1、连词成句一分二定三检查一分“一分”是指分清每个单词的词性与功能。通常情况下，名词、代词或相当于名词的词或短语充当句子的主语或宾语；动词、动词短语作谓语；形容词担任定语或系动词构成表语；副词或介词短语作状语。二定确定句子的主语、谓语及宾语成分（也即“主干”）何 人做 了 何 事何 时何 地主语+谓语+宾语+时间+地点三检查v检查标点符号的使用是否正确；检查主、谓语等成分在人称与数上是否保持一致；检查是否有单词被遗漏或书写是否规范。n1今天上午今天上午7：30，我们在学校门口集中。，我们在学校门口集中。n at the school gate,we,today,at 7:30,met.n Toda
2、y we met at the school gate at 7:30.n2.然后然后8：00到达汽车站；到达汽车站；n got to,then,the bus station,we,at 8:00.n Then we got to the bus station at 8:00.n3.到那之后，我们开始到那之后，我们开始打扫车站地板，清洁候打扫车站地板，清洁候车室座位。车室座位。n got there,after,we,we,sweep the floor,began to,the seats,in the waiting room.n After we got there,we began
3、 to sweep the floor,the seats in the waiting room.n4我们帮助乘客提行李。我们帮助乘客提行李。n the passengers,helped,the luggages,we,carry.n We helped the passengers carry the luggages.n5.然后我们然后我们8：00到达汽车站；到达汽车站；n got to,then,the bus station,we,at 8:00.n Then we got to the bus station at 8:00.n6.下午下午3:00我们去敬老院看望老人。我们去敬老
4、院看望老人。n went to,in the afternoon,the old people,we,at 3:00,visit,in the Old Peoples Home.n In the afternoon,we went to visit the old people at 3:00 in the Old Peoples Home.n7我们用零花钱买水果送给老人。我们用零花钱买水果送给老人。n some fruits,our,for,pocket money,with,we,bought,them.n We bought some fruits for them with our p
5、ocket money.n8.然后我们帮助他们洗衣服，搞清洁；然后我们帮助他们洗衣服，搞清洁；helped,then,and,do some cleaning,them,we,wash clothes.n Then we helped them wash clothes and do some cleaning.n9.我们给老人唱歌、跳舞。我们给老人唱歌、跳舞。n for,we,danced,and,sang,them.n we sang and danced for them.n10一个下午我们和他们玩得很开心。一个下午我们和他们玩得很开心。n with,in the afternoon,w
6、e,had,them,a good time.n We had a good time in the afternoon with them.n11.虽然累，但是能帮助别人，我们都觉得很开心虽然累，但是能帮助别人，我们都觉得很开心。n tired,but,we,felt,we,happy,because,others,all,felt,we,could help.n We felt tired but we all felt happy because we could help others.抄改连扩抓审书面表达书面表达六步法n(2012年广西钦州年广西钦州)书面表达（书面表达（15分）分）
7、n上周星期六，你们班委会组织了一次社会实践活动。请你上周星期六，你们班委会组织了一次社会实践活动。请你根据下面所给的内容要点，用英语写一篇短文，描述当天根据下面所给的内容要点，用英语写一篇短文，描述当天的活动经过。的活动经过。n内容要点：内容要点：n1上午上午7：30在学校门口集中，在学校门口集中，8：00到达汽车站；到达汽车站；n2打扫车站地板，清洁候车室座位，帮旅客提行李打扫车站地板，清洁候车室座位，帮旅客提行李n3下午下午3：00到敬老院看望老人。用零花钱买水果送给老到敬老院看望老人。用零花钱买水果送给老人，帮老人洗衣服、扫地，给老人唱歌、跳舞，大家一起人，帮老人洗衣服、扫地，给老人唱歌
8、、跳舞，大家一起度过了一个愉快的下午；度过了一个愉快的下午；n4能帮助别人，我们都觉得很开心。能帮助别人，我们都觉得很开心。n5参考词汇：车站参考词汇：车站station；候车室；候车室waiting room；行李；行李luggage；敬老院；敬老院the Old Peoples Home，打扫，打扫sweep（swept，swept）。）。n注意：文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称，否则不予评分。注意：文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称，否则不予评分。n Today we met at the school gate at 7:30.Then we went to the bus station
9、and got there at 8:00.n After we got there,we began to sweep the floor,the seats in the waiting room and helped the passengers,such as carrying the luggages,helping the old and young get on the bus and so on.n In the afternoon,we went to visit the old people at 3:00 in the Old Peoples Home.We bought
10、 some fruits for them with our pocket money.Then we helped them wash clothes and do some cleaning.We sang and danced for them.We had a good time in the afternoon with them.n We felt tired but we all felt happy because we could help others.小结：书面表达如此简单n分清成分n连词成句n连句成文n巩固练习：巩固练习：n（2011年广西钦州）书面表达年广西钦州）书面
11、表达(10分分)n注意：请在答题卡上作答。注意：请在答题卡上作答。n 同学们，运动使我们健康、快乐。今年广同学们，运动使我们健康、快乐。今年广西第十二届运动会将在我市举行，请你以西第十二届运动会将在我市举行，请你以“Lets do sports”为题写一篇短文。为题写一篇短文。n 内容提示：内容提示：1.运动的重要性。运动的重要性。2.你喜欢什你喜欢什么运动，每天你做什么运动？么运动，每天你做什么运动？3.作为一名中学作为一名中学生，为迎区运会你打算做些什么？生，为迎区运会你打算做些什么？n 要求：要求：1文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和所文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。在学校的名称。
12、2可自由发挥，词数可自由发挥，词数70左右。左右。3短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。n提示词：提示词：nbe good for,feel relaxed,strong,favourite,the 12th Games of Guangxi,clean,beautiful,friendlyn1.提取：be good for 对有好处n 扩展：做运动对健康有好处。n 成句：Doing sports is good for our health.n2.提取：feel relaxed 觉得轻松n 扩展：运动后我觉得轻松。n 成句：After sports I usually
13、 feel relaxed.n3.提取：strong 强壮的n 扩展：做运动使我们越来越强壮。n 成句：Doing sports makes us stronger and stronger.n4.提取：提取：favourite 最喜爱的最喜爱的n 扩展：我最喜爱的运动是游泳。扩展：我最喜爱的运动是游泳。n 成句：成句：My favourite sport is swimming.n5.提取：提取：the 12th Game of Guangxi 第十二届区运会第十二届区运会n 扩展：第十二届区运会就要来了。扩展：第十二届区运会就要来了。n 成句：成句：The 12th Games of Gu
14、angxi is coming.n6.提取：提取：clean清洁清洁 beautiful美丽美丽n 扩展：我们将搞清洁让我们的城市更美丽。扩展：我们将搞清洁让我们的城市更美丽。n 成句：成句：We will do some cleaning to make our city more beautiful.n7.提取：提取：friendly友好的友好的n 扩展：我们应该对每个人友好。扩展：我们应该对每个人友好。n 成句：成句：We should be friendly to everyone.nLet s Do Sportsn I think it is important for everyo
15、ne to do sports.I like sports because doing sports is good for our health.Doing sports makes us stronger and stronger.It is also good for our study.After sports I usually feel relaxed and happy.My favourite sport is swimming.I often go swimming with my friends at the Weekends.I run in the morning.I play basketball in the afternoon.The 12th Games of Guangxi is coming,I am going to do sports every day.We will do some cleaning to make our city more beautiful.We should be friendly to everyone.
