1、高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、回复信：成人礼活动（2020年7月天津卷）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括：（1）成人礼活动内容（成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等）；（2）对活动的感受；（3）对自己未来的展望。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony新冠肺炎 COVID-19Dear Chris， Im so glad to hea
2、r from youYours，Li Jin写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时和一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段交代写信目的介绍学校成人礼活动；第二段写成人礼活动内容（要点1）及活动感受（要点2）；第三段写未来展望（要点3）。【参考范文】Dear Chris，Im so glad to hear from you. Learning that you take a great interest in the coming-of-age ceremony of our school, I would like to provide you with further details.A
3、series of slides revived memories of our growth, from the inexperience upon entering the school to the present maturity. We also viewed a video highlighting the courageous actions of alumni during their fight against COVID-19, whose spirit of selfless dedication profoundly moved each and every one o
4、f us. Participating in the event was not merely a ceremony celebrating my coming of age, but also served as a purification of my soul. Reaching adulthood, as it is, marks the start of a new chapter in my life. Regardless of sunshine or rain, I am prepared to embark on a journey brimming with opportu
5、nities and challenges with a perseverant spirit.Best wishes! (134 words)Yours，Li Jin【中文翻译】亲爱的克里斯：很高兴收到你的来信。你对我们学校的成人礼活动很感兴趣，我这就为你详细介绍一番。活动一开始，我们通过幻灯片回顾了成长的点点滴滴，从入学时的青涩到如今的成熟，一幕幕画面让人感慨万千。我们还观看了校友们在抗疫期间的英勇事迹录像，他们无私奉献的精神深深打动了在场的每一个人。参加这次成人礼不仅是一个庆祝我步入成年的仪式，更是一次心灵的洗礼。步入成年为我翻开了崭新的一页。无论风雨，我将以更加坚韧不拔的态度踏上充满挑
6、战与机遇的人生旅程。祝好！李津【参考范文解析】01应用文写作思路（1）审题判定文体为回复信；（2）因两人是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文体主体部分为介绍成人礼的活动内容和活动感受，故本文总体时态定调为一般过去时和一般现在时。02本文亮点（1） Learning that听说；（2）take a great interest in对.很感兴趣；（3）revived memories of复活.的记忆；（4）each and every one of us重复使用同义词each和every，表示强调作用；（5）serve as作为；（6）as it is=already；（7）Regar
7、dless of sunshine or rain无论风雨；（8）embark on开始；（9）brim with充满。二、邀请信：观看“戏剧之夜”直播（湖州、丽水、衢州2025届高三一模）假定你是李华，你校将举办英语节“戏剧之夜”(Drama Night)活动，并且进行网络直播(live-stream)，请你给英国好友David写一封电子邮件，邀请他观看，内容如下：1.活动介绍；2.观看时间和方式。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear David,Yours,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段
8、交代写信目的发出邀请；第二段介绍（要点1）；第三段写观看的时间和方式（要点2）。【参考范文】Dear David,I hope this email finds you well! Drama Night, an upcoming English festival, will be held in our school, and I am writing to invite you for the live-stream. Featuring classic works by William Shakespeare, one of the greatest literary figures i
9、n the West, along with renowned traditional pieces from China, the event will bridge the gap between Chinese and Western culture. Therefore, it promises not only to be a feast for both eyes and ears, but also a purification of our soul that witnesses personal growth.The Drama Night is scheduled for
10、7 PM on November 20th and will be streamed live online. I will ensure you the link access shortly. Looking forward to your participation! (117 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的大卫：见信好！我校即将举办英语节“戏剧之夜”活动，我写信邀你观看直播。此次活动完全由学生自主策划、执导并演绎，用英语短剧架起中西文化共荣互通的桥梁，既涵盖了西方文学巨匠莎士比亚的经典剧目，也融入了中国广为人知的传统佳作。这必将是一场视觉与听觉的双重盛宴，更是一
11、次心灵的洗礼和成长的见证。此次活动将在11月20日晚上7点开始，并同步进行网络直播。届时我将把直播链接推送给你。期待你的观看！李华【参考范文解析】01应用文写作思路（1）审题判定文体为邀请信；（2）因两人是朋友关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文体主体部分为介绍即将举办的“戏剧之夜”英语节活动并发出邀请，故本文总体时态定调为一般将来时和一般现在时。02本文亮点（1）I hope this email finds you well运用无灵主语结构；（2）featuring .以.为主要内容；（3）along with还有；（4）renowned=famous；（5）bridge the gap
12、between .架起.和.的桥梁；（6）promise to do有望做某事；（7）a feast for both eyes and ears视听盛宴；（8）a purification of our soul净化心灵（心灵的洗礼）；（9）is scheduled for计划安排在.。三、投稿：绝美纤手，亟待所求（云南师大附中2025届高三试题卷）假定你是李华，针对很多高三同学依然严峻的英语书写问题，请你给校刊Opinion栏目写篇短文，呼吁大家高度重视书写并立刻行动起来。要点包括：1.分析同学不重视书写的原因；2.提出改进措施。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相
13、应位置作答。A Beautiful Hand, an Urgent Demand写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段分析原因（要点1）；第二段提出建议（要点2）；第三段总结并发出号召。【参考范文】A Beautiful Hand, an Urgent DemandDuring the increasing academic demands for senior three students, many still encounter challenges in handwriting, which is indeed a concern. Various fact
14、ors account for it. First, some students underestimate the importance of handwriting skills and focus exclusively on finding solutions. Second, the substantial workload often leads them to prioritize speed over quality in their writing. Plus absence of systematic guidance and practice in writing ski
15、lls is also to blame.Graceful handwriting, nevertheless, not only creates a favorable impression on examiners but may also contribute to higher scores. Therefore, its high time that we should place significant emphasis on handwriting and dedicate 10 minutes each day to practicing writing by selectin
16、g a copybook that suits us.Every second counts in Senior 3, though, handwriting demands attention. Let us practice our handwriting and secure additional points for gaokao! (139 words)【中文翻译】绝美纤手，亟待所求在高三的紧张学习中，许多同学在英语书写上依然存在问题，这实在令人担忧。究其原因，一是部分同学认为书写不重要，只需答对题目即可；二是平时作业量大，为赶时间而忽视了书写质量；三是缺乏系统的书写指导和练习。然而
17、，优美的书写不仅能给阅卷老师留下良好的印象，还可能因此多得几分。因此，我呼吁大家务必高度重视英语书写。我们可以每天抽出10分钟时间，用一本适合自己的字帖练习书写。高三时间宝贵，但书写不容忽视。让我们即刻行动起来，努力提升英语书写水平，为高考加分助力！【参考范文解析】01应用文写作思路（1）审题判定文体为投稿；（2）因文体是投稿，故正文中李华的身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为分析原因并提出建议，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。02本文亮点（1）increasing academic demands越来越高的学业压力；（2）account for对.解释；（3）substantial大量的；（4）prioritize speed over quality相比质量更注重速度；（5）plus此外；（6）absence of缺乏.；（7）is also to blame也是应受责备的；（8）nevertheless然而，在句中用作插入语；（9）creates a favorable impression on给某人好印象；（10）contribute to促使，导致；（11）place significant emphasis on重视某事；（12）Every second counts每一秒都很重要；（13）though=however。4
