1、2024年初中英语写作抓好这5关涵盖8篇话题写作（建议收藏）01确定文章结构在写作之前，首先要确定整篇文章的行文结构，通常情况下，最合理的一般是三段式叙事。即在开始部分说明文章要点和核心问题。正文部分围绕主题展开叙述或讨论。结尾部分通常需要对全文的总结和概括。文章结构设计的时候要注意，全文中心突出，段落之间必须相互关联，内容完整，整体流畅。前后文需要相互呼应，舍弃与主题无关的内容。02确定主题句在了解了行文结构之后，就需要准备一句话作为整篇文章的主题和中心，主旨在文章中起到了“画龙点睛”的作用，通常是在文章开篇，整篇文章都是这句主题句的延伸。主题句需要注意这两点：归纳文章中要写的几个要点。提炼
2、出一句概括性的话。03写作技巧最后也是很重要的一点就是写作技巧，在开始讲写作技巧之前，大家要明白，技巧总归只是技巧，虽然可以让文章整体逻辑清楚，运用更好的句型，但除此之外，很重要的一点就是：积累。作文是英语考试中考察学生综合能力的部分，是需要学生一定的阅读量和单词基础。开篇主旨设问将会变得更有说服力I think its very important for us to do sports. Why? Because its good for our health andstudy.I think its very important for us to protect environment
3、. Why? Because its good for living.I think its very important for us to learn English.Why? Because its the most-widely used language in the world.从一般现象到作者本身Different people have different _, but / and I have / prefer _。正文要站在自己的角度表述观点Inmyopinion,weshouldpaymuchmoreattentionontheweaksubjects!句子之间需要衔接I
4、leftmypenathome.Whatwasworse,thedrugstorewasclosedthatday.问题阐述用形容词句型普通级句型Theenvironmentisbad.比较级句型Theenvironmentisgettingworseandworse.Theenvironmentisgettingmuchworsethanbefore.最高级句型Ihaveneverseentheworseenvironment.表达作用多用it句式Readingisagoodwaytorelaxmyself. WatchingmoviesisawonderfulwaytolearnEngli
5、sh.增强情感转感叹Howbeneficialitisforustoread!Howimportantitisforstudentstodosports.事情到感情句型IwasveryhappythatIgotanAinEnglishlastterm.ItmakesmefeelhappythatIgotanAinEnglishlastterm.形容词句型升级Itwasanunusualexperienceinmylife.Itwasoneofthemostunusualexperienceinmylife.活用there be结合定从Manyreasonsmademelikereading.T
6、herearemanyreasonswhyIenjoyreadin词汇变化make更有feelImadeaprogressinEnglish.Ifeelproud.ItmakesmefeelproudtomakeaprogressinEnglish.连词不再用and增补 not onlybut also, as well as进阶whatsmore / worse,furthermore转折while,however喜欢不再like用befondof, enjoy,becrazyabout提出措施尽量不用should用suppose, hadbetter, havenochoicebut, i
7、tsourdutyto结尾1.各种号召事不宜迟Dontputitoff.2.各种越来越多多益善the+比较级+主谓，the+比较级+主谓越就越Thebetterwetakecareoftheenvironment,themorebeautifultheworldwillbe.3.名言警句学习类Practicemakesperfect.运动类Romewasnotbuiltinaday.环保类Nothingisimpossibletoawillingmind.爱好类Interestisthebestteacher.0430篇话题作文第一篇：【写作要求】现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学
8、生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。内容包括：1.地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。 My Low-carbon LifeThe environme
9、ntal pollution is worse and worse today.【优秀满分范文】My Low-carbon LifeThe environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.Firstly, I often walk to school. It can re
10、duce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.第二篇：【写作要求】每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友！你
11、可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我”。请你以Friends为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，可以围绕主题适当展开，阐述交友的重要性和好处。【优秀满分范文】FriendsWhat are friends? We often talk about the topic with others. I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble. Dont forget the saying, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Friends can tel
12、l you your mistakes, though what they say is hard for you to listen to. You can share your happiness, trouble and worry with friends. Someone also says, “You cant walk any step without a friend.” So I think friends are very important to us. I would like to make as many friends as possible.第三篇：【写作要求】
13、最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers?”为题，写一篇短文。原因赞成帮助他人是美德；帮助他人就是帮助自己；反对怕陷入麻烦；怕被误解；你的观点?（至少两点）要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；3）词数：100左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。参考词汇：美德virtueShould We Help Strangers?Recently our class had a discussion
14、 about whether we should help strangersDifferent students have different opinions【优秀满分范文】Should We Help Strangers?Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangersDifferent students have different opinionsSome think we should try to help strangers Helping others is a virtue，
15、and helping others is helping ourselvesWe may come across some trouble and need others help some dayIf everyone isnt willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，its hard to imagine what our world will be likeHowever，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us troubleSomet
16、imes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindnessIn my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into troubleIf everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love第四篇：【写作要求】某英语报开展“H
17、ow to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛，请你根据提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下：1. 尽管我们常常感到有压力，但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松；2. 我们应该足够细心，因为“失之毫厘，谬以千里”；3. 也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡，试着安排好自己的空余时间；4. 任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习，我们会取得大的进步。5. 有问题时，我们要求：1. 内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；2. 词数90个左右；3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2句话补充
