1、七年级英语下册Module 8写作指导【写作目标】对一则英文故事进行续写。【写作任务】本节课后，英语老师要求同学们对Unit 2中的故事Goldilocks and the Three Bears进行续写。请你想象一下Goldilocks离开三只熊的房子后会发生什么，写一篇英语小短文完成这则故事的续写。【指点迷津】本次写作任务要求用英语对Unit 2的故事进行续写，其写作要点如下：(1) 内容：首先介绍人物和地点；然后描述事件，即对Goldilocks在三只熊的房子里做过的事以及她吸取到的教训进行续写。(2) 人称：第三人称。(3) 时态：一般过去时。(4) 文体：记叙文。【谋篇布局】续写故事
2、Goldilocks and theThree Bears介绍人物和地点Goldilocks匆忙回到家。Goldilocks hurried back home.描述事件(1) Goldilocks很害怕，所以她哭了。Goldilocks was afraid so _ _.(2) Goldilocks想对小熊说声对不起，因为她吃完了他碗里的食物，把他的椅子弄散架了，还用了他的床。Goldilocks _ _ _ _ _ Baby Bear because she_ _ _ in his bowl, made his chair in pieces and used his bed.(3) G
3、oldilocks认识到，当没有人在家里时，进入别人的家并使用他们的东西是不对的。Goldilocks learned that it isnt right to _ _ _ or use theirthings when nobody is at home.【巧衔接】在讲述简短的故事时，可通过first、next及finally等表示时间顺序的词语有条理地展开，使行文自然、流畅。【连句成文】同学们，根据【谋篇布局】的练习，赶快动笔完成这个故事续写吧！续写故事Goldilocks and the Three Bears 【收藏夹】用英文讲故事时常用的英语连接词当用英文讲故事时，使用适当的连接词
4、可以使叙述更加流畅、连贯。以下是一些常用的英语连接词。表示顺序first / at first, then / and then, after that, next, later, finally / at last / in theend .表示转折but,however(然而) .表示递进also,moreover/besides(此外),whats more(另外) .表示因果because / because of,due to(由于), so / thus / therefore / hence,as aresult(结果) .【小试身手】同学们，请参考课本第 53 页 Module
5、 task 中的图片，结合左边提到的连接词，用英语写一则故事并讲给你的同学们吧！参考词汇：用鹅卵石填满大海 fill up the sea with pebbles 答案【谋篇布局】(1) she cried(2) wanted to say sorry to; finished the food(3) enter others houses【连句成文】续写故事Goldilocks and the Three BearsGoldilocks hurried back home.First, she wasafraid so she cried.Next, she wanted to say s
6、orryto Baby Bear because she finished the food in hisbowl, made his chair in pieces and used his bed.Finally, she learned that it isnt right to enterothers houses or use their things when nobody isat home.【小试身手】One possible version:Once upon a time there was a little girl calledNwa. Her father was E
7、mperor Yan and he lovedNwa very much. He often played games withNwa. One day Nwa travelled alone by boat.Atfirst, the weather was fine.But laterit changed.A strong wind knocked over Nwas boat.In theend, Nwa died.After thatNwa changed into abird named Jingwei and returned home to herfather. Her father was sadbecausehis daughterdied.However, when he watched the bird, heknew his daughter was back. Jingwei didnt likethe sea,soshe decided to return to the sea and fillit up with pebbles.3
