1、 2020 年高考英语真题模拟试题专项汇编（年高考英语真题模拟试题专项汇编（17）短文改错）短文改错 1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（） ，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。 Today I tried cooking a simply dish my
2、self. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned
3、off the stove, I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. Not that way, my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didnt tum out as I had wished. 2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改
4、。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. Im glad to know that youve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. Im surely youll have a good time.
5、 Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in
6、China. See you sooner. 3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our fami
7、lies. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad dont like the soup and I dont enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if were forced eat things, we may be
8、come ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation. 4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修
9、改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 My school holds a sports meeting in every year, which usually lasts three days. All of our students are fond of it because we dont need to have classes. We are allowed participate in the wonderful games and go to watch them. Whenever I watche
10、d my classmates rushing towards the finish line, I cant help yell out “come on”. That I like most is the relay race, which is extremely excited. The athletes compete fierce during the race and all the students shout loudly. The school sports: meeting brings me so many unforgettable memory. 5.假定英语课上老
11、师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 As the Internet becomes the more and more popular, some students cant help play online games or chat
12、ting. It was not only a problem of wasting time, but also a seriously problem which does harm to their health. Which teachers should do first is to find out what makes them addicting to computer games. Lack of love from his parents? Poor test scores? Parents can have a heart-to-heart talk with them.
13、 Secondly, teacher should help them build up their confidence but make them interested in studies. Thirdly, find something else for them to do instead playing computer games. 6.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(
14、)划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 Every time we get on a plane, were asked to neither turn off our phones or change it to flight mode - its for “security reasons”. But actually, have to turn our phones off on a plane is a service issue, not a safe o
15、ne. When we speak on our phones in air, the aircrafts radios can be disturb. Pilots can hear this interference in their headphone. Though speaking on a phone during a flight isnt dangerous, but it isnt a good idea. Now things are beginning to change. The breakthrough could be “pico cells”, that are
16、small cell towers on the plane. One day, perhaps, we will be chatting in the air as many as we chat on the ground. 7.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2.只允许修改 10
17、 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。 It is three years now since I graduate from No. 1 High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed this precious da
18、y greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places. 答案以及解析答案以及解析 1.答案： Today I tried cooking a s s i im
19、ply mple dish myself. I like eating frying fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick chopsticks .
20、After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off on the stove, I waited patiently unless until/till the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. Not that way, my mom tried to stop us me but failed. She was right. It didnt tum out as I had wished. 解析： 第一处:simpl
21、y 改为 simple。 形容词和副词混用。 此处修饰名词 dish,故用形容词 simple。 第二处:frying 改为 fried,非谓语动词误用。 过去分词作定语,表示动作的完成或被动,此处表示被 炒过的西红柿鸡蛋,故用过去分词作定语。现在分词作定语表示进行或主动。 第三处:删除 to。不定式符号多用。情态动词后接动词原形。 第四处:preparing 改为 prepare。非谓语动词误用。不定式符号后跟动词原形。 第五处:but 改为 and,连词误用。此处表示动作的先后,是顺承关系,不是转折关系。故将 but 改 为 and。 第六处:chopstick 改为 chopsticks
