1、高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、建议信：高中学习压力和交友困难浙江G5联盟2024学年第一学期高一年级期中联考学校英语报上刊登了署名Eric的求助信，讲述进入高中后面临学习压力和交友困难。假定你是李华，请你给Eric写一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解；2.提出建议（至少两条）。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.请按如下格式作答。Dear Eric,Yours,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段表示理解（要点1）；第二段提出具体建议（要点2）；第三段表达期望。【参考范文】Dear Eric,I have learnt in
2、the school English newspaper that the academic pressure is bothering you and that making friends is a great challenge for you. As a matter of fact, it is not uncommon for a freshman to go through these sufferings. Here comes my advice.As for your study, it always comes first to develop a well-struct
3、ured study plan and schedule daily tasks accordingly. Keeping a good sleep and diet routine is also preferable, which is vital for maximizing learning efficiency. When it comes to making friends, it is advisable to join various clubs or interest groups of your school, which facilitates making more l
4、ike-minded friends while enriching your extracurricular activities.I hope these suggestions are of some help to you. (122 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的埃里克：我在学校英语报上得知你进入高中后所面临的压力和困扰。事实上，同为高一学生，高中生活确实充满了挑战，但请相信，你并不孤单。我给你提几点建议。就学习而言，首先，尝试制定一个合理的学习计划，分配好每天的学习任务。其次，保持良好的睡眠和饮食习惯，这对提高学习效率非常重要。在交友方面，我建议你多参加学校
5、的社团活动或兴趣小组，这不仅能让你发现更多志同道合的朋友，还能丰富你的课余生活。希望这些建议能对你有所帮助。李华【参考范文解析】01 应用文写作思路（1）审题判定文体为建议信；（2）因文本是对学校英文报一位外国学生的求助内容提建议，故李华的身份可不必交代；（3）因文体主体部分为提出学习和交友方面的建议，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。02 本文亮点（1）it is not uncommon for a freshman to双重否定表达肯定意义；（2）it always comes first to做某事排在首位的；（3）. is also preferable某事也是更可取的；（4）maxi
6、mizing learning efficiency最大化（提升）学习效率；（5）When it comes to当说到；（6）it is advisable to做某事是推荐的；（7）are of some help to you对你来说是有所帮助的。二、分享信：传统手工艺体验课巴蜀中学2025届高考适应性月考卷三假定你是李华，上周日你们班上了一堂传统手工艺体验课(traditional handicraft workshop)。请你给你的英国网友Chris写一封电子邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：1.你的作品；2.你的感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
7、。Dear Chris,Yours,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段交代写作目的分享一堂传统手工艺体验课；第二段分享自己的作品（要点1）；第三段写感想（要点2）。【参考范文】Dear Chris,I hope this email finds you well! Last Sunday witnessed my classs experience in a traditional handicraft workshop, where I crafted a Chinese knot by hand.Throughout the production
8、 process, I acquired skills in weaving, twisting, and knotting the red thread, with each procedure bringing challenges along wth enjoyment. After great endeavors, a Chinese knot symbolizing good fortune rested proudly in my hands.The experience impressed me with the extensive and profound nature of
9、Chinese traditional culture, where each and every tiny detail speaks volumes of craftsmens wisdom and dedication. I take great pride in having produced such work with my own hands and hold immense respect for those craftsmen devoted to preserving and passing on our cultural heritage. (119 words)Your
10、s,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的克里斯：见信好！上周日，我参与了一堂传统手工艺体验课，亲手制作了一个中国结。制作过程中，我学习了如何将红线编织、缠绕、打结，每一步都充满了挑战与乐趣。经过反复尝试，一个象征着吉祥如意的中国结终于在我手中诞生。这次体验让我深刻感受到中国传统文化的博大精深，每一个细节都透露着匠人的智慧与心血。我为自己能够亲手制作出这样的作品感到自豪，也对那些致力于保护和传承传统文化的手工艺人充满了敬意。李华【参考范文解析】01应用文写作思路（1）审题判定文体为分享信；（2）因两人是网友关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文体主体部分为介绍一堂传统手工艺体验课及其感想，故本文总体时态
11、定调为一般过去时。02 本文亮点（1）I hope this email finds you well运用无灵主语结构；（2）Last Sunday witnessed .运用无灵主语结构；（3）along wth连同.一起；（4）endeavor努力；（5）impressed me with给我留下深刻印象；（6）each and every每一个；（7）speak volumes of有力地说明，充分地证明。三、分享信：南山观赏秋叶临沂市2024年11月高三教学质量检测假定你是李华，上周五你们班组织了去南山观赏秋叶活动。请你给英国朋友Chris写一封邮件分享此次经历。内容包括：1.活动的过
12、程；2.你的感想。注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Chris, Im writing to share with you the leaf-viewing trip our class organized last Friday.Yours,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段原文本已给出；第二段分享活动的过程（要点1）及自己的感想（要点2）；第三段表达期待。【参考范文】Dear Chris,Im writing to share with you the leaf-viewing trip our
13、class organized last Friday.Early in the morning, greeted by the faintly cool autumn breeze and fueled by an endless aspiration for natural beauty, we embarked on a journey towards Nanshan Mountain.Upon our arrival, incredibly amazing was the scene in front of us, where the maple leaves covering the
14、 mountain were in full bloom, and the golden and red color blended together to form a breathtaking masterpiece. We strolled along the forest path, our feet on the thick layer of leaves, each step creating a rustling sound, like a melody of nature. The journey not only enabled me to appreciate the ma
15、gic of nature but also gave me a profound insight into the warmth and harmony within the team.Looking forward to your visit to China and joining me to explore more natural beauty! (131 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的克里斯：我写信和你分享上周五班级组织的观赏秋叶活动。当天清晨，我们迎着微凉的秋风，带着对自然美景的无限向往，踏上了前往南山的旅程。抵达后，眼前的景象令人震撼：漫山遍野的枫叶如火
16、如荼，金黄、橙红交织成一幅绚丽的画卷。我们漫步在林间小道，脚下是厚厚的落叶，每一步都踏出了沙沙的声响，宛如大自然的乐章。这次活动不仅让我领略到了大自然的鬼斧神工，更让我深刻体会到团队间的温馨与和谐。期待有机会你能来中国，我们一起探索更多自然之美！李华【参考范文解析】01应用文写作思路（1）审题判定文体为分享信；（2）因原文本已给出首句，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文体主体部分为分享观赏秋叶活动及感想，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时。02本文亮点（1）embarked on开始（一段旅程）；（2）Upon our arrival当我们抵达时；（3）incredibly amazing was the scene表语形容词置于句首产生完全倒装结构；（4） were in full bloom盛开；（5）gave me a profound insight into让我深刻理解。 4
