1、2024年新课标二卷读后续写Jessie July,2024高考真题第二节（满分第二节（满分25分）分）阅读下面材料阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。使之构成一篇完整的短文。I met Gunter on a cold,wet and unforgettable evening in September.I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm,my flight had been
2、 delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane,I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.That was when I met Gunter.I told hi
3、m where I was going,but he said he hadnt heard of the bus station.I thought my pronunciation was the problem,so I explained again more slowly,but he still looked confused.When I was about to give up,Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for wha
4、t seemed like a century,Gunter put his phone down and started the car.高考真题Finally,with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully,there was a long queue（队列）（队列）still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus,turned around,and looked at me with a big smil
5、e on his face.We made it,he said.Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times,but the card machine just did not play along.A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thin
6、ning out.At this moment,Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There,at the entrance,was a cash machine.I jumped out of the car,made a mad run for the machine,and popped my card in,only to read the message:Out of order.Sorry.”高考真题注意注意:（1）续写词数应为）续写词数应为150个左右个左右;（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作
7、答。）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised.目录Basic knowldege about a storyPassage analysisWriting techniquesWriting practice Basic knowldege about a story故事的基本知识011.Structure:Introduction(The set-up)Body(C
8、onflict)Conclusion the development of the storyto create a series of conflicts2.6 elements:5Ws1HwhowhenwherewhatwhyhowSolutionIntroduction(The set-up)Body(Conflict)the beginning of a storyto introduce the story,set the background(背景背景),and introduce the main characters(主主要人物要人物)and the general envir
9、onment(环境环境)the ending of the story to reveal the theme of the storyConclusion How much do you know about a story?Passage analysis语篇分析0212345Main idea:The story is mainly abouthow_ managed to helpthe writer to _.a taxi drivercatch the last bus to Prague Task one:Read for the main idea and structure
10、of the story.67How many paragraphs is the passage made up of?How many parts can the passage be divided into?1234567Introduction(para1)Body(para2-6)Conclusion(para7)How many conflicts happened during the process?Task one:Read for the main idea and structure of the story.I met Gunter on a cold,wet and
11、 unforgettable evening in September.I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference.Due to a big storm,my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half.I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague.The moment I got off the plane,I ra
12、n like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.whowhenintroductionPart 1(para 1):whereconflict 1:whatwhyhowSolution?Task two:Read for the story line of the story.what That was when I met Gunter.I told him where I was going,but he said he
13、 hadnt heard of the bus station.I thought my pronunciation was the problem,so I explained again more slowly,but he still looked confused.When I was about to give up,Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend.After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century,Gunter put
14、 his phone down and started the car.Finally,with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station.Thankfully,there was a long queue（队列）（队列）still waiting to board the bus.Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus,turned around,and looked at me with a big smile on his face.We made it,he said.Part
15、2(paragraph 2-3):Conflict 2:whatwhyhowSolution?Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet.I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard.He tried it several times,but the card machine just did not play along.A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the
16、bus queue thinning out.At this moment,Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station.There,at the entrance,was a cash machine.I jumped out of the car,made a mad run for the machine,and popped my card in,only to read the message:Out of order.Sorry.”Conflict 3:whatwhyhowSolution?Part 2(par
17、agraph 4-5):I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised.How did I get Gunters phone number?How did Gunter respond to my call?How did I pay the taxi fare?Why did the writer share this story?conclusion(theme)1.I made it to Prague
18、 without paying the fare.2.I got Gunters telephone number.3.I promised to pay the fare when I came back to Vienna.conflict 3solution1.I met Gunter again.2.I paid the taxi fare as promised.How?What?How did I feel when I told him the news?What did Gunter say to me?Theme(主题):_To praise kindness and mut
19、ual trust beween people.How did I catch the bus?03Writing techniques写作技巧Language features1.fished out his phone.2.a heated dicussion.3.looked at me with a big smile4.“We made it.”First interaction(para 2-3)1.He tried it several times2.pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station3.Second inter
20、action(para4-6)1.flashed him an apologetic smile2.A feeling of helplessness washed over.3.jumped out of the car,made a mad run.4.0201IGunter1.I was about to give up2.lasted for what seemed like a century 3.Finally,with just two minutes to spare.4.Thankfully,.03Third interaction(para7)How to make a s
21、tory vivid and interesting？语言描写What did you/he say/hear?所做行为描写What did you/he do？所说/闻所想心理描写What did you think?所感情感描写How did you feel?增加细节所见环境描写人物描写What did you see?04Writing practice动笔写作Please write the last 2 paragraphs of the story.Paragraph 6:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news._Paragr
22、aph 7.Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as promised._注意注意:（1）续写词数应为）续写词数应为150个左右个左右;（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。1.每段75个词左右2.每段5-6个句子左右Please create the last 2 paragraphs of the story.Paragraph 6:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.1.How did I feel?(心理描写
23、心理描写)(行为描写行为描写)Eg.I felt very embarrased and didnt dare to look at his eyes.2.How did he respond to the bad news?(语言描写语言描写)(行为描写行为描写)Eg.1)Hearing my words,he kept silent for a moment,and then said“Go then.”2)He frowned and seemed to be trying to figure out a way.“Go then”,suddenly he said.3.How did
24、I feel at his words?(心理描写心理描写)(情感描写情感描写)Eg.1)I couldnt believe my ears,but he looked very serious.4.How did I get his telephone number?(语言描写语言描写)(行为描写行为描写)Eg.1)“Thank you!”I expressed millions of thanks to him and scribbled down his phone number,promising to call him when I came back.5.Did I catch t
25、he bus at last?How?(情感描写情感描写)(行为描写行为描写)Eg.1)Seizing my luggage,I ran cazily to the bus.The moment I got on the bus,it started moving.Through the window,I waved goodbye to Gunter.Please write the last 2 paragraphs of the story.(176)Paragraph 7.(77)Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gu
26、nter as promised.1.How did Gunter respond to my call?(行为描写行为描写)(语言描写语言描写)Eg.1)He sounded very glad to receive my call and we made an appointment to meet at the cafe in the bus waiting hall.2.How did I pay the Taxi fare?(语言描写语言描写)(行为描写行为描写)(环境描写环境描写)Eg.1)After paying Gunter the taxi fare,I offered hi
27、m an extra tip,but he refused.Instead,he told me to call him the next time I was in Vienna and buy him a beer.3.Whats the end of the story?(心理描写心理描写)(情感描写情感描写)(语言描写语言描写)(环境描写环境描写)Eg.1)Sure,I promised,and maybe more beers,now that I have made a true friend in this unforgettable city.One possible vers
28、ion:(179 words)I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.Feeling very embarrased,I didnt dare to look at his eyes.He frowned and seemed to be trying to figure out a way.“Go then”,suddenly he said.I couldnt believe my ears,but he looked very serious.“Thank you!”I expressed millions of thanks to
29、him and scribbled down his phone number,promising to call him when I came back.Seizing my luggage,I ran cazily to the bus.The moment I got on the bus,it started moving.Through the window,I waved goodbye to Gunter.And he kept smiling at me.Four days later,when I was back in Vienna,I called Gunter as
30、promised.He sounded very glad to receive my call and we made an appointment to meet at the cafe in the bus waiting hall.After paying him the taxi fare,I offered him an extra tip,but he refused.Instead,he told me to call him the next time I was in Vienna and buy him a beer.Sure,I promised,and maybe more beers,now that I have made a true friend in this unforgettable city.谢谢！THANK YOU2024年7月
