1、高考英语读后续写万能结尾升华句式1.氛围结尾“飘在空中/充满/沉浸在” floated in the air/filled 地点/was bathed in 金色的阳光照了进来，笑声在院子/房间里回荡，空气中弥漫着幸福。(2022年卖爆米花)The golden sunlight streaming in, laughter lingered around the yard and happiness floated in the air.随着凉爽的微风，全家人沐浴在幸福和爱中。(2021年6月母亲节惊喜)With the cool breeze, the whole family was b
2、athed in happiness and love.笑声和幸福充满了房间，狗们互相追逐着。(2020年1月浙江Poppy的新伙伴)The laughter and happiness filled the room with the dogs chasing each other.尽管冬风凛冽，他们家里的两只可爱的小狗快乐地玩耍，家里满是爱和团聚的温暖。(2020年1月浙江Poppy的新伙伴) Despite the chill winter wind, their home where the two lovely dogs played happily was filled with
3、the warmth of love and reunion.2.拥抱哭泣对话法A hugged B tightly (with tears flowing down ones cheeks), whispering母亲紧紧地抱着双胞胎，幸福的泪水顺着脸颊流下来，低声说“这是世界上最好的惊喜!” (2021年6月母亲节惊喜)The mother hugged the twins tightly, with tears of happiness flowing down her cheeks, whispering, “This is the best surprise in the world
4、!”我冲过去紧紧地拥抱了大卫，激动的泪水顺着我的脸颊流下来，低声说“你是我心中的冠军。”(2022年6月越野跑)I rushed and hugged David tightly, with tears of excitement flowing down my cheeks, whispering, “You are the champion in my heart.”伯纳德紧紧地拿着硬币，眼泪不由自主地顺着脸颊滚落下来，他紧紧地拥抱着约翰，低声说“是你的帮助和善良是我的生活充满了希望。”(2022年卖爆米花)Holding the coins tightly and tears rolli
5、ng down his cheeks without control, Bernard hugged John tightly, whispering, “It is your help and kindness that make my life full of hope.”3.强调句“正是” It is/was+名词+that+谓语(count/matter/bring) 正是爱和关怀使世界运转。(2022年6月浙江助人/(2022年卖爆米花)It is love and care that make the world go around.正是大卫勇敢的心和坚定的信念赢得了所有人的尊敬。
6、(2022年6月越野跑)It was Davids brave heart and strong faith that won all peoples respect.正是老师的鼓励使我走上了写作之路。(2023写作比赛)It was my teachers encouragement that led me to the road to writing.正是信任与合作造就了共同的成功。 (2022年1月浙江学霸队友)It was trust and cooperation that made the shared success.正是这个新伙伴使波比又高兴起来了。 (2020年1月浙江Pop
7、py的新伙伴)It was the new companion that made Poppy cheerful again.正是在那一刻，我充分理解了家庭的重要性。(2021年6月浙江如何用钱)It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.就在那一天，我意识到爸爸在我这个年纪所取得的成就比我伟大得多。(2021年6月浙江如何用钱)It was on that day that I realized what Dad had accomplished at my age w
8、as such greater than I did.4.之后改变：“从那时起，” From then on, 从那时起，伯纳德决定帮助需要帮助的人。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。From then on, Bernard always gave others a helping hand if possible.Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.从那时起，我总是尽我最大的努力做一切可能帮助那些需要帮助的人。 (2022年6月浙江助人)From then on, I a
9、lways try my best to do everything possible to help those in need.从那时起，友谊在我们两人的心中绽放。 (2022年1月浙江学霸队友)From then on, friendship bloomed in both of our hearts.从那时起，我就下定决心要向农民要求更多的工作来帮父母减轻负担。(2021年6月浙江如何用钱)From then on, I made my mind to ask for the farmer for more work to help relieve my parents burden.
10、从那时起，我下定决心要不断挑战自己，拥抱更好的自己。 (2023写作比赛)From then on, I made up my mind to keep on challenging myself and embrace a better me.从那时起，我不仅掌握了良好的写作能力，而且还知道了一个真理只要有信念和决心,一切皆有可能。(2023写作比赛)From then on, not only did I have a good command of writing, but also I knew the truthwith belief and determination everyt
11、hing is possible.5.得出感悟：公式一：这段难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that.公式二：回顾所发生的一切，我学到了宝贵的一课Looking back on what happened, I learned a valuable lesson that公式三：“直到那时某人才意识到”Only then did sb.realize that公式四： “某人突然想到”It occurred to sb.that /It hit sb.that/It struck s
12、b.that这段难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课我们确实有能力与他人分享我们的快乐，那就是传播爱。 (2022年6月浙江助人)This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that we did have the power to share our happiness with others, that is, spreading love.这段难忘的经历给我上了宝贵的一课决心和勇气才是重要的。(2022年6月越野跑)This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable less
13、on that it was determination and courage that count.回顾过去发生的一切，我学到了宝贵的一课重要的不是发生了什么，而是你如何应对。(2022年6月越野跑)Looking back on what happened, I learned a valuable lesson that its not what happens to you, but how you react to it that matters.回顾发生的一切，我学到了一个宝贵的教训大自然是如此可爱和神秘，以至于我们在面对它时都感到敬畏和谦卑。(2020年7月浙江熊口脱险)Loo
14、king back on what happened, I learned a valuable lesson that nature was so adorable and mysterious that we all felt awed and humble when faced with it.回顾所发生的一切，我学到了一个宝贵的教训良好的团队合作是成功的关键。(2022年1月浙江学霸队友)Looking back on what happened, I learned a valuable lesson that good teamwork is the key to success.