22、。名词单复数误用。chopstick 意为筷子,常以复数形式出现。 第七处:off 改为 on。固定搭配误用。turn off 表示关掉,此处意思为打开厨灶,故用 turn on。 第八处:unless 改为 until 或 till,连词误用。此处表示我耐心地等到油热。此处引导时间状语从 句,表示直到.为止。 第九处:pan 前加 the。冠词漏用。此处特指上文提到的平底锅。 第十处:us 改为 me。人称代词误用。根据上文提到的I my mom可知,此处表示我妈妈尝试 阻止我,但失败了。 2.答案： Thank you for your letter, what which really
23、made me happy. Im glad to know that youve come to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. Im surely sure youll have a good time. Actually, I start started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for but / yet I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for
24、summer vacations vacation . Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such so that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours your / you yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner soon . 解析： 第一处:what 改为 which,关系代词误用。 在非限制性定语从句中,指代前面的事物,且在从 句中作主语,关系代词只能用 which。 第二处:come 后
25、加 to。固定搭配误用。come to +地点名词,表示来到某处。 第三处:surely 改为 sure。形容词和副词混用。根据句中的Im可知,此处应用形容词。 第四处:start 改为 started。时态误用。根据时间状语when I was seven years old可知,此处应用 一般过去时。 第五处:for 改为 but/yet。连词误用。根据句意可知,前后两句是转折关系。 第六处:vacations 改为 vacation。名词单复数误用。summer vacation暑假,单数概念。 第七处:such 改为 so,连词误用。so that(引出结果)因此,所以,在此处引导结果
26、状语从句。 第八处:删除 every day 前的 on,介词多用。every day每天,副词短语作时间状语,前面不使用介 词。 第九处:yours 改为 your/you。代词误用。动名词前面通常使用形容词性物主代词或者代词的宾 格作它的逻辑主语。 第十处:sooner 改为 soon。 副词比较级误用。 根据句意可知,此处无比较含义,故应用副词的原级。 3.答案：My mom is really concerning concerned with the health of everyone in our families family . In order to make surely
27、 sure all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the a bowl of egg soup while I had have to eat an apple. My dad dont doesnt like the soup and I dont enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if were forced to eat things, we may become il
28、l. But he she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what that is provided by Mom with appreciation. 解析： 第一处:concerning 改为 concerned,形容词误用。此处表示主语(My mom)的状态,应使用 -ed 形容词,表示关心的,关切的。 第二处:families 改为 family。名词单复数误用。family 表示整体时,多作单数看待;指多个家庭 成员时,多作复数看待。此处
29、指我和父母的家,故看作一个整体。 第三处:surely 改为 sure。搭配错误。make sure 为固定搭配,表示确保。 第四处:删除 and。连词多用。逗号前为状语,逗号后为主句,两者之间不用 and 连接。 第五处:the 改为 a,冠词误用。这里泛指一碗鸡蛋汤,故用不定冠词。 第六处:had 改为 have,时态误用。全文中心时态为一般现在时。 第七处:dont 改为 doesnt。主谓不一致。主语为第三人称单数,此处应用 doesnt。 第八处:eat 前加 to,不定式符号漏用。be forced to do sth.被迫做某事。 第九处:he 改为 she,代词误用。此处指代
30、my mom,应用 she。 第十处:what 改为 that,关系代词误用。 先行词被 all, every, any, much, little(少), few, no 等修饰时, 关系代词用 that。 4.答案： My school holds a sports meeting in every year, which usually lasts three days. All of our us students are fond of it because we dont need to have classes. We are allowed to participate in
31、the wonderful games and or go to watch them. Whenever I watched watch my classmates rushing towards the finish line, I cant help yell yelling out “come on”. That What I like most is the relay race, which is extremely excited exciting . The athletes compete fierce fiercely during the race and all the
32、 students shout loudly. The school sports: meeting brings me so many unforgettable memory memories . 解析：1. 删除 meeting 后的 in。由 every 构成的短语作时间状语时，前面不用介词。 2. our 改为 us。考查代词。此处指我们学生，包括我自己，students 做 us 的同位语，又因为 是跟 在介词后，故用宾格形式 us 3. allow 后加 to。考查动词固定用法。allowsb. to do sth.允许某人做某事。 4. and 改为 or 考查连词。根据语境可
33、知，前后两个动作表示选择关系，去参加比赛或者观看 比赛。 5. watched 改为 watch。考查动词时态。根据全文语境，并结合后半句句中的 cant 可知，此 处 应用一般现在时。 6. yell 改为 yelling。考查固定搭配。cant help doing sth.情不自禁做某事。 7. That 改为 What。查名词性从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导主语从句，what 在从句中作 tke 的宾语，表示“我最喜欢的” 。 8. excited 改为 exciting。 考查形容词。 此处指接力赛是激动人心的， exciting 意为 “令人激动 的” ， 通常修饰物，excte
34、d 意为“感到激动、兴奋” ，通常修饰人。 9. fierce 改为 fiercely。考查副词。修饰动词应用副词形式，故用 fiercely 修饰动词 compete。 10. memory 改为 memories。考查名词单复数。memory 当“回忆”讲为可数名词，many 后需 接名 词复数形式。 5.答案： As the Internet becomes the more and more popular, some students cant help play playing online games or chatting. It was is not only a probl
35、em of wasting time, but also a seriously serious problem which does harm to their health. Which What teachers should do first is to find out what makes them addicting addicted to computer games. Lack of love from his their parents? Poor test scores? Parents can have a heart-to-heart talk with them.
