1、高考英语读后续写情节模板句式框架讲解练习（救援寻人）一、情节模板第一段：环境 + 救援计划 + 挑战 + 心理 + 发现伤员1.环境：描述环境条件，如浓雾，以及它对故事情节的影响，设置故事的基调和初步冲突。2.救援计划：介绍主要角色和他们的初步行动，强调他们的任务和目的。3.挑战：描述角色如何应对环境挑战（比如：浓雾），并详细说明他们如何寻找线索（比如血迹或足迹）4.心理反应：描述角色在困难环境中的感受和心理状态，增加故事的深度和紧张感。5.发现伤员：描述角色发现受伤伤员的情景，描写视觉和听觉。第二段：紧急处理 + 强调合作 + 伤员缓解 + 反思与成长升华1.紧急处理：详细描述角色如何进行急
2、救操作，展示专业性和冷静。2.合作：强调团队合作的重要性和角色的专业技能，主人公医疗操作和支持行为。3.伤员缓解：强调伤员稍有恢复2.反思和成长：描述角色通过经历反思和成长，学到的教训或情感的变化。二、句式框架（第一段）（环境 + 救援计划 + 挑战 + 心理 + 发现伤员）（一）环境 When 天气 came, almost 影响范围 was affected1.当暴风雨来临时，几乎整个海岸线受到了影响。When the storm came, almost the entire coastline was affected.2.当大雾弥漫时，整个山区几乎被影响。When the fog s
3、pread, almost the entire mountainous area was affected.3.当高温来袭时，几乎整个城市的电力供应受到了影响。When the heatwave struck, almost the entire citys power supply was affected.4.当冰雹暴发时，几乎整个农田区域受到了影响。When the hailstorm broke out, almost the entire agricultural area was affected.5.当暴风雪来临时，几乎所有的交通路线都受到了影响。When the blizza
4、rd came, almost all transport routes were affected.6.当沙尘暴席卷时，几乎整个郊区受到了影响。When the sandstorm swept through, almost the entire suburb was affected.7.当极端寒冷来临时，几乎整个城镇的供暖系统受到了影响。When extreme cold arrived, almost the entire towns heating system was affected.8.当热带风暴袭来时，几乎整个岛屿的基础设施受到了影响。When the tropical st
5、orm hit, almost the entire islands infrastructure was affected.9.当雷雨天气发生时，几乎所有户外活动都受到了影响。When thunderstorms occurred, almost all outdoor activities were affected.10.当地震发生时，几乎整个城市的救援行动都受到了影响。When the earthquake occurred, almost the entire citys rescue operations were affected.（二）救援计划 + 挑战 + 心理 They h
6、ad to 行动 to search for clues like 线索内容，比如血液, which made them 对行动的影响, 情绪 than usual.例句他们不得不小心行走来寻找像血迹这样的线索，这使他们走得更慢，比平时更焦虑。They had to tread carefully to search for clues like bloodstains, which made them walk slower, more anxious than usual.他们不得不翻阅文件来寻找像手写笔记这样的线索，这使他们工作更缓慢，比平时更专注。They had to sift th
7、rough documents to search for clues like handwritten notes, which made them work slower, more focused than usual.他们不得不仔细听来寻找像呼救声这样的线索，这使他们移动更谨慎，比平时更警觉。They had to listen carefully to search for clues like cries for help, which made them move more cautiously, more alert than usual.他们不得不刨土来寻找像地下水管这样的线
8、索，这使他们挖掘更劳累，比平时更疲惫。They had to dig soil to search for clues like underground pipes, which made them dig more laboriously, more tired than usual.他们不得不爬山来寻找像遇难者遗留物这样的线索，这使他们爬升更艰难，比平时更紧张。They had to climb mountains to search for clues like remnants of the victims, which made them climb more difficultly
9、, more tense than usual.他们不得不划船来寻找像漂浮物这样的线索，这使他们划行更缓慢，比平时更焦虑。They had to row boats to search for clues like floating objects, which made them row slower, more anxious than usual.他们不得不跑步来寻找像足迹这样的线索，这使他们奔跑更迅速，比平时更疲惫。They had to run to search for clues like footprints, which made them run faster, more
10、exhausted than usual.他们不得不潜水来寻找像沉没物品这样的线索，这使他们潜行更困难，比平时更紧张。They had to dive to search for clues like sunken items, which made them dive more difficultly, more tense than usual.他们不得不趟水来寻找像洪水中的残骸这样的线索，这使他们行动更缓慢，比平时更沮丧。They had to wade through water to search for clues like debris in the flood, which m
11、ade them move slower, more despondent than usual.他们不得不攀爬来寻找像山体滑坡后的痕迹这样的线索，这使他们攀登更危险，比平时更警觉。They had to climb to search for clues like traces after a landslide, which made them climb more dangerously, more alert than usual.（三）发现伤员 + 情绪反应：Suddenly, 声音或者身影 came to the 救援者 and in front of them lay the 人
12、或者动物.Look 伤员名字 rushed forward, 情绪.It looked 伤员状态 because a wound on its 身体部位 was 描述伤口.1.突然，一阵呼救声传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一名男子。快看，汤姆冲上前去，激动地喊道。他看起来非常虚弱，因为他的左腿上有一个严重的伤口。Suddenly, a cry for help came to the rescuers, and in front of them lay a man.Look, Tom rushed forward, excitedly shouting.He looked very weak
13、because a wound on his left leg was bleeding severely.2.突然，一只受伤的鹿出现在救援者面前。看，贝拉跑过去，担忧地说。鹿看起来很痛苦，因为它的侧腹部正在流血。Suddenly, an injured deer appeared in front of the rescuers.Look, Bella rushed forward, worriedly.The deer looked in pain because its flank was bleeding.3.突然，一阵狗吠声传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一只狗。快看，吉姆冲上前去，紧
