1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习贫困家庭的男孩被妹妹的鞋丢了，决心参加长跑比赛为妹妹赢鞋1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文Ali and his younger sister,Zahra,lived with their parents in a poor neighborhood.Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job,and they had only a little money with which to buy food.As they had n
2、ot paid the rent for several months,the landlord was breathing down their necks.4续写原文One day,Ali took Zahras shoes to a shoe repairman to be fixed,but he lost them on the way home.It wasnt until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes.He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disa
3、ppointed,so he begged his sister to keep it secret.Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Alis running shoes.Zahras school hours were in the morning,so she would wear them first.After school,she would rush back and give them to Ali.He could then run to his school,which began in the afternoon.Alth
4、ough he ran as fast as he could,Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.5续写原文Ali heard about a long distance race that was held for the boys in the city.When he learned that the third prize was a new pair of shoes,he decided to take part.He ran home excitedly and promised his sister that
5、 he would win her the new shoes.6段首句Para 1：The day of race arrived.Ali had a strong start,but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache.(痛)Para 2：Filled with delight,Ali walked home quickly.7Part 2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以人物为线索展开，主角是生在穷苦家庭的一对兄妹，有一天哥哥Ali拿着妹妹Zahra的鞋去修，却在回家路上把鞋弄丢了
6、，为了不让父母生气俩人约定保守秘密：哥哥早上穿鞋去学校，中午跑回家把鞋换给妹妹。城里举办了长途赛跑，第三名奖品是一双新鞋，Ali决定为了妹妹去参加。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析 Para 1：The day of race arrived.Ali had a strong start,but halfway through the race he began to get tired
7、and his legs began to ache.(痛)由第一段首句内容“比赛的日子到了。Ali开头跑得很好，但比赛中途他开始感到累了，腿也开始疼。”可知，第一段可描写Ali在为妹妹赢得新鞋的信念支持下，咬着牙坚持下来，最终赢得了第三名。11续写思路分析 Para 2：Filled with delight,Ali walked home quickly.由第二段首句内容“Ali满怀喜悦地快速走回家。”可知，第二段可描写Ali回到家后，和妹妹一起分享了赢得新鞋的喜悦。12续写素材 续写素材 跑不动想到妹妹咬牙坚持赢得比赛拿到新鞋回家见到妹妹和妹妹分享喜悦13续写素材 续写素材 行为类 决定
8、：be determined to/decide to/make a decision to.回家：go back home/return home.鼓舞：give him strength/inspire/stimulate 情绪类.感谢：showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful.喜悦：feel happy/delighted/pleased/overjoyed14续写素材 续写素材 高分句型1.Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him s
9、trength,and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners,determined to finish third.（运用了动名词作主语及过去分词作状语）高分句型2.Nervous and anxious,Zahra wondered whether her brother had brought her what she was expecting.（运用了whether引导的宾语从句和what引导的宾语从句）15Part 3范文呈现16范文呈现The day of race arrived.Ali had a strong start
10、,but halfway through the race he began to get tired and his legs began to ache.Getting more and more exhausted he thought only of Zahra and his promise to her.Dreaming of the new shoes he would win for his sister gave him strength,and he stayed right behind the two fastest runners,determined to fini
11、sh third.Finally,he heard the announcement from the broadcast that he won the third prize.Holding the shoes close to his chest during the award ceremony,Ali felt overjoyed and relieved as he eventually won the shoes for his sister.17范文呈现Filled with delight,Ali walked home quickly.He could not wait t
12、o see his sister and share the good news.On his arrival,Ali found Zahra was waiting outside.Nervous and anxious,Zahra wondered whether her brother had brought her what she was expecting.“Zahra,see what I have got for you.”Ali said excitedly,taking the prize out of his bag with his trembling hands.Th
13、e instant Zahra saw the shoes,her face lit up.So thrilled was she that she threw herself at Ali.“Thank you!Ali.”Tears of joy welled up in their eyes as the brother and the sister hugged tightly together.18范文译文比赛的日子到了。阿里开局不错，但在比赛进行到一半时，他开始感到疲倦，双腿开始疼痛。他越来越疲惫，只想着扎赫拉和他对她的承诺。梦见自己会为妹妹赢得新鞋，这给了他力量，他紧随两位最快的跑
14、步者，决心获得第三名。最后，他听到广播宣布他获得了三等奖。在颁奖典礼上，阿里把鞋子放在胸前，最终为妹妹赢得了鞋子，他感到既高兴又欣慰。阿里满心欢喜，快步走回家。他迫不及待地想见到他的妹妹，并分享这个好消息。阿里一到，就发现扎赫拉在外面等着。紧张而焦虑的扎赫拉想知道她的哥哥是否给她带来了她所期待的东西。“萨拉，看看我给你买了什么。”阿里激动地说，用颤抖的手从包里拿出奖品。扎拉一看到鞋子，脸就亮了起来。她激动得扑向阿里。“谢谢你！阿里。”哥哥和姐姐紧紧地拥抱在一起，眼中涌出了喜悦的泪水。19Part 4努力方向20高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语21定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）22Thank you!