36、Secondly, teacher teachers should help them build up their confidence but and make them interested in studies. Thirdly, find something else for them to do instead of playing computer games. 解析： 1 the 去掉 考查固定短语句意：互联网变得越来越流行 本句中越来越使用 more and more， the 多余 故 the 去掉 2 play 改为 playing 考查动词搭配cant help doi
37、ng 禁不住 故 play 改为 playing 3 was 改为 is 考查动词时态根据整篇文章时态以及本句时态，得知此处应使用一般现 在时 故 was 改为 is 4 seriously 改为 serious 考查形容词 形容词修饰名词 problem 故 seriously 改为 serious 5 Which 改为 What 考查关系代词本句主语是 what teachers should do first， 此从句缺 少主语， 又引导主语从句， 应使用引导词 what 故 Which 改为 What 6addicting 改为 addicted 考查动词过去分词做宾语补足语动词 ad
38、dict 和宾语 them 是逻 辑上的被动关系， 应使用过去分词形式 故 addicting 改为 addicted 7 his 改为 their 考查代词句意：他们缺少父母的爱， 应使用 their 代指 students 故 his 改为 their 8teacher 改为 teachers 考查名词teacher 是可数名词，不能直接在句子中做成分， 又根 据句意此处老师应是多个的， 应用复数形式 故 teacher 改为 teachers 9but 改为 and 考查连词句意：老师应该帮助他们建立信心，并且使他们对学习感兴趣， 前后是并列关系， 不是转折 故 but 改为 and 1
39、0 instead 后加 of 考查固定短语修饰动名词 playing computer games，用 instead of 表示： 而不是 故 instead 后加 of 6.答案： Every time we get on a plane, were asked to neither either turn off our phones or change it them to flight mode - its for “security reasons”. But actually, have having to turn our phones off on a plane is a
40、 service issue, not a safe safety one. When we speak on our phones in the air, the aircrafts radios can be disturb disturbed . Pilots can hear this interference in their headphone headphones . Though speaking on a phone during a flight isnt dangerous, but it isnt a good idea. Now things are beginnin
41、g to change. The breakthrough could be “pico cells”, that which are small cell towers on the plane. One day, perhaps, we will be chatting in the air as many much as we chat on the ground. 解析：本文是说明文，介绍了在飞机上，要求我们关机或者将飞机调到飞行模式。现在由于 微基站技术的突破，也许有一天我们能够在飞机上聊天。 1.考查并列连词。句意：每次上飞机时，我们都被要求要么关机，要么把手机调到飞行模式。 根据
42、句意，此处是 eitheror 并列结构，意思为“要么要么，或者或者”。故 neither 改 为 either。 2.考查代词。前面提到“turn off our phones”，phones 是复数，应用 them 指代。故 it 改为 them。 3.考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构，have to turn our phones off on a plane 在句子中作主语，应 用动名词作主语。故 have 改为 having。 4.考查名词。句意：但实际上，在飞机上关机是服务问题，而不是安全问题。此处“安全问题” 是名词修饰名词，故 safe 改为 safety。 5.考查固定短语。 i
43、n the air“在空中”，是固定短语。故 in 后面加上 the。 6.考查被动语态。句意：当我们在空中打电话时，飞机上的无线电可能会受到干扰。主语 the aircrafts radios 和 disturb 之间为逻辑上的被动关系，前面有 be 动词，因此 disturb 应用过去分 词，构成被动结构。故 disturb 改为 disturbed。 7.考查名词单复数。前面 pilots 是复数，headphone 相应地用复数形式。故 headphone 改为 headphones。 8.考查从属连词。句意：虽然在飞行中打电话并不危险，但这不是一个好主意。在让步状语从 句中，alth
44、ough 和 but 不能连用。故去掉 but。 9.考查非限制性定语从句。分析句子结构，“that are small cell towers on the plane”是非限制性定 语从句，修饰先行词 pico cells，指物，在从句中作主语；that 不能引导非限制性定语从句，应 用 which。故 that 改为 which。 10.考查固定短语。 根据句意“也许有一天， 我们会在空中聊天， 就像在地面上聊天一样。 ”as much as 表示“ 像.一样”。 故 many 改为 much。 7.答案： It is three years now since I graduate g
45、raduated from No. 1 High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on in held a get-together, which took us a long time to prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well good time for all of us. We all enjoyed this precious day greatly, remember remembering the tim
46、e we spent together and the people they we were familiar with. It was a pity which that some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card cards from different places. 解析： 【小题 1】graduate- graduated 连词 since 后面的从句使用过去时，前面主句使用现在 完成时，或
47、者一般现在时。 【小题 2】on- in 固定词组 In the class 在班级 【小题 3】timeto 固定词组:sth take sb some time to do 某人花费时间做某事 【小题 4】去掉 the 固定词组 get in touch with sb 与某人取得联系 【小题 5】well-good 用形容词 good 作为定语修饰名词 【小题 6】remember-remembering 因为与主语 we 构成主动关系，使用现在分词做伴随状 语。 【小题 7】they-we 上文的主语是 we,所以这里也使用 we. 【小题 8】which-that 本句的 it 是形式主语，真正的主语是 that 引导的主语从句。 【小题 9】去掉 to 副词 abroad 做状语修饰动词 go。Go abroad 出国。 【小题 10】card-cards 来自不同地方的卡片应该使用复数形式。