18、完整。【优秀满分范文】How to Deal with Our Study ProblemsAlthough we often feel stressed, we should find suitable ways to deal with stress.We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel relaxed. We should be careful enough, because “a miss is as good as a mile”. We should also achieve a balance b
19、etween schoolwork and hobbies. Try to plan your spare time well. Dont lose heart at any time. You will make great progress through hard work.When having problems, we can ask people around us for help. Its not wise to keep our worries to ourselves.第五篇：【写作要求】学校英语社团在举办征文比赛，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇题为“The Person W
20、ho Has Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点如下：1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈，她四十几岁；2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题，并建议我如何解决它们；3. 作为一名医生，她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班，把她的大部分时间都奉献给了工作；4. 所以，我认为她不仅是位好妈妈，也是名好医生。5. 我希望 要求：1. 内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；2. 词数90个左右；3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象，用2-3句话补充完整。【优秀满分范文】The Person Who Has Influenced Me MostMy mother is the person w
21、ho has influenced me most.She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she cant be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother
22、 but also a good doctor.I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. Shed better have more time to relax herself.第六篇：【写作要求】假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请据此在制定的位置上，以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题，为某中学生英文报写一篇报道，内容要点如下：1. 目的：为贫困地区的孩子们筹款2. 10月23日，星
23、期六3. 路径：学校市中心4. 简况：学生把自己分成四人一组，出发前计划好了一切，步行很艰辛，但活动过程中大家互相帮助，互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下，筹得善款5万多元。5. 感受：每个人都很累，但都很高兴，因为注意：1. 报道须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；2. 第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；3. 词数80个左右。【优秀满分范文】Walk for children in poor areasNot long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poo
24、r areas.It was on Saturday, 23 rd October. We walked from the school to the centre of the city. Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything well. It was a hard (tough) work. But during the walk, we supported and helped each other. With the help of many people, we
25、 raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the end.We all felt tired, but we were very happy. Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team spirit.第七篇：【写作要求】“保护环境，人人有责”，你想成为一名绿色使者吗？请行动起来吧！其实，环保就在我们身边。请以“How to Be a Greener Person” 为题，写一篇短文。注意：1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
26、2.短文词数90 左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：draw, both sides of paper, plastics, water tap, collect, waste, can, sortHow to Be a Greener Person?Its our duty to protect our environment around us. 【优秀满分范文】How to be a greener personIts our duty to protect the inviyonment around us.When we go to school, we should r
27、ide a bike or take a bus. When we go out for activities, we shouldnt step on the grass. We cant draw everywhere. When we go shopping, wed better use a cloth bag. At home we can save water and electricity. When we leave a room, we should turn off the ligts. At school we can collect wast paper and rec
28、ycle things, such as bottles, cans and plastic bags. We shoudnt listen to pop music or spit in pulic.Lets do something to protect our environment.第八篇：【写作要求】“灿烂星空，谁是真的英雄?”做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄，为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄，在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄一Dr Norman Bethune1.Natlonality(国籍): Canada2.Hobby: taking photos3.Main stories: saved
29、 a lot of Chinese people; opened hospitals; invented medical tools二Liu Xiang1.Nationality: China2.Hobby: singing3.Main stories: won the first4.Olympic gold medal in the men s 110m hurdles event in Athens; set a world record in the same event in Lausanne从上面信息卡中选择一位英雄，以The Hero in My Heart为题写一篇短文。要求：包
30、含所选信息卡上的内容；适当拓展，如学英雄的感想、行动等；不能出现表明你身份的信息；词数80左右，不含已给出部分。The Hero in My HeartAs we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, 【优秀满分范文1】The Hero in My HeartAs we know， most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart. He was a great doctor from Can
31、ada.Dr Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938， he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didnt stop to take care of his own injured hand and died.I am deeply moved by
32、his stories. So Ill work hard today and do my best to help others.【优秀满分范文2】The Hero in My HeartAs we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me， Liu Xiang is the hero in my heart. He is a famous Chinese sportsman.Liu Xiang is good at running. In 2004， he won his first Olympic gold medal i
33、n the men，s 110m hurdles event in Athens. Then, he set a world record in the same event in Lausanne.Besides training and taking part in competitions, Liu Xiang also likes singing and he sings well.With his hard work, he is winning competitions one after another. This encourages me to study harder from now on.
