1、 1 应用文慰问信写作及实战演练应用文慰问信写作及实战演练 一、慰问信写作：一、慰问信写作：1.表示安慰；表示安慰； 2. 提出建议或措施；提出建议或措施；3. 表达愿望或祝福。表达愿望或祝福。 慰问信是向遇到挫折、失败、生病、愁苦等的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此类书信感情要真诚、 尽量以乐观的口吻减轻遭受者的烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方对日后的生活或学习充满信心。 二、慰问信常用句型二、慰问信常用句型 1. I was (awfully/extremely/excessively) sorry to hear/learn that youre trapped in bad mood, which i
2、s because you didnt make it in the driving test. 2. I just cant tell you how sorry I was when I was informed of your sudden illness in your new school. 3. Im sorry to learn youre having difficulty learning ancient Chinese poems. However, theres no need to feel upset about it. Id like to offer you so
3、me suggestions. 4. Having known that you are under painful state and great pressure now, Im writing to express my great comfort to you. 5. Upon/On hearing the bad news that ., I felt seized by a burst of sadness/worry/sorrow/grief. 6. 无灵主语句 My sorrow is beyond words for hearing you have trouble gett
4、ing along with your classmates. 7. 无灵主语句 Words fail me to convey my worry when I heard that your left leg got badly injured in an car accident. 8. Its normal that you feel it challenging to fit in with the new school due to cultural difference and new surroundings. 9. It cant be better if you can sh
5、are your experiences with others, thus helping them become familiar with you in a short period of time. 10. Actually, theres no need to worry about it. Such problem is not uncommon among Chinese language learners. 11. If there is anything you need me to do, dont hesitate to let me know/dont hesitate
6、 to contact me. 12. Remember, I wont be far away/I will always be here if you need any help! 13. I hope you can find my encouragement helpful. Best wishes. 14. If I can be of any assistance to you, I hope youll let me know immediately/instantly. 15. Hope you can have yours troubles removed soon. 16.
7、 Were hoping for your quick return to health./Were looking forward to your speedy and full recovery. 三、优秀范本 假定你是李华，你校留学生 Jacky 在学习中国古诗的过程中有困难，心情很沮丧，发 来邮件向你求助。请给他回一封信，内容如下：1. 表示安慰；2. 提出建议； Dear Jacky, Im sorry to learn youre having difficulty learning ancient Chinese poems. However, theres no need to
8、 feel upset about it. Id like to offer you some suggestions.（表安慰）（表安慰） 2 To begin with, read an ancient Chinese poem over and over again, which can make it easy for you to understand it. Besides, youd better learn some background information about poem, thus helping you discover the hidden meaning t
9、he poem conveys.【More importantly, its beneficial to watch a TV program called Chinese Poetry Conference, where poem lovers exchange their experience of learning ancient Chinese poems.】(几点建议) Hopefully, youll have fun learning ancient Chinese poems.（表祝愿） Yours, Li Hua 四、仿写借鉴: 假定你是班长李华，本学期你们班来了一个新西兰交
10、换生 Alice。由于环境变化和文 化差异，她感到很难适应新环境，也无法融入新班级。请你给她写一封信，内容如下： 1. 表示安慰； 2. 提出建议。 Dear Alice, _(得知你心情沮丧我很难过). However, _( 没必要为此难过). Its normal that you find it difficult to fit in with the new class _(因为) cultural differences and strange surrounding. _(我给你一些建议). _, _(积极参加不同的 活动是有益的). In this way, not only
11、will you enjoy yourself but you can make friends. _, it cant be better if you can share your stories or opinions with others, thus helping them become familiar with you. May you fit in soon. Yous, Li Hua 五、慰问信赏析： ）一）假定你是李华，你的同班同学王刚的家乡遭受台风(Typhoon Mujigae)的袭击，洪水毁坏了家 园。你作为班长给他写一封信，内容如下：1. 表示安慰和关心；2. 提
12、供帮助。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 3 _ _ （二）假定你是李华，你班来自美国的交换生 Peter 生病住院了。请给他发封邮件，内容包括： 1.表示关心 2.提供帮助 3.祝愿康复。 Dear Peter, Knowing that you had your leg severely injured accidentally in the football match, I am writing to extend sincere pity and care for you. How is your leg? You must have suffered from the unbearab
13、le pain when the accident happened. But you were brave enough not to let out a cry, which is admirable. To our relief, you have been discharged from （discharge v. 通知出院）the hospital and are recovering well at home. As for the lessons you have missed, I am willing to help you make them up. I wish you
14、a speedy recovery.(100 字) Best, Li Hua (三)假如你是李华， 你的美国笔友 Mike 来信说他现在心情很不好， 因为在上周结束的校篮球比赛中， 他所在的班级篮球队以一分之差输了。请你给他写一封信，内容如下：1. 表示安慰；2. 提出建议。 Dear Mike, Im very sorry to hear that your team lost the basketball match last weekend. Its understandable for you to be in a bad mood. However, if you can adopt
15、 different perspectives, the loss may be a blessing. First, its normal to lose in a basketball match, for you can either win or lose.【If youve tried your best, why not lift your spirits to face up to the result?】Anyway, the essence(本质) of competition lies not in victory but in participation. Besides
16、, you can also benefit from your loss by figuring out your strengths and weaknesses. I hope you can find my encouragement helpful. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua (四)假设你叫李华，你的澳洲朋友 David 参加汉语水平考试（HSK）未能通过。请你写一封信给他，内容包 括: 1. 表示安慰； 2. 提出建议。 Dear David, 4 Im sorry to hear that you failed to pass HSK. I hope
17、that the unexpected failure wont let you down, for I have still been amazed by the excellent Chinese you spoke when we first met. As we know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience. Personally, I think youd better pay close attention to the formal use of
18、Chinese words and expressions, which really count. Meanwhile, you may as well watch more Chinese materials as much as you can afford. More importantly, you should learn from the mistakes that you have made. Anyhow, youve already made great progress in your learning of Chinese. Good luck next time. Y
19、ous, Li Hua 仿写借鉴参考答案：仿写借鉴参考答案：1. Im sorry to know youre depressed. 2. theres no need to feel upset about it. 3. owing to/because of 4. Ill offer you some suggestions. 5. To begin with, it is beneficial to get involved in various activities. 6. Besides 实战演练： Dear Wang Gang, Were awfully sorry to hear
20、 that a horrible and severe Typhoon Mujigae hit your hometown and your house is in ruins. I, on behalf of our class, express our most sincere pity and care for you. Thinking about your present situation, we cant wait to make every bit of our effort to help you. Weve made a donation of some money, expecting it can help you go through the difficulty. As for the lessons you have missed, I am willing to help you make them up. Hopefully, youll be back soon. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua
