&summarize the main idea of each part.明确文章结构明确文章结构Step 3Step 3:Highlight the key information of each part.划出主题句和关键信息Step 4:Make an outline of the passageStep 5:Write the first draft
30、 During the Renaissance,new ideas and values gradually replaced those held in the Middle Ages.In the Renaissance,new viewpoints were in place of those hundreds years ago.People began to concentrate less on religious themes and adopt a more humanistic attitude to life.Firstly,people focused more on h
31、umanistic themes【rather than】religious ones.At the same time painters returned to classical Roman and Greek ideas about art.They tried to paint people and nature as they really were.Secondly,painters returned to classical ideas,which attached great importance to real people and nature.People had dif
32、ferent viewpoints during the Renaissance.People focused more on humanistic themes rather than religious ones.Meanwhile,painters returned to classical ideas which focused on real people and nature.(29 words)People had different viewpoints during the Renaissance.People focused more on humanistic theme
33、s rather than religious ones.Meanwhile,painters returned to classical ideas which focused on real people and nature.The perspective proposed by Masaccio in 1428 became the typical painting characteristic in that period.With the development of oil paints,people felt like seeing reality through a hole
34、.(59 words)When talking about the two sexes,people often say that men are from Mars and women are from Venus.Without doubt,men and women have great differences in many ways.These contrasts in character could all be down to supposed differences between the male and female brains.For example,a study l
35、ed by British psychologist Stuart Ritchie in 2012 found that mens brains are on average 10 percent bigger than womens.And another study led by Israeli psychologist Daphna Joel at Tel Aviv University in 2015furtherclaimedthat differences exist in male and female brains,although each individuals brain
36、 has a mix of features,as New Scientist wrote.But Lise Eliot,a professor of neuroscience(神经学)at the Chicago Medical School,begs to differ.She recently said that the brain is a unisex(不分性别的)organ.Through analyzing brain data of several different men and women,Eliot found that the statistics about bra
37、in differences mean nothing.According to her findings,male and female brains are not much more different from each other than male or female hearts or kidneys.And more importantly,these differences dont show that male and female brains work differently.So,if its not in the brain,what makes males and
38、 females behave differently?The answer may lie in socialization,according to The Atlantic.In the past,many gender studies ignored the effects of a persons social background and upbringing,relying on other data instead.Take former Harvard University president Lawrence Summers for example.He used a 19
39、70 study that showed men outperformed women 13-to-one on the math part of the SAT to argue that males are more suited to science subjects.However,another study found that if females were given better opportunities to study science subjects,the rate would drop to three-to-one.ExpositionUndeniably,men
40、 and women differ widely in many aspects.Previous studies attribute the distinctions in character to the differences between male and female brains.However,Professor Eliot argues that they have nothing to do with brains based on the data analysis.It is socialization,such as background and parenting,
41、that can account for the contrasts,which was neglected in the past,though.Exposition 范文范文Narration Like many new graduates，I left university full of hope for the future but with no real idea of what I wanted to do.My degree，with honors，in English literature had not really prepared me for anything pr
42、actical.I knew I wanted to make a difference in the world somehow，but I had no idea how to do that.Thats when I learned about the lighthouse Project.I started my journey as a Lighthouse Project volunteer by reading as much as I could about the experiences of previous volunteers.I knew it would be a
43、lot of hard work，and that I would be away from my family and friends for a very long time.In short，I did not take my decision to apply for the Lighthouse Project lightly.Neither did my family.Eventually，however，I won the support of my family，and I sent in all the paperwork needed for application.Aft
44、er countless interviews and presentations，I managed to stand out among the candidates and survive the test alone.Several months later，I finally received a call asking me to report for duty.I would be going to a small village near Abuja，Nigeria.Where?What?Nigeria?I had no idea.But I was about to find
45、 out.After completing my training，I was sent to the village that was small and desperately in need of proper accommodation.Though the local villagers were poor，they offered their homes，hearts，and food as if I were their own family.I was asked to lead a small team of local people in building a new sc
46、hoolhouse.For the next year or so，I taught in that same schoolhouse.But I sometimes think I learned more from my students than they did from me.Sometime during that period，I realized that all those things that had seemed so strange or unusual to me no longer did though I did not get anywhere with th
47、e local language，and I returned to the United States a different man.The lighthouse project had changed my life forever.After graduation from university the author was at a loss about how to fulfill his ambition until he decided to land a job with the Lighthouse Project.(要点1)Adequate preparation and
48、 family support finally won him the job as a volunteer teacher in a remote village.(要点 2)The experience taught him to see life in a new light and embrace a better self.(要点3)(61 words)Narration 范文范文Argumentation Exercise is defined as any movement that makes your muscles work and requires your body t
49、o burn calories.There are many types of physical activity.Being active has been shown to have many health benefits,both physically and mentally.Exercise plays a key role in building strong muscles and bones.This is because it helps release hormones that promote your muscles ability to absorb amino a
50、cids（氨基酸）.This helps them grow and reduces their breakdown.As people age,they tend to lose muscle mass and function,which can lead to an increased risk of injury.Practicing regular physical activity is essential to reducing muscle loss and maintaining strength as you age.Exercise not only helps buil
