1、 作文讲评作文讲评-寻求建议信寻求建议信 第一节 应用文写作（满分15分） 假设你是李华，自从进入高中后，为了不影响 你的学习，你的父母就不让你做家务，在家里你 父母也不敢大声说话，因此，你感到很压抑，但 不知道如何解决该问题。请你据此给你校英文报 编辑写一封信，寻求建议。 注意：词数80左右。 _ _ _ _ _ Appreciate the following writing 同类文章欣赏同类文章欣赏 Dear Miss Wang, Im a student from Huzhou Senior High School. I have a problem. Im not very good
2、 at communicating with people. Although I try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely sometimes. I do want to change this situation, but I dont know how. I would be grateful if you could give me some advice. Yours Xiao Dong 第一段开门见山指出写作目的，
3、第一段开门见山指出写作目的， 自我介绍： Im a student from. Im ., a Senior One student. 写信目的 1.Im writing for your advice. 2. Im writing to ask for your advicesuggestions 3. Would you please give me some advice/suggestion 3. Would you mind me asking for your advice? 4. I would be grateful if you could give me some advi
4、ce. 第二段列举遇到的问题。 （主题句） I have some problems I face/meet some problems nowadays. 列举问题：列举问题： 1. 一方面一方面另一方面另一方面 For one thing.and for another (thing) 2. 第一，第一，；其次，；其次，；最后；最后 First of all, .Secondly,.Finally,. 3. 首先首先, 其次其次最后最后 First of all/ To begin with. Second (ly) / Besides/ Whats more. finally 第三段：再
5、次表达自己想要解决问题的愿第三段：再次表达自己想要解决问题的愿 望望 1.I do want to change this situation, but I dont know how 2. I know how they feel, but I dont expect our family life goes this way. What should I do? 注意书信体应用文的格式注意书信体应用文的格式 1. 称呼 Dear Sir/Madam,Dear+名字 2.正文 3. 表达感谢/期待/祝福 Thank you for your time! Looking forward to
6、your reply Best wishes! 信尾署名 Yours, Li Hua 第一节 应用文写作（满分15分） 假设你是李华，自从进入高中后，为了不影响 你的学习，你的父母就不让你做家务，在家里你 父母也不敢大声说话，因此，你感到很压抑，但 不知道如何解决该问题。请你据此给你校英文报 编辑写一封信，寻求建议。 注意：词数80左右。 _ _ _ _ _ Im Li Hua, a Senior One student. Im writing for your advice. Since I entered the high school, Ive sensed some changes a
7、t home that really bothered me. For one thing, whenever I try to help my parents with some housework, theyll ask me to go back to my study. For another, they dare not make any noise at home, fearing it would make me unable to put my heart into my study. Dear Sir/Madam, I know how they feel, but I do
8、nt expect our family life goes this way. What should I do? Thank you for your time! Yours, Li Hua 亮点 words/phrases sense 意识到 be aware of/ realize bother 困扰upset dare 敢 help sb with sth 在.帮助某人 go back to 回到. put ones heart into 专心，集中于. Since与现在完成时连用。 亮点句型important sentences 1. Since I entered the hig
9、h school, Ive sensed some changes at home that really bothered me.(That 引导定语从句） 2. whenever I try to help my parents with some housework, theyll ask me to go back to my study. (whenever 引导的时间状语从句） 3. For another, they dare not make any noise at home, fearing it would make me unable to put my heart into my study.（v-ing 作伴随状语） 仝雅欣仝雅欣 刘文婧刘文婧 陈欣怡陈欣怡 殷庚怡殷庚怡