15、回顾所发生的一切，我学到了一个宝贵的教训我们人类应该与其他生物和谐相处。 (2023年1月浙江蜂鸟)Looking back on what happened, I learned a valuable lesson that we human beings should live in harmony with other living creatures.直到那时我才意识到只要有决心和毅力，一切皆有可能。 (2023写作比赛/2022年6月越野跑)Only then did I realize that/It occurred to me that anything is possible
16、 with determination and perseverance.= It hit me that anything is possible with efforts, determination and perseverance.直到那时，我才意识到决心可以战胜恐惧和自我怀疑。(2023写作比赛/2022年6月越野跑)Only then did I realize that determination could defeat fear and self-doubt.直到那时，我才意识到勇敢和自信可以战胜恐惧，走向成功。(2023写作比赛)Only then did I realiz
17、e that bravery and self-believe can conquer fear and lead to success.我突然意识到，力量在于我们认为自己能做什么，而不是别人认为我们不能做什么。(2022年6月越野跑)It occurred to me that strength lies in what we think we can do rather than what others think we cant do.孩子们突然想到一个小小的善举可以对别人产生很大的影响。 (2022年卖爆米花)It occurred to the children that a sma
18、ll act of kindness can make a big difference to others.我突然想到减轻家庭的生活负担是一种骄傲。(2021年6月浙江如何用钱)It occurred to me that its a pride to lighten the burden of life for my family.6.无论何时回首/想到，某人总是/仍然Whenever looking back on/thinking of the experience/the journey, sb.always/still无论何时回首充满惊险之旅，我们觉得最终这一切都值得。(2020年
19、7月浙江熊口脱险)Whenever looking back on our adventurous journey, we realized that it was all worth it in the end.(2) 每当想起这段经历，我的心中仍涌起一股暖流。(2023年1月浙江蜂鸟)Whenever thinking of the experience, I still feel a warm current rising in my heart.7.永不忘公式一许多年过去了, 但我永远不会忘记Many years have passed, but I will never forget
20、 (the experience.)公式二：许多年过去了，但那段经历仍然深深地刻在某人的脑海里。Many years have passed, but .(the experience) is still deeply engraved/lingered in ones mind.公式三：注定永远留在某人的记忆中，照亮未来的道路 is bound to be kept in ones memory forever, lightening ones future path.公式四：我会永远珍惜这些回忆。I would always cherish the memories.许多年过去了，但老师的
21、鼓励仍然铭刻在我的脑海里。 (2023写作比赛)Many years have passed, but the teachers encouragement is still engraved/lingered in my mind.老师的鼓励必将永远留在我的记忆中，照亮我未来的道路。 (2023写作比赛)The teachers encouragement is bound to be kept in my memory forever, lightening my future path.这么多年过去了，那只蜂鸟无言的感激之情，依然铭刻在我的脑海里。 (2023年1月浙江蜂鸟)After
22、so many years, the hummingbirds unspoken gratitude is still engraved in my mind.许多年过去了，但我永远不会忘记他们被给予食物时看我的样子。 (2022年6月浙江助人)Many years have passed, but I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food.许多年过去了，但南瓜的味道和人们的笑声仍然深深地刻在我的脑海里。 (2021年1月浙江南瓜卡头)Many years have passed, but t
23、he smell of the pumpkin and peoples laughter are still deeply engraved in my mind.这段经历注定会永远留在我的记忆中。The experience is bound to be kept in my memory forever.= Many years have passed, but the experience is still deeply engraved in my mind.8.感叹结尾：What a/an +adj.+n.(it is)! / How adj.it was!多么难忘的万圣节啊! (2
24、021年1月浙江南瓜卡头)What an unforgettable Halloween!多么死里逃生啊! (2020年7月浙江熊口脱险)What a narrow escape!多么难忘的经历啊!What an unforgettable experience!多么甜蜜的惊喜啊! (2021年6月母亲节惊喜)What a sweet surprise!多么温馨的一幕啊! (2020年1月浙江Poppy的新伙伴)What a warm scene!9.谚语结尾 正如谚语所说， (Just) As a saying goes, “谚语”正如谚语所说，“如果你相信自己，任何困难都不会持续太久。”
25、(2023写作比赛/2022年6月越野跑)As the saying goes, If you believe in yourself, no difficulty can last long.”正如谚语所说， “一个人走得远，但一群人走得更远。” (2022年1月浙江学霸队友)Just as a saying goes, “One person can go for, but a group of people can travel further.”正如谚语所说，俗话说“幸福在于帮助别人。”(2022年6月浙江助人/2022年卖爆米花)Just as a saying goes, “Happiness lies in giving help to others.”正如俗话所说“用我们所拥有的，做我们所能做的!” (2022年6月越野跑)Just as a saying goes, “Do what we can with what we have!”4
