1、读后续写分析与讲解阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Fran the frog was the best chef in the whole area, and all the toads（蟾蜍）and frogs of the area enjoyed coming to her restaurant, which made Fran feel truly proud.One day, Toby came to her restaurant. When Frans fine creations were brought before him, he c
2、omplained, saying that wasnt food, and that what he really wanted was a burger. Fran cameout of the kitchen to see what the problem was, and Toby told her that these dishes werent good enough. This made Fran so angry that she went to the kitchen, came back with a frying pan, and hit Toby on the fore
3、head.Even though Fran realized she should have controlled her temper（脾气），and she kept asking Toby to forgive her, the toad was so angry that he said he could only forgive her if she handed him the frying pan so he could hit her back.Everyone tried to calm Toby down, knowing well that, given his stre
4、ngth, he could easily hurt Fran with that frying pan.Toby would not accept an apology, and Fran felt awful for hitting him, so she tried everything.She gave him d special cream for bruises(瘀伤). Even better than that, she cooked him a beautiful burger!But Toby still insisted he would not be satisfied
5、 until he got to return the blow he had received. It had reached the stage where he was almost getting out of control.Then a very old toad entered the restaurant, walking along with the help of two sticks. Wait, Toby, said the old toad, you can give her a hit after Ive broken your leg. Remember that
6、 you are the reason why I have to walk with these sticks. Toby recognized the old toad. It was Reddit, his old teacher. When Toby was small, Reddit had saved him from a bunch of young hooligans(流氓). In the process, Reddit lost a leg. Toby remembered that it had all happened because he had refused to
7、 obey rules, but he had never thought about Reddit until now.注意：1. 续写词数应为 150左右；2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Toby now realized he was being very unfair to Fran._Toby accepted the apology._1. 根据大意定主旨。2. 根据第二段首句定第一段尾句。3. 填充每部分细节。 读后续写解题步骤：读后续写注意事项：1. 关注动词，通过动词猜意思；2. 关注形容词，通过形容词猜测主人公的心理变化；3. 关注每段的开头结尾4. 结局一定是正向的，猜
8、主旨不能空白卷。根据解题步骤分析本篇文本大意：partwhoFranToby RedditPart I: Para1背景信息 Job:_Feeling_ /Part II:para2故事起因_came the restaurant for meal, feeling_about the food._came out of the kitchen, feeling_, came back with a frying pan,_on_forehead./Part 3para 3-para6故事经过_apologized,_didnt accept._thought he should hit ba
9、ck./Part 4para7-para8故事发展_came to the restaurant with two sticksWhat did Reddit say?_Reddit lost a leg? Reason:_Tobys response:_第一步：根据大意定主旨。大意：Fran 是餐厅老板，别人一直对他做的饭赞誉有加，他也很骄傲。有一天Toby来吃饭，说不好吃，这让他很生气，于是拿煎锅打了Toby，打完她也很后悔，祈求原谅。但是Toby 坚持不原谅，必须要打回去才可以。众人劝阻无果，事情僵持不下。这时候Toby 的老师拄着双拐来了，说：“Toby如果你要打回去，我要先打坏你的双
10、腿，因为我的腿是为了救你才受伤”。Toby想起来了这件事。主旨：对于别人所造成的伤害，别人道歉后我们该如何做？原谅还是以牙还牙？Forgive/forgiveness第二步：根据第二段开头，定首段尾句。Toby 接受道歉，第一段结尾，Fran 道歉，Toby 宽恕/原谅。第三步：填充细节Para1: Toby now realized he was being very unfair to Fran.1. 意识到啥？（意识到犯错是正常的）2. 怎么才是公平？（有错也要给别人改正的机会）3. 这件事具体应该怎么做？（宽恕原谅）Para2: Toby accepted the apology.1.
11、 结局：握手言和，描写细节。2. 主旨升华：宽恕让这个世界更美好。One possible version:Toby now realized he was being very unfair to Fran. Everyone, including himself, makes mistakes sometimes. And if we are to return blow for blow, wound for wound, all we are doing is extending the damage. So, even though his head still hurt and h
12、er thought Fran shad made quite a remarkable mistake with that frying pan, seeing her feeling so sorry, and doing everything she could to put things right,Toby decided to forgive her. Toby accepted the apology. They spent the rest of the evening laughing at what had happened, and enjoying wonderful burgers. And everyone heartily agreed that was a rather better idea than getting into problems with pans. One must recognize his shortcomings and adjust himself to them father than find fault with them. When you forgive, you not only change the past but change the future.