14、张地说。狗看起来筋疲力尽，因为它的右耳后有一个伤口。Suddenly, a barking sound came to the rescuers, and in front of them lay a dog.Look, Jim rushed forward, nervously.The dog looked exhausted because there was a wound behind its right ear.4.突然，一阵尖叫声传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一名女孩。看，莉莉冲上前去，惊慌地说。女孩看起来受到了惊吓，因为她的手臂上有擦伤。Suddenly, a scream ca
15、me to the rescuers, and in front of them lay a girl.Look, Lily rushed forward, frantically.The girl looked frightened because there was a scrape on her arm.5.突然，一声急促的哨声传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一名老人。看，萨拉跑过去，关切地说。老人看起来虚弱，因为他的脸上有划伤。Suddenly, a sharp whistle came to the rescuers, and in front of them lay an elder
16、ly man.Look, Sarah rushed over, concernedly.The old man looked frail because there was a scratch on his face.6.突然，一阵低沉的呻吟声传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一名士兵。看，马克冲上前去，紧张地说。士兵看起来疲惫不堪，因为他的背部正在流血。Suddenly, a low moan came to the rescuers, and in front of them lay a soldier.Look, Mark rushed forward, anxiously.The sold
17、ier looked extremely tired because his back was bleeding.7.突然，一阵刺耳的尖叫声传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一只小猫。看，艾米丽跑过去，兴奋地说。小猫看起来很害怕，因为它的尾巴有伤口。Suddenly, a piercing scream came to the rescuers, and in front of them lay a kitten.Look, Emily ran over, excitedly.The kitten looked scared because there was a wound on its tai
18、l.8.突然，一阵刺鼻的气味传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一只鸟。看，保罗走过去，好奇地说。鸟看起来不自在，因为它的翅膀受伤了。Suddenly, a pungent smell came to the rescuers, and in front of them lay a bird.Look, Paul walked over, curiously.The bird looked uncomfortable because its wing was injured.9.突然，一声急促的铃声传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一只松鼠。看，丹尼冲上前去，好奇地说。松鼠看起来很累，因为它的腿有伤口。
19、Suddenly, a rapid ringing sound came to the rescuers, and in front of them lay a squirrel.Look, Danny rushed forward, curiously.The squirrel looked tired because its leg was injured.10.突然，一阵动物的咆哮声传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一只狐狸。看，艾瑞卡跑过去，惊讶地说。狐狸看起来很疲惫，因为它的耳朵有伤口。Suddenly, an animals roar came to the rescuers, and
20、 in front of them lay a fox.Look, Erica ran over, surprised.The fox looked exhausted because there was a wound on its ear.三、翻译练习1.当暴风雨来临时，整个海边小镇受到了影响。他们不得不低头寻找如血迹这样的线索，这使他们行动更为缓慢，比平时更紧张。突然，一声呼救传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一名男子。看，汤姆冲上前去，紧张地喊道。他看起来极为虚弱，因为他的右臂上有一个深深的伤口。2.当大雾弥漫时，整个山区几乎被影响。他们不得不小心翼翼地寻找像足迹这样的线索，这使他们走得更
21、慢，感到前所未有的焦虑。突然，一只狗的吠叫声传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一只受伤的狗。“快看！”莉莉冲过去，担忧地说。狗看起来非常痛苦，因为它的后腿正在流血。3.当热浪袭来时，整个市中心受到了影响。他们不得不频繁停下来寻找如空气中异味这样的线索，这让他们步履艰难，比平时更烦躁。突然，一阵尖叫声传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一名女子。“看！”萨拉冲前一步，惊慌失措地说。女子看起来非常疲惫，因为她的腿上有被烫伤的痕迹。【参考答案】1.当暴风雨来临时，整个海边小镇受到了影响。他们不得不小心行走来寻找像血迹这样的线索，这使他们行动更为缓慢，比平时更紧张。突然，一声呼救传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一
22、名男子。快看，汤姆冲上前去，激动地喊道。他看起来非常虚弱，因为他的右腿上有一个深深的伤口。lWhen the storm hit, the entire seaside town was affected.They had to walk carefully to look for clues like bloodstains, which made them move more slowly, more anxious than usual.Suddenly, a cry for help reached the rescuers, and a man lay in front of the
23、m.Look, Tom rushed forward, shouting excitedly.He looked very weak because he had a deep wound on his right leg.2.当大雾弥漫时，整个山区几乎被影响。他们不得不小心翼翼地寻找像足迹这样的线索，这使他们走得更慢，感到前所未有的焦虑。突然，一只受伤的鹿出现在救援者面前。看，贝拉跑过去，担忧地说。鹿看起来很痛苦，因为它的侧腹部正在流血。When the fog spread, almost the entire mountain area was affected.They had to
24、search carefully for clues like footprints, which made them walk slower, feeling more anxious than ever before.Suddenly, an injured deer appeared in front of the rescuers.Look, Bella ran over, worriedly.The deer looked in pain because its flank was bleeding.3.当热浪来袭时，整个城市的电力供应受到了影响。他们不得不频繁停下来寻找像空气中异味
25、这样的线索，这让他们步履艰难，比平时更烦躁。突然，一阵尖叫声传到了救援者耳边，他们面前躺着一名女子。看，萨拉跑前一步，惊慌失措地说。女子看起来非常疲惫，因为她的腿上有被烫伤的痕迹。lWhen the heatwave struck, the entire citys power supply was affected.They had to stop frequently to search for clues like odd smells in the air, which made their steps laborious, more irritable than usual.Suddenly, a scream reached the rescuers, and a woman lay in front of them.Look, Sarah stepped forward, frantically.The woman looked very tired because there were burn marks on her leg. 4
