1、高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、回复信:合作式学习方式反馈(江苏省南京市六校联合体2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联合调研)假定你是李华,外教Jason想了解学生对这学期英语课程中使用的合作式学习方式的反馈,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.合作式学习在你班的开展情况;2.你的体验和感受。参考词汇:合作式学习cooperative learning注意:1.词数80左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jason,I hope youre doing well.Dont hesitate to contact me if you expect further informa
2、tion.Yours,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为现在完成时和一般现在时。2.写作思路:三段论。第一段写开门见山交代写作目的反馈班级的合作学习方式;第二段介绍合作式学习在班级的开展情况(要点1)及自己的体验和感受(要点2);第三段原文本已给出。【参考范文】Dear Jason,I hope youre doing well. Id like to provide some feedback regarding the cooperative learning approach we have adopted in our English course this semester.Co
3、operative learning in our class has progressed smoothly. We are tasked with different assignments and engage in discussions. The method not only enhances our teamwork skills but also makes it accessible for us to voice our opinions freely. Personally, the interaction and collaboration with my peers
4、have gained me a deeper insight into what I have learnt, and boosted my proficiency in effective communication. Cooperative learning, I believe, contributes significantly to creating an atmosphere that maximizes teaching and learning effectiveness. Thank you for your attentive guidance and innovativ
5、e teaching strategies. (110 words)Dont hesitate to contact me if you expect further information.Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的杰森老师:您好!关于这学期我们英语课程采用的合作式学习方式,我在此给您一些反馈。在我们班里,合作式学习进行得非常顺利。老师经常将我们分成小组,共同完成任务和讨论问题。这种方式不仅提高了我们的团队协作能力,也让每个人都有机会表达自己的观点。对我而言,这种学习方式非常有益。通过与同学的交流和合作,我加深了对知识的理解,也学会了如何更有效地与他人沟通。我觉得合作式学习让
6、课堂的教与学变得更加高效。谢谢您的悉心教导和不断创新的教学方法。如果您想要了解更多信息,请务必联系我。李华【参考范文解析】01应用文写作思路(1)审题判定文体为回复信;(2)因原文本开头已给出,故李华身份不必交代;(3)因文体主体部分介绍合作式学习方式的开展情况及体验和感受写,故本文总体时态定调为现在完成时和一般现在时。02本文亮点(1) regarding介词,关于;(2)are tasked with被指派任务;(3) engage in从事,进行;(4)makes it accessible for us to voice our opinions使我们更便于发表自己的看法;(5)gai
7、n me a deeper insight into让我更深入地理解某事;(6)boost my proficiency in提升我对.的熟练程度;(7)contribute significantly to极大地促进;(8)maximize使.最大化。二、通知:“变废为宝”艺术品原创作品大赛(重庆巴蜀中学2025届高考适应性月考卷二)你所在的校艺术社团将举办全校“Trash-to-Art”艺术品原创大赛。请在校英文报上发布一则活动,内容包括:1.大赛的目的、时间和地点;2.参赛作品要求。注意:1.写作词数应为80词左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。NOTICEThe Art Cl
8、ub写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。2.写作思路:三段论。第一段写大赛的目的、时间和地点(要点1);第二段介绍参赛的作品要求(要点2);第三段表达期待。【参考范文】NoticeTo spark creativity, promote environmental conservation, and encourage students to transform discarded materials into unique artistic creations, a school-wide original art competition titled Trash-to-Art
9、 will be scheduled for October 30 in the exhibition hall on the first floor of the library.Entries must be original works that fully utilize waste materials while reflecting principles of environmental protection and innovative thinking. Participants are required to submit their artworks to the Art
10、Club office one weel prior to the competition along with a description outlining their creative concepts. Opportunity never knocks twice. Your exceptional submissions are highly expected. Let us witness environmental protection shining together with art. (105 words)The Art Club【中文翻译】通知为激发创意,倡导环保,鼓励同
11、学们将废旧物品转化为独特艺术品,校艺术社团将于10月30日在图书馆一楼展厅举办全校“变废为宝”艺术品原创大赛。参赛作品需为原创,充分利用废弃材料,体现环保理念与创新思维。作品请于赛前一周提交至艺术社团办公室,并附上创意说明。机会难得。期待您的精彩作品,让环保与艺术同辉!校艺术社团【参考范文解析】01应用文写作思路(1)审题判定文体为通知;(2)因文体是通知,故李华身份不必交代;(3)因文体主体部分为通知即将举办的艺术品原创大赛,故本文总体时态定调为一般将来时和一般现在时。02本文亮点(1) be scheduled for计划安排在.;(2)prior to在.之前;(3)along with
12、除了.之外还有.;(4)Opportunity never knocks twice.机会难得;(5). are highly expected某事是高度期待的。三、感谢信:感谢留学生的热情款待(全国九省联考2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考)假定你是李华,假期你去留学生Tom的家乡游玩时受到了他的热情款待。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.表示谢意;2.回忆难忘的瞬间。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,Thanks again and Im looking forward to seeing you in China soon!
13、Yours,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。2.写作思路:三段论。第一段交代写作目的表示感谢(要点1);第二段回忆难忘的瞬间(要点2);第三段再次表达谢意(原文本已给出)。【参考范文】Dear Tom,I hope this email finds you well! Upon returning home, I found myself still immersed in the pleasant moments we shared together. Words fail to express my gratitude for your warm hospit
14、ality during the vacation, which impressed me with the great beauty and charm of your hometown.In my thought linger those cherished moments when I enjoyed the captivating stories about your hometown as we strolled along the shore, the warmth and satisfaction derived from the delicate cuisine you pre
15、pared for me, as well as the evenings when we spent together gazing up at the starry sky and talking about our future aspiration. All these memories will remain fresh in my heart.Thanks again and Im looking forward to seeing you in China soon!Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的汤姆:见信好!回到家中,我仍沉浸在我们共度的欢乐时光里。非常感谢你在假期
16、中对我的热情款待,让我深刻感受到了你家乡的美丽与魅力。那些难忘的瞬间依旧历历在目:在海边漫步时,你为我讲述的家乡故事;品尝你亲手制作的美食时,那份温馨与满足;还有夜晚我们一同仰望星空,畅谈未来的梦想。这些都将成为我心中宝贵的回忆。再次感谢你,期待不久的将来能再次相见。李华【参考范文解析】01应用文写作思路(1)审题判定文体为感谢信;(2)根据原文本推断两人相识,故李华身份不必交代;(3)因文体主体部分为感谢外国留学生在“我”假期在国外游玩时对自己的热情款待,故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时和一般过去时。02本文亮点(1)I hope this email finds you well运用无灵主语结构;(2)found myself still immersed in发现自己沉浸在.;(3)Words fail to express my gratitude for .言语难以表达我的感激之情;(4)impress me with让我印象深刻;(5)In my thought linger .因主语太长,采用介宾短语置于句首产生完全倒装结构;(6)derived from后置定语,意为“源自”。4